Dawnika, Aaliyah, and the Caribbean

chapter one: the begining

Disclaimer- I don’t own potc or any movie/show out there. I just own my two characters. Oh and myself. Hehehe.

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Ring, ring, ring. The telephone rang.
“Hello,” Dawnika said in a tired voice, but nobody said nothing. “Um…hello.” Still no answer. “Punks. Think they can just prank call people. What time is it?” She looked at the clock. It was 8:25. “Oh no. I slept to late!” She hurried to her room to get some socks and her shoes. “I still have to get popcorn, soda, candy, and ice-cream before Aaliyah gets here.

Aaliyah was Dawnika’s favorite niece. They always spent a lot of time together. Aaliyah’s mom asked Dawnika if Aaliyah would be able to stay over for spring break while she went on a trip, and of course she said yes. So here she was trying to hurry up and get to Aaliyah’s house and pick her up. She grabbed her keys to the Nissan Altima. A few minutes later...

“Where have you been,” Aaliyah said getting in the car. “You were suoppse to be here 2 hours ago.”

“My bad. I was tired. I had a lot of work to get done today,” She said driving out of the drive-way.

“Yeah. Whatever,” Aaliyah said under her breath. “So what should we watch first?
Pirates 1, or pirates 2?”

“Wouldn‘t it be better to watch the first one?”

“Well, you don‘t have to watch the first one you know.”

“But it would make more since.”

“So,” Aaliyah said crossing her arms.

“Stop being such a baby, and get out. Were at Blockbuster.” The two got out of the car and went inside. “You get Pirates 1 and 2, and I’ll get some snacks?”

“The ones to rent or the ones to buy?”

“The ones to buy, Aaliyah,” Dawnika said going to the snack section.
Aaliyah went to the back of the store and looked for Pirates of the Caribbean. She saw a man in front of the Pirate movies she wanted. She reached for the movie, but a hand slapped it away. She looked up at the man, mean-mugging him. “Boy. I know, you ain’t crazy.”

“But I…,” the man said before she cut him off.

“I know you best better get up out of my sight, Before I start swinging on you.” (she can be a little ghetto when she gets angry) “I’ll pop yo ass before you can cry for help.”

“No, no. I meant no offence. You see, that DVD you were about to grab is very special.”

“Ya. I can see it’s special. It da last one.”

“No. I mean special, as in different from all the rest.”

“As in Unique.”

“Yeah. Once you touched it, and take it out the store, there’s no going back,” the man said in a dark voice. Aaliyah looked back at the DVD, then looked at the man, but he was gone.

“Creepy. Oh well.” She took the DVD, then got the second Pirates of the Caribbean.

“What took you so long?”

“I was…..confused”

“Sure,” Dawnika said giving the DVDs to the cashier.

“That’ll be 45.50.”

“Good thing I got me a 80 gift card.”

“Thank you. Have a nice night”
The two girls got in the car and put on there seat belts.

“I don’t get why they say that, when we know they don’t want to.”

“Maybe they’ll get fired or something. Who knows.” After a few minutes it started to rain.
“Oh grate. Now I have to drive in the rain.” Just then a big lighting bolt went through the sky.

“Aaaaa! Dawnika drive faster. I hate lighting storms.”

“Were almost home, don’t worry. I got this”
Aaliyah remembered back at the store, what the guy said.

“Dawnika. Go faster. I’m ‘bout to cry.”

“Oh. Stop being such a ba-, Just then a car came and crashed into Dawnika’s car. Both of the girls let out a loud scream, and then it went all black.

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I had a story like this but i didn't like it very much.

So I re-did it. Hope you liked the first chapter. Oh and please Review. I'll love you forever.