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Firstly the disclaimer: I do not own Charmed or anything about Charmed. I just like making up stories about them.
Right, here is the 'sequel' to New Surprises. I put sequel in ' ' because technically it's not, since you can't really put a sequel to New Surprises, and you don't need to have read it to understand this story. Anyway, I'll let you read it and see how you find it. It is in the changed future by the way.
When Chris dies, where did he go? In my world, he ended up in the future him, to a future that he had changed. This is kind of a sequel to New Surprises. The cousins are the same, and Melinda is there, for all those that were upset when I killed her off – or should I say when Wyatt killed her.
Return to the Future
Before the story starts, here's a little character synopsis for you, so I don't confuse you too much. The cousins won't play too much of a major role, it will pretty much be about Chris, and how he is dealing with coming to the new future that he saved, and how his close family (ie. mom, dad, brother, sister) deal with it, but I've put the cousins in for a reference.
Piper and Leo’s:
Wyatt Matthew Halliwell (25)
Powers include a hell of a lot! healing, force-field generation, orbing, power control, power manipulation, summoning, power switching, conjuring, telekinesis, telekinetic orbing, projection, pyrokinesis, sensing, blowing up, self heal. And maybe a few more. After all he is the Twice-Blessed.
Christopher Perry Halliwell (23)
Powers include: Orbing, telekinetic orbing, sensing, conjuring, telekinesis and Elder beams
Melinda Prudence Halliwell (19 turning 20)
Powers include: telepathy, freezing time, molecular combustion (and because of the telepathy any power of who she is fighting with or against)
Phoebe and Coop’s:
Peyton Grace Halliwell (19)
Powers include: empathy and icy breath (similar to Prue’s past self)
Prudence Helena Halliwell (16)
Powers include: premonitions and astral projection
Patricia Charlotte Halliwell (11)
Powers include: no wiccan powers, she is just a cupid
Paige and Henry’s:
Hannah Jane Matthews (18 turning 19)
Powers include: electricity, telekinesis, orbing
Hope Penelope Matthews (18 turning 19)Powers include: water, fire, telekinetic orbing, orbing
Henry Mitchell Matthews (17)
Powers include: Orbing, healing, sensing, energy balls. He is fully whitelighter. Now wiccan powers.
Extras:Bianca (28)
Powers include: shimmering, conjuring, energy balls.
Ryan (25)
Powers include: shimmering, supernatural strength and speed, high pitched screech.
The Return
Chris lay weakly on his parent’s bed, watching Darryl and Inspector Sherriden leaving the room. The pain from the wound was too much, he could feel himself dying. He was too young to die, he was only 23. What a day to die, he thought to himself, on your birthday of all days.
“Chris!”
He looked to the door to see Leo run in and kneel down at the bedside. He could just see his Aunt Paige stay at the door.
“Hey.” He smiled to his father, weakly.
“Hey, I’m here now,” Leo held onto Chris’ hand, watching his youngest son die. There was no point in healing him, Chris had already explained that this was Gideon’s magic, only Gideon could heal him. Making a mental note to kill Gideon personally he turned his attention back to his son, “You can…hold on, ok? Hold on…hold on. I’m here. You can hold on, ok?” Leo tried not to cry as he watched Chris nod his head slowly, “Don’t give up, ok?”
Chris could feel his life coming to an end, his eyelids felt heavy, his body started to fell numb.
“You, either.” He managed to say as his eyes closed fully, he could just about hear his father crying, and then there was silence.
Hearing voices downstairs, he decided to cautiously leave his bedroom and find out what was going on. As the voices became clearer, he could make out Melinda, giggling to someone. Melinda! Melinda was alive!
Running down the stairs, he saw her on her cell phone.
“Melinda!” Chris said, running to his sister, pulling her into a bone-crushing hug.
“Chris?” Melinda queried, “Chris, I could do with air.” She felt his grasp lighten, and then he pulled away from her completely. He ran his hands through her hair, looking at her like he had just seen a ghost.
“Ok, Chris, you’re freaking me out now,” Melinda stepped away from her older brother, quickly finishing her call, good job it was only Peyton, “What are you doing home, anyway. I thought you were going out with Wyatt?”
Wyatt, why would Chris go out with Wyatt? Why would Wyatt go out with Chris? Wyatt was evil, right? The ruler of the world, but wait, no Melinda was alive and he remembered seeing Wyatt kill her.
“He was,” They both heard a voice around them, then saw blue orbs, “What you playing at now? You cannot stay in, just because it’s your birthday. I ain’t letting you out of this.”
Chris looked at the figure in front of him, not recognising him at first, and then it struck him. It was Wyatt. A shorter hair, clean shaven, non-black clothes Wyatt. Everything he wanted Wyatt to be. He was standing in front of him right now. Chris felt his breath quicken.
“Chris?” Wyatt asked, slightly worried, the colour had completely drained from his younger brother’s face, and his breathing was erratically fast.
Chris could hear both his siblings call to him, but it seemed so far away, even though they were in front of him, and then it all went black.
Anyway, review anyway...tell me what you think...