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Rated: T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Sasuke U. & Itachi U. - Reviews: 4 - Published: 06-27-07 - Complete - id:3620128

A/N: It can be considered as my first English fic, so please review, especially on the grammar. I haven't had a beta, so I'm unsure about the correct tenses and the use of words.

Thanks for maxxim huzzah and flagellantket at lj for the help.

Title: Memory of the Last Moment

Author: PansyLane
Fandom: Naruto
Pairing: Uchiha Sasuke x Uchiha Itachi
Rating: PG-13 for character death
Words: 145
Warning: blood, character death


Hot tears are pouring down on his face. The scent of violets makes his mind fuzzy, while soft lips touch lips. A wet tongue runs across the side of his mouth, makes its way between teeth and do the waltz in the fog of mellifluous blew.
Caressing hands stroke his neck, dig into raven-hair, never letting it go.
Crimson red eyes detain him, like the kaleidoscope restrains the curious child.

Hot blood is pouring down on his face. The smell of death is burning him from the inside, like heated iron, purple lips whisper sweet words. His mouth is dry, with chattering teeth he kneels beside the dead. Ice-cold hands in his hands, he stares in glass-like eyes, while he blows goodbye on the lips of his brother.
He killed the revenge inside himself, his soul is empty, cold blade cures his heart.

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