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Author: Sakukotsu
Fiction Rated: M - English - Family/Adventure - Bankotsu - Reviews: 24 - Published: 06-28-07 - Updated: 05-03-08 - id:3622439

Unforgiving sins

Disclaimers: Being chased by men in black suits Okay, okay, I admit it. I do not own Inuyasha or any of its characters in any shape or form. They all belong to Rumiko Takahashi. But I do own Ogen and Tatsuno. Steal them and you can die.

Warnings: lemon, cursing, extreme violence

A/N: Basically, this is about what may have been Bankotsu’s life before Shichinintai were executed. You better read and reply. And also, you guys get to know who Tatsuno really is. .

Chapter 1

“Ah, Tatsuno and Bankotsu have grown up so much over the past nine years in this small little village. I can’t believe that the twins are now sixteen years old. It seems like yesterday that they were only eight.” An old woman praised along with other women as they kept their glance at two young men napping under a huge tree.

These boys appeared as though they were identical twins in fact. There was however, a difference in especially their facial appearance. One had let his long black hair tied loosely in a neck based ponytail; he had a mole on his left cheek which added the appeal to his beauty. But unlike his twin, he was paler. The other one had a purple cross on his forehead, he allowed his hair to be tied in a braid and the look on his face seemed more ‘aggressive’ then his paler brother’s.

The paler brother finally woke up and yawned, only to see old women talking about him and his brother.

The pale one tapped his brother’s shoulder and pointed to the direction of the women. “Brother, they’re talking about us again. What makes us so fascinating to them?” one of the brother’s questioned. The sleeping one woke up and gazed into his twin’s eyes and then shrugged.

“Well Tatsuno, all I can say is that we’re famous around these parts for the reason that we’re orphaned twins who came here wounded.” The other twin replied. The paler one was obviously the one who was called “Tatsuno.” For a second, Tatsuno was going to say something back but then he had thought about it for a bit. Then, finally it came to him.

“Bankotsu, I suppose you’re right but something tells me that it’s not the full reason why we’re well known around these parts. I think it’s because of our birth rights that we have.” Tatsuno replied being as sure as possible that Bankotsu was listening. “Bankotsu” was obviously the name of Tatsuno’s twin. Bankotsu turned his glance to Tatsuno and smiled a bit. He knew that Tatsuno was right and it was a pretty darn good thing.

“Drop the subject Tatsuno, what are you planning on doing in the future? As for me, I think I’ll go for joining the military considering I have trained myself enough with my halberd at home. I’ve killed enough demons to be considered powerful so why shouldn’t I join the military?” Bankotsu asked his twin as he noticed the concerned look in Tatsuno’s face. As Tatsuno was going to answer, a tall, old man appeared before the twins. This man had well built arms and hard armor, and the look on his face showed the look of passion to kill.

This old man in particular caught Bankotsu’s attention easily for he seemed to be a general in the army. Bankotsu could feel his heart beating quickly; it was finally the day for him to join up with the military.

“Bankotsu, whichever one of you two is him, you have been asked to join us but you refused to go to our training sessions, instead you go off to do your own thing so therefore you cannot join us until you have reached the age of twenty five. We are unable to trust you for this.” The old man shouted at the twins as he read a scroll passage out loud.

Anger built up inside of Bankotsu, two years of rough and brutal training for nothing. The training was brutal enough that Bankotsu had nearly died of starvation for the fact that he lacked eating during the time. He couldn’t understand what made him so untrustworthy for that. He longed to shout right back at the old man. “Hey old fart, I trained myself for two years. I had to miss two weeks worth of supper just to train; I almost died through training myself for these past two years. I endured hunger, lack of sleep and I also endured listening to Tatsuno’s lectures of why I shouldn’t over train myself. The training set up by you people was too easy for me, so I decided to go through much more then I should’ve. Just think of it this way, if I had decided to stay with the group, then I would’ve never been this tough. I would’ve been a lot weaker then you think.” Bankotsu shouted, he smirked when he saw the shocked look in the old man’s face but soon it turned into anger.

WHAP! Bankotsu froze for a second as he felt pain stab into his left cheek. Indeed the old man had slapped him for talking back and objecting being rejected by the army. “Young man, I do not know exactly how brutal your training had been but I know for a fact that with that type of attitude you’re unsuited for us.” The old man shouted then started walking towards his horse. In a few seconds he got onto his brown mare and the two galloped off.

“Brother, I’m sorry. I am appalled that they never accepted you to join them, especially after how hard you tried to get extremely strong. I wish I could just beat them down and kick them in the behind, we all need that sometimes.” Tatsuno tried to cheer up Bankotsu with his short speech, but it was of no use to Bankotsu. he just turned around on Tatsuno and shrugged.

Only Bankotsu knew that he was unsuited to follow too many orders at once anyway. Anger boiled in him. “I’m pissed that they never even taken the time to listen to what I had to say. All that training for nothing at all, nothing! Those bastards will pay for wasting my time.” Bankotsu shouted, but only soon to see Tatsuno running off after the old man to see if he could resolve the problem. “Good luck Tatsuno.” Bankotsu called out to his brother as he disappeared after the man and horse.

Soon enough, Bankotsu’s anger cooled down a little bit. He shut his eyes and started to daze off into his own little world in his head. It was then he felt a soft hand touch his cheek, he woke up to see a woman.

This woman had neck length black hair which matched her purple eyes. She wore a red kimono decorated with birds on it and her red lips somehow made her seem…. lustful. Immediately Bankotsu could recognize this woman, it was Ogen Tamashi, the head priestess of the village and Tatsuno’s fiancé. What did she want from Bankotsu?

“Tatsuno, I know that you’re going to be heading off to a big city to be priest and we cannot marry. I don’t want to marry another man but you nor do I want to lose my virginity to another man. There is no law against this so; could you please take me now?” The woman pleaded with tears in her eyes as she embraced Bankotsu.

Bankotsu felt butterflies in his stomach as he heard what Ogen had to say to him. ‘Holy shit, she thinks I’m Tatsuno.’ Bankotsu though as his face turned crimson red; this woman’s words made him feel shy. But he knew that Tatsuno wasn’t going to be home for quite some time though, so he may as well pretend to be Tatsuno for now, although his own virginity will be at cost though. And if Tatsuno found out, maybe he’ll forgive Bankotsu for being human and tempted into doing this. It was a sinful act indeed, but it wouldn’t make any difference to Ogen who she slept with first, would it?

‘Forgive me Tatsuno.’ Bankotsu thought as he forced himself to kiss Ogen. With his lips sealed to hers, he forced her closer to his body and allowed her to let her tongue explore his mouth. He felt some arousal when he slipped his hand down Ogen’s hakama to feel her rounded breasts. He flinched when he saw Ogen’s lips slip off his and dragged him into her hut.

He started to blush as she covered all opening of the hut, so that no one would see. “What’s wrong Tatsuno, this first time too?” Ogen asked then giggled when Bankotsu nodded. For some unknown reason, Bankotsu wanted to get this over with and quickly. With no control, Bankotsu found himself taking off his shirt. It exposed his muscular chest, but he didn’t really care what was exposed. Before he noticed, Ogen was already undressing.

She approached the shy man and started kissing him roughly. Bankotsu thought for sure he was going to faint from being overheated, fortunately for him, he didn’t. Oddly enough, Bankotsu started to feel ‘pressure’ going on when he felt Ogen’s cold hand explore his pants, then taking it out after feeling his pressured cock.

What seemed to be hours but just a few seconds, Ogen’s kisses were heating up Bankotsu’s mouth once more. ‘I wonder what Tatsuno will think of me if he saw me with Ogen like this? Damn it, I shouldn’t be too worried about that.’ Bankotsu thought as he realized that Ogen had taken his pants off of his body. She stared at his hard manhood for a few seconds and then she finally took off the remaining of her clothing, her fondoshi. Quickly, Bankotsu laid Ogen down and forced his finger into her womanhood, just to see of course how she would respond.

Ogen’s moans excited the hell out of Bankotsu, he pulled his finger out of her and then, in a torturous way, he started lick her womanhood. “Oh Tatsuno; stop teasing me. I want you now.” Ogen yelled followed by her groans and moans. She then had an orgasm and continued to moan. In response, Bankotsu flinched and pulled back. He didn’t know what to do now. Perhaps Ogen did.

Mind in a daze, Bankotsu shot wide eyed when he felt Ogen mouth over his manhood. Not once in his life had he considered this but it did feel a lot better then he had expected it to be. Only thing that worried him was Ogen biting it. After a few seconds, Ogen took his manhood out of her mouth and looked at Bankotsu. In showing how desperate she was, she moaned and lay down with her legs spread apart. She seemed ready enough at this point.

Bankotsu lowered himself so that his hips will meet Ogen’s. Before he was just about to fully loose his virginity, he played with Ogen’s nipples. He allowed his tongue to lick her nipples in order to make them hard, enough to make her seem aroused enough. “Tatsuno, stop teasing and put it in already.” Ogen cried out as Bankotsu stopped. With a blush, Bankotsu forced his manhood into her wet womanhood. He heard Ogen yelp in some pain as he slowly got into her. Bankotsu put Ogen’s legs over his shoulder and slowly started to thrust as beads of sweat was dripping down his face. He was soon motivated to start thrusting when she started to moan and pleaded for him to go faster.

How they wanted this was in the forbidden matter. Soon enough, Bankotsu found himself lying on the ground, sweating and grunting as Ogen was on top of Bankotsu and allowing him to thrust while he was on the ground. “Go faster Tatsuno…” Ogen pleaded before Bankotsu even considered going faster on her. He started to go slightly faster but somehow, this wasn’t satisfying enough for him.

No longer did Bankotsu want to be gentle with Ogen, so quickly, he made his thrusts even faster then before. He moaned at the thought of how tight Ogen was becoming. ‘Damn, she’s so fucking tight. I think I’m going to reach my limits soon…’ Bankotsu thought as he continued thrusting into her. Soon enough she had reached orgasm at about the same time Bankotsu did.

“Tatsuno… can you do it with my breasts?” Ogen asked as she allowed Bankotsu to exit her soft and tender body. She readied herself as Bankotsu forced his manhood in between her breasts. Ogen slowly pushed her breast against each other as Bankotsu moved around a little. She waited until he came before she stopped and licked the tip of his cock. After hearing Bankotsu’s moans, Ogen sat up and embraced Bankotsu and smirked at how red his face was.

“You’ve satisfied me enough Tatsuno, thanks for listening and caring.” Ogen said which was followed by a kiss. Bankotsu’s face was even more red then ever when Ogen broke the kiss. It didn’t seem right for this to be going on. After all, Ogen was to be married to Tatsuno, not Bankotsu but yet he took away his fiancé’s virginity all because she got the wrong twin.

‘Does it make me a pervert that I enjoyed this? After all, I did like the idea that Ogen came on to me and mistaken me for Tatsuno. I hope that I am forgiven for this.’ Bankotsu thought deeply. He turned away from Ogen and sighed.

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“You soldiers don’t understand, Bankotsu did train; hell, he’s worthy to be much more then a soldier. Please, you must understand. He trained for two long years just to be joining you men. For two years I worried about his life. Please, just please give him a chance.” Tatsuno pleaded to a group of men in attention position and to a general standing among them. Already, Tatsuno was on his knees and begging for the men to at least just listen to his words of wisdom and mercy.

For a few moments, the soldiers chatted about this issue and turned to Tatsuno. They all shook their heads as soon as the chatting was gone. Tatsuno’s eyes watered and streamed down his cheeks as he took a good look at the army’s decision. “Fine, go ahead and be that way. Someday you will all regret this.” Tatsuno shouted as he stormed away from the military base and started heading home. He grumbled to himself as he walked and stomped angrily.



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