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I have risen from the dead. Yes, and no...just kidding!
Long time no see, huh? This story wasn't a hit, but alot of people liked it. reviews from alot of my friends well, one of my friends as showed em that I'm an okay writer. Why am I writing to you guys now out of the blue?
I have something to say!
Okay, It's come to my mind that I'm almost ready to start the sequel to this. But first off, I want to point out...that I know about everything everyone's told me. I know that the 4th hokage's real name isn't Akanaji, I know that Anko was only a kid, I know that Naruto's real mother isn't Anko! There, I've said it and I've known it since I got to the second chapter of this story. If I just quit it because of the facts, that'd take all the fun out of my creativity, and I'd have the get rid of the story all together.
I didn't want to do that because of tiny little facts that some people don't know because they don't look into stuff, they just watch the show, like me! So, I'm sorry for being incorrect...does that make it better?
This next chapter (everything is just about the same thing as it was in the FIRST story) or story, will be more between naruto and anko, so you might have to search for it under...well, anko and naruto. But nonetheless, I'm still debating on that.
Naruto gets back from training with Jjiraiya and he finds out something un expected and unwanted. Well, here you go, this'll explain it maybe a little better.
"What is it, Sakura? Shouldn't you be picking up the traffic report-"
"That's it!!" Sakura interrupted a grin on her face. "Itsumo told me...he's back! He's really back!! Anko's eyes widened as she looked behind Sakura and saw Jiraiya, and a figure appear. Anko felt actual tears in her eyse. She Naruto seemed to have seen her first and walked up and merely grinned at her.
Anko only stared. He had practically changed into him while he was gone. Jiraiya stared at the look on her face while he saw tears run down her cheeks. She ran up to him and hugged him furiously hard, starting to sob. Naruto's hand rose and stroke her back gently. His voice had gotten so deep while he was gone.
"Come on, mom...this is a happy day, why are you crying like this?" he whispered as she struggled to swallow the knot in her throat.
"I'm...I'm sorry...its just...you look just like him now...I couldn't help myself," she whispered as Naruto pulled her away and looked into her eyes.
"I've heard that enough from pervy sage," he said with a chuckle. "It's okay, trust me...you'll get used to it. Just like he had to..." Anko smiled and wiped her tears away as she grinned at him. "You want to go eat some ramen?" Anko ad shook her head.
"I'm sorry, I already...have something plann-" There was a cleared throat as she turned and saw Genma grinning at her. He shook his head.
"Go on Anko. I don't mind, we'll just reschedule," Genma offered as she nodded. Naruto's brow scrunched up in confusion and suspicion.
"What...what's going on...?" he asked in a confused tone. Anko's eyes widened as she suddenly felt amazing guilt and nervousness. There was silence all around. No one dared to speak. "Someone say something...please..." Anko closed her eyes as she felt Genma's hand slip into hers. He was obviosuly brave enough to speak for them.
"I'm dating your mother."