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Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Deidara & Naruto U. - Reviews: 33 - Updated: 06-08-08 - Published: 07-23-07 - id:3676969

Ameagari… – After the Rain…

(DeiNaru)

Chapter 2


Disclaimer: KyuuNaruSaku (my BETA) and I went to sneak Deidara and Naruto out of Kashimoto-ka’s house but he caught us and threw bricks at our heads as we ran off…time for ‘plan B’.

Warning: Yaoi, shounen-ai, language, smutty-ness D

Summary: His 3 years is almost up Jiraiya ditched him in the middle of a forest for ‘solitary training’ and to add to all that it starts to rain! Just when things couldn’t get any worse, he runs into the exact thing he’s been trying to avoid! DeiNaru

A/N: I’ve decided to ask a question each time I update…hopefully you guys won’t mind answering :D

What is your favourate movie?

Personally? I have a lot. RENT, Breakfast Club, Naruto, Quest for the Holy Grail, and Queen of the Damned being some of them…

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thinking…

Kyuubi talking to Naruto…

“Talking”

--Point of view change--

time skip by how much I write

If you don’t know a word, look at the dictionary :

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Ameagari Dictionary

C1, C2, C3, and C4: These are Deidara’s clay (artistic) bombs. C stands for chakra. C1 is the weakest, and it builds up to C4.

Un: Just something Deidara always says at the end of his sentences. In the English series, it’s ‘hmph’ or ‘yeah’. It’s kind of like Hiei’s ‘hn’.

Kami: He is like the god of spirits. More like a ‘mother nature’ thing then anything else.

‘-san’: A form of respect for someone. It shows in this situation that Naruto acknowledges the fact that Deidara is stronger then him. It’s the same case with Deidara calling Sasori, ‘Sasori-danna’.

Nani?: What?

Nuke-nin: Just another word for a missing-nin/ one who has abandoned their village.


The Kyuubi container slowly woke from his well-rested slumber. He kept his eyes closed, relishing in the warmth emanating from around him. 'Wait a minute...warmth?' Naruto's eyes snapped open to take in his surroundings. A black and red spotted pillow surrounded him. He carefully looked to his side, where the warm air was lightly ghosting over his skin. He saw Deidara's peaceful face. His hard chest pushing against his back with each breath he took. 'This is a dangerous S-class missing nin? This is me being extremely stupid…but…I guess everyone has their reasons…’

In the next moment he looked back up at the blonde's face, dragging his lingering eyes away from his soft, delicate looking lips. He came face to face with light green eyes staring curiously at him. Ocean blue orbs widened as they stared back at hazy, half-asleep emerald green ones. A light blush adorned his tan whiskered cheeks.

"D-Deidara, I-" His desperate explanation was cut off as he felt warm lips on his own.

Nothing rough. Just a soft, sweet kiss. 'He smells like clay and rain...It smells nice...' That was all he needed. He was hooked. ‘No, no, no, no! Bad Naruto! Bad!' was the last thought running though the Jinchuuriki’s head before he found himself snuggling into the elder male’s chest and falling back into a peaceful dream.

Naruto once again found himself waking up, but instead of finding himself in the warm embrace of a stranger, he was alone, in the cave. ‘He must have left…’ Sure enough, as he looked out it was sunny. The storm had passed. The fresh smell of rain and grass filled the air, giving it a clean, spring-y feeling.

I wish…he would have at least woke me up.’

“You awake, un?”

The blonde shifted his attention to the cave entrance where he found the missing nin walking back into the cave.

“You didn’t leave.” He stated.

“I didn’t, un.”

“Why?”

The older male went silent. They stared at each other in silence until Deidara’s voice finally broke it.

“I don’t know.”

Naruto paused, wondering if it would be a good idea for him to ask the next question forming in his head.

“Why did you kiss me?” As soon as the words left his lips he cursed himself in his head, ‘Why the fuck can’t I keep my thoughts to myself?!’.

A confused expression fell across the older males face. “What are you talking about, un? I never kissed you.” He ended the sentence in more of a question then a statement.

“Are you sure?”

Confusion turned to annoyance. “Yes, damnit. Why would I kiss you, un? We’re only friends until we part ways, remember?”

“….yeah…sorry. Must have been a weird dream or something…” Despite the half-truth, the Kyuubi container couldn’t help but feel a bit disappointed at the answer. ‘It was sort of nice…maybe I was just dreaming…’

It wasn’t a dream, kit.’

Kyuubi?’

It wasn’t a dream.’ The Demon repeated.

Naruto stared at the now smiling Nuke-nin waving the fruit and beckoning him to go and join the elder blonde for breakfast.

“Come on, un. I’ll only save the food so long before I get hungry, Naruto, un.”

As the elder male went back to inhaling the fruit, only one thought ran through Naruto’s head.

I’m hungry…’

Okay, two thoughts.

Where’s Jiraiya?...’

….I meant three. Three damnit.

If it wasn’t a dream…why did he deny it?’


A/N: Haha, this is a disappointing update, but an update nonetheless. So be happy :P

I have no plotline for this story whatsoever. Oh! Answer the question if you like, I’m really interested in your responses, who knows? Maybe we’ll discover some cool things to check out. The question was:

What is your favourate movie?

Again, Huge thanks to KyuuNaruSaku! My Beta! –heartheart-


--Review Responses. Because I love all of you :D--

Aranel Raikou:really? Almost all the time I see it Deidara’s eyes are green…either way, I’d rather two characters not have the same eye colour, hard to describe it :D

KyuuNaruSaku You is officially my beta :P

PirateCaptainBo whoa, there’s two of you…hope this update doesn’t upset you too much

keruki aww…thanks! Here ya go :D

RaysNekoAngelGirl Thank you! I’m never very confident in my writing so that means a lot to me

kitsunegyrl You reviewed back when I first posted in 07…omg, so sorry I made you wait so long! xD This stories coming back to life!

-Liquidfox- Deidara is a boy. Thus, the Yaoi warning.

Princess Teah Lmao, Beta is a person that goes through and looks for mistakes before you post so it makes sense. Don’t worry, I have one :P

Aifos I agree, they can be morons or really deep…hehe, I think they’d make a wonderful couple. But it’s hard to write since I haven’t seen many examples of DeiNaru so I’m not very good at Deidara’s character. I hope I don’t fuck it up xD

Medicinal Biscuit Yes! It should be much more popular! Of course I’ll continue…very slowly…hahaha

dragonfire04 not very soon…but an update nonetheless, ne?

ChocohalicsAnonymus Aren’t they the cutest couple?!

seventhSINwrath You’re one of the lucky ones…you only had to wait 5 months instead of 10! Hehehe…. :D

SKYE desu ka I agree, and even less tolerable DeiNaru stuff…some people just shouldn’t write…ha, anyways, I hope I’ll get more fans, despite my crappy updating schedule…

xXxFallenXxXAngelsxXx Thank you! I tried making it a bit more realistic in the second chapter. Despite what I want them to do, I tried to keep them in character more…it’s hard… T-T”

Again! Thanks for all your wonderful words! I hope you’ll like this story enough to put it on alert (eheh..) cuz it’s starting to slowly move along…without a plot….I lost my plot bunnies! ….muu….


Kyuunarusaku: Hi everybody! She…she…she…UPDATED! – holds up sign that says ‘gasp!’ – I can’t believe it…

Anyways, hope I didn’t miss anything. I would answer the question, but I have a lot of favorite movies….hmmm.

MyNightlyHalo: Gee, thanks for the support Kyuu, I mean, don't act so suprised, geez. :P



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