Kaien: Rage; He was in anger when his wife was murdered by that hallow and then there were other times from what I saw in that one episode of BLEACH. But don’t worry I’ll try to make Kaien be the same person even though he’s in rage.

Oh and I hope I get Kaien's personalty right! and no flames!! the reason why Kaien dies in later in the story!!

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“Damn it! What happened to me?” thought a body laying down on a cold ground. He had spiky black hair, a bit long in the back, was laying down on the ground, with blood all on his back. His name was Kaien Shiba. A vice captain shinigami (Soul Reaper/Death God) of the Gotei 13.

Last thing he had remembered was that he was pierced through the heart by Kuchiki Rukia, not intentionally it just happened when he was fighting a hallow. “Damn…all this pain…” he thought, trying to pull himself up wondering what happened to him.

“I see you’re awake!” a young voice sounding said to him. “H-huh?” he questioned, opening up his eyes seeing a boy looking at him around nine years old. He had long black hair, violet eyes, some red marks running down his stomach and ended at his legs, were some black shorts that looked tight, and a black ripped t-shirt that showed his stomach.

“Uh…little girl…where am I?” Kaien asked, feeling a bit strange having a ‘creature’ staring at him like that. “I’m a boy!” he pouted, with a frown. Kaien growled, he was in enough pain as it was.

”Listen KID just tell me were I am and I’ll be fine!!” Kaien snapped. “Oh!” the suddenly smiled. “You’re at the mansion were momma and the others live!!” he explained, with a grin.

“Crap…he has fangs too,” Kaien thought, in depression. The boy, who wasn’t noticing the way Kaien was staring at him which was annoyed/angry. “What’s wrong with you?” Wrath questioned. “Uh…I’m in pain!!” Kaien explained with a look on his face like ‘no duh!’, as the boy looked over Kaien’s back and saw blood drying up into his skin. (Almost like it was absorbing up)

“You look okay to me…” the boy said, shrugging in confusion. “What do you mean ‘I look okay?! I’m lying on the floor covered in blood!! Are you drunk or something?!?!” Kaien screamed. “No the blood’s living, you look just fine!” he said, helping Kaien up.

”Hm…you need some clothes to wear,” the boy said. Kaien blushed at the younger boy and said, “Stop staring!” “Don’t worry it doesn’t make me a difference anyway, I’m just a kid,” the boy explained, turning on the light in the room.

”My names Kaien Shiba by the way.” “My names Wrath!!...but I don’t think there’s any homunculus here who have ‘normal’ names,” “Normal names?” Kaien questioned. Wrath nodded and handed him a mirror that was laying down in a dresser. “Why do I need-“ Kaien began, as he saw his reflection.

Kaien had unnaturally pale skin, violet eyes, and a red mark of a dragon about to eat it’s tail on his shoulder. Kaien’s mouth dropped open and couldn’t help but scream, “WHAT-THE-HELL?!” “Calm down or the others will hear!” Wrath begged. “WHAT HAPPENED TO ME?!” Kaien asked.

“Well…the master said she found you laying around outside so she took you in.” Wrath explained. “Laying? I wasn’t dead?” asked Kaien, raising an eyebrow. Wrath shrugged at Kaien.

“The master says a homunculi is a human that died and got resurrected by alchemy,” Wrath explained. Kaien frowned and thought, “What about shinigami? Does that count?” his thought was disrupted when he felt something hit his stomach. Kaien looked down and saw a black shirt that showed his shoulders and that would probably cover his stomach and some tight black pants.

”What are these for?” asked Kaien, in a dull tone. “The master always keeps clothes in her room she wanted me to look after you while you were sleeping and gave me these clothes,” said Wrath. Kaien eyed the clothes and then Wrath.

”You…don’t like them?” asked Wrath, innocently. “Of course!” Kaien thought, but instead he questioned, “Can’t you get out WHILE I CHANGE?!” “Hm…sure,” Wrath said, going outside the room. Kaien mumbled something as he slipped on the black shirt a bit happy it wasn’t tight on him…unlike the pants.

”Damn it…I can’t live like this…” Kaien thought, in depression. “Done yet?” Wrath questioned. “Sure…I guess,” he answered, wondering if he could perhaps find some better clothes later on and get to the bottom of what happened to him.

“You look nice!” Wrath said, as Kaien opened up the door. “Ugh…you were even WAITING for me?” asked Kaien, in annoyance. “Kinda I guess you can say that! I have to take care of you though,” Wrath explained.

”Sure whatever,” said Kaien, only to be yanked by Wrath. “Now come on let me show you the others and momma!” Wrath complained. “There’s…there’s more of you?!” asked Kaien, in shock as he walked at an equal pace as Wrath did.

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“Master! Our new homunculus is awake!!” Wrath grinned, as he showed a women a much depressed Kaien. Their ‘master’ had short black hair, purple eyes, and wore a long red dress. Kaien raised an eyebrow at her, she looked young for her age and not even THAT powerful.

“You’re a handsome one,” she said, lightly stroking Kaien’s face. Kaien took her hand away and said, “Listen lady where the hell am I?!” “My name is Dante, your master and you my dear. Where laying down onto the ground lifeless, so I gladly resurrected you,” she explained.

”What if I didn’t want to be resurrected?” asked Kaien, in anger. “You should be glad I saved you…tell me what’s your name?” asked Dante, with a smirk. “Kaien, Kaien Shiba.”

”Kaien is too ordinary for a homunculi, I like the name; Rage.” Dante explained. “Rage?” Kaien didn’t like it at all.

”What about my birth name? Kaien Shiba? What if I like it more?!” asked Kaien, showing nothing but rage. “Listen, my goal in life is hunting down the pholiphers stone when I find that you will be Kaien Shiba again,” said Dante. “Pholiphers stone?” Kaien questioned.

”It can do anything in life, now Wrath go on and rejuvenate some of your stones then show Rage around to some of the other homunculi,” Dante order. “Yes master,” Wrath said, as he dragged off Kaien/Rage.

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“So these are the pholiphers stones?” asked Kaien, as he held some in his hands like they were poison. “Uh-huh! they’re really good!!” Wrath said, with a smile. “Why did that damn women pair me up with THIS kid?” thought Kaien, not exactly eating the stones yet. (DON’T DO IT KAIEN OR YOU’LL TURN INTO A MEAN MAN!!!)

”Are you gonna eat or what?” questioned Wrath, innocently. “Why do I need these? I’m just fine the way I am!!” Kaien explained. “Homunculus are nothing without the pholiphers stones, just empty shells of ourselves,” Wrath answered, looking sad.

“Tell me more about homunculus, what are they suppose to be?” asked Kaien, curious about the ‘new’ him. “When a human tries to bring back a loved one from the dead or from just simple curiosity a new creature is created...we all lack souls but have everything else a human has,” Wrath sighed. “So, you all listen to that woman and think what she does is true?” Kaien questioned, wrinkling up his eyebrows in anger.

”We have no choice, she took us all in after the ones who created us decided to abound or try to kill us,” Wrath sighed, remembering Izumi on Yock Island. “So why would she love freaks such as us?” asked Kaien. “Because she made the same mistake trying to resurrect her own son…” Wrath began, about to go on.

”BUT WHAT IF I WANTED TO DIE?! WHAT IF WE ALL WANTED TO DIE!? THAT’S JUST PLAIN SELFISH!!!!” screamed Kaien, out loud startling Wrath. “I know but we don’t have a choice, I’m not completely sure how I died all I remember is being on a island all alone,” Wrath explained.

”What a minute…his right arm and left leg are different tones,” Kaien thought, in confusion. “Forget it, I’ll figure out what to do on my own,” Kaien explained, picking up a stone and began eating it. “But I don’t give a damn what my ‘new’ name is! I’m Kaien Shiba regardless!!” Wrath watched as Kaien soon became immune to the stones and their ‘flavor.’ Wrath lightly smiled and said, ”Alright, Kaien Shiba.”

Kaien continued to eat until it was all gone, he suddenly felt a jerk of anger go through his veins…no it was anger it was rage. Kaien clinched his fists when he was done, he felt like all memories were vanishing.

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Well that it's it for now aside from the second chapter I posted! please review people!