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Alternating Destinies
Meet the Trio
“AXEL! Get in here right now.” Axel’s head appeared in the doorway. “Yes Roxas?” Just as Roxas was about to speak Axel said “Whatever is was I didn’t do it! It was Demyx!” “Look at this!” Roxas was holding up his box of photos. When he tipped it over, gray ash poured out. “How would Demyx do THAT?!” Roxas looked up at Axel seriously. “This was for a summer project!” “I…uh…I was dusting!” “Axel!”
“Hi Namine” chirped Roxas. Then his eyes went wide with wonder (AN: woot woot! four w's!) as he looked past her. “Who are your friends?” Axel asked as he and Demyx came down the stairs.
AN: I am not too happy about this chapter. Yeah it's the first so of course it's gonna be crappy but I still don't like it. I am actually co-writing this story with my twin. Go to my profile and then click on her deviantart thingy to see her stuff. She's actually pretty good. It'd also be nice to get a few reviews on your opinion of this chapter.
Criticism is necessary. No flames.
edit: I just might discontinue this story cause no one is reading and i'm not getting any reviews, not even on how badly i write. I'm just feeling a bit unloved and yeah i might discontinue this even if i wrote out all of the other chapters already.