Author: Maxie1514 PM
What if Lily Evans's life wasn't a fairy tale? What if her dad abused her and her mum didn't do anything about it? Will her friends be enough? Well why don't you find out? Please R&R. LJ eventualy.Rated: Fiction T - English - Romance - Lily Evans P. & James P. - Chapters: 3 - Words: 5,475 - Reviews: 16 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 11 - Updated: 03-16-08 - Published: 10-10-07 - id: 3829937
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Hola people, Sorry it's been so long since I updated. My birthday's coming up and I have the week off of school so I'll hopefully be updating. I may also update "the silent marauder" but who knows. Anyway here is the next chapter. One of my favourite sites (HP-B) is down because of updates also so I'll be writing. P.S-If anyone is a member of HP-B my name is hpcrazy93
Disclaimer- I got all the rights to Harry Potter for my birthday!! Wow if you fell for that you must be really slow! No I don't own Harry Potter or any of the rights only the plot and made up characters.
"Ok I'll do it after dinner," said Sirius piling food on his plate.
"You'll do it now or you won't be eating," said Carl taking Sirius' plate away. Sighing defeat Sirius stood up and walked out of the room. Sirius who knew the Potter's house very well walked to the bedroom which now had a door sign the read Lily. Inside the room came the muffled sobs of a girl who had been through much.
"Evans," he knocked on the door. There was silence now "Lily can you open the door?" there were footsteps and the door opened. Lily's eyes were red and puffy.
"What do you want Sirius?"
"Lily I'm sorry. When I came here I didn't want to talk about my parents at all. I shouldn't have said anything."
"It's not your fault. I over reacted. You didn't say any thing that was offensive, just having things be put in perspective made it seem worse," said lily drying her eyes on her sleeve.
"I'm really not very good at this," said Sirius. Lily laughed. "Um do you want dinner?"
"We can eat up here if you want they sound like there almost done," suggested Sirius. Lily nodded. "Ok then, Mattie," Sirius called in to nowhere. There was a pop and a little house elf with watery brown eyes appeared.
"You called master Sirius?" the small little house elf asked.
"Hey Mattie can you bring up what ever Mrs. Potter cooked."
"Yes master," a few seconds latter Mattie popped back in the room holding a tray loaded with food, "Do you need anything else?"
"No thank you," said Sirius. He gave a plate to lily who started eating immediately, "You must have been starving"
"Kind of," said Lily reaching for more food.
The summer passed with nothing to exciting happing and soon it was time to board the Hogwarts express. They were one of the first ones at the station.
"Oh I can't believe you're in your last year at Hogwarts. I seems like it was yesterday when I was changing your dippers."
"That was yesterday Mrs. P," said Sirius with his wolfish grin. A second later he was on the ground with James on top of him trying to beat him.
"No prongs…" came Sirius's muffled voice Sirius
"Padfoot you better shut up," yelled James.
"Boys cut it out. James get off of Sirius."
"No James not the hair. It needs to be perfect for my fan club," They boys were still rolling around on the floor.
"James Charlie Potter and Sirius Orion Black get off the floor before I decided not to let you go to Hogwarts," Screamed Mrs. Potter. The boys were off the floor with the blink of an eye.
"Sorry mum," James and Sirius said together.
"Go put the trunks on board," said Mr. Potter. The boys left.
"We spoke with professor Dumbledore and you can come over to our house for Christmas. If you want to that is" said Mrs. Potter.
"I would love to Mrs. Potter." said Lily as Mrs. Potter pulled her into a hug.
"Hey Lily," said a quiet voice. Lily spun around to see Remus standing next to her "how was the rest of your summer?"
"Better than the others. I wish you could have been over more." said lily "My sister still being… herself?"
"Will she ever not be? Of course. She and that Vernon guys she was dating are getting married. She went around the neighbourhood telling everyone." Lily rolled her eyes.
"They'll be a great couple. A walrus and a little sneak?" said lily laughing.
"Moony, finally you're here. Come on we got a compartment. By mum." said James.
"You guys be good. I don't want to here of you dieing anymore of the professors hair."
"But Mrs. P Slugy's hair had never looked better. I mean lime green is really his colour." Sirius' wolf grin was back.
"Get on the train," laughed Mr. Potter as the train whistle blew for all the stragglers to get aboard.
--------- Lily's POV----------
James and Sirius had gotten us our own compartment. We all hung our heads out the window to say last minute good byes. The train started to move and soon we were off in to the country side. Remus had pulled out a book Hogwarts a history. James was looking at a piece of parchment while Sirius followed a bunch of girls into their compartment. I decided to take a nap before the heads meeting. I looked out the window as the hills of green ran by soon I was in my own world.
"The Evans family was sitting together eating breakfast.
"Lily dear when is your choir recital?" asked her father looking up from the paper.
"At 7:30 dad." said lily. Who was already in her Preparatory School uniform. A scream came from the kitchen.
"Matalan, what is it?" asked Mr. Evans getting up from the table.
"It's an owl sir. With a letter for Miss Lily." said a Matalan who was looking fearfully at the owl whose leg was held out for her to take the letter.
"Lily, Petunia go to school." said Mr. Evans with a strangely calm voice. The girls got up from the table, picked up their lunches and went to school. "Mary she's not going there, how can she be one of them? They can think that I would let her go there after what happened to Jeff." said Mr. Evans.
"Seth why don't we let lily decide. I'm sure she won't want to go. She has a ton of friends she won't want to leave behind. Trust me she'll stay here." said Mary. Her husband sank down in a chair
"Your right. We'll ask her tonight."
"Sir, it is almost 8 you must be getting to work." said Matalan.
"Yes thank you Matalan." said Seth getting up and kissing his wife.
"Do worry dear. She won't decide to go."
So there's the next chapter. I hope you liked it like I said I have the week of so expect at least one more chapter. I have some questions for you to think about 1. Who is Jeff? 2. What happened to Jeff? 3. What do you think is going to happen next in the story? 4. Will lily decide to go to Hogwarts? 5. How will lily's father react to her decision? Put your answers these questions in you review. AND PLEASE REVIEW!!! ALSO CHECK OUT MY POLL!