Hey guys! I have been going over my reviews lately and noticed everyone seemed to like this story quite thoroughly and with my improved writing abilities, I decided to RE-WRITE it and sequel it.

This chapter will contain both the ones that were already written, but re-written, together in one chapter. Then I will bring up the follow on, or as you people say ‘sequel’

Summary: Sakura is sick of Naruto chasing her, so Ino and herself have a surprise in store for Naruto…And Hinata. Get ready to be torn at each corner. In the re-write of Sakura and Ino’s Birthday plan! After Time skip.

Thought

“…Talk...”

Kyuubi talk

‘Kyuubi think’

Birthday Plan

Chapter one;

“Sakura-Chan!” yelled a blond head boy as he ran down the long road towards ‘Ichiraku Ramen’, blue eyes shimmering in the sunlight.

The pink haired kunoichi turned around and smiled widely at her friend, “Naruto, Just the person I needed to see,” She motioned for him to sit down and they both ordered themselves some ramen.

“What do you need, Sakura-Chan” Asked a curios Naruto.

Sakura turned towards Naruto, her face serious, “It’s about my party, we’ve decided to have it at Club ‘Leaf’, I just wanted to-” The pink headed girl was cut off.

“Will there be ramen?” asked the blond head boy.

At this Sakura in hailed deeply and clenched her fist. She then slammed it over the Teenagers head.

“Eh Sakura-Chan, you could of just said no,” Whined Naruto as he rubbed the anime bump that had appeared on his head.

“Just remember to wear a Tux Naruto,” As the pink headed the girl was talking she heard a loud ‘slurp’ sound, she looked up to see Naruto eating some ramen.

Sakura slowly got off of her chair and hit Naruto over the head, yet again.

“Itai! (Ouch) Sakura-Chan!” Yelled the Blond.

“Don’t slurp Naruto!” shouted the girl as she grabbed her ramen to go, “Eight-O’clock Sharp Naruto” She began to walk out of the shop when she remembered something and turned back quickly to face the male, “Oh, Naruto, Its karaoke tonight, so I expect you to sing,” Sakura then turned around, a massive grin on her face and began to walk out of the ramen shop.

After Sakura was out of sight Naruto slowly got up and finished his Ramen, he gave Teuchi his money and muttered “Eh… I better go find a tuxedo” and walked off.

Meanwhile Sakura had made her way over to the barbeque house that Chouji loved and sat down with a blond headed friend of hers. The two where discussing an important event.

“Plan Naruhina is on the way!” exclaimed Sakura, Enthusiastically.

“Good,” Said Ino as she began to think, “Damn, What’s next?”

Sakura Just shrugged whilst Ino clenched her fist and banged on the table, “Where the hell is Shika-kun when you need him!”

Some random chose that time to get on Ino’s bad side by shouting out “Watching clouds!” regretted it when a kunai was aimed for his head, luckily it missed.

“Ok so…Hinata will be there and Naruto will?” She took a bite of her barbeque chicken.

“You should drag him out onto the porch and tell him that Hinata has been down lately and that if he dances with her it might cheer her up, then you go to the Pi (laugh) Pian (laugh) Pianist” As Ino said this sweat dropped from Sakura’s head “and get him to play a slow song!”

“Ino-pig, you are really immature sometimes” muttered the pink headed teenager.

Ino looked towards her watch and saw that she was late to meet her father to help at the flower shop, “Anyway, I will see you tonight…..” She slowly headed for the door, but then turned around, “Just don’t forget the plan”

Somewhere Inside a tuxedo shop, Naruto was looking for the perfect tuxedo, he came across the perfect Tux. It had black pants and a black jacket, as usual but a bright orange blouse. He instantaneously new it was the one he wished to have.

He took it up to the counter and bought it.

He then slowly left the shop, his orange and black tux was in a black bag, hanging over his shoulder.

Naruto slowly rounded a corner and saw some familiar faces.

“Hey Guys!!”

Chouji, Shikamaru and Kiba Turned around and each took there own time to say “Hey Naruto!”

“Im Being forced to wear a tux to Sakura’s birthday, I think she planning something. Knowing Sakura it’s pure evil, remember the time she Set u up Chouji and it ended with you and pig guts on your head” Naruto shuddered at the thought.

“Yeah, I can still smell it” Said Chouji as he also shuddered, “And Ino was meeting up with her today!”

They all Immediately went quiet, knowing how evil Ino was, her plus Sakura just equaled double trouble.

Kiba was first to speak after the silence, “Are you being forced to wear a tux too?”

Everyone, with the exception of Kiba, sweat dropped, Shikamaru hit him over the head “Were you not listening? Moron” Shikamaru then Sighed.

Kiba answered quickly “no…i got lost after - ‘Hey Guys’ - so yeah…” He slowly trailed off.

“Troublesome” Everyone looked at the boy who said this.

“Chouji that’s my line” Said Shikamaru with his eyebrow twitching

“my bad, sorry Shikamaru” apologized Chouji.

“it’s ok, we should go get changed the party starts in an hour” Stated Shikamaru with an even louder and longer sigh.

Naruto saw this as his cue to say bye, “ok talk at the party guys, be on you guard knowing Sakura and Ino, something will happen” he then started to walk off.

“Bye” the free said in sync

“Troublesome” Muttered Chouji.

“Stop saying my line!!” shouted an enraged genius.

At the party that night they all came at separate times. First was Sakura and Ino, Of course, Then came Shikamaru, Chouji and Kiba, after them were Lee, Neji and Tenten, then Hinata and Shino. They were all sitting down and laughing enjoying the music and dancing.

“Where is Naruto?” Said an eager Sakura.

“Don’t know, I saw him this afternoon” reported Kiba.

“He’s Probably Just finished Training, His Flame of youth burns so brightly” Stated Lee

Everyone’s Sweat Dropped for the 2nd time that night

“Troublesome” muttered a boy.

“STOP SAYING MY LINE CHOUJI!!” shouted Shikamaru.

“Sorry forgot again” Chouji said whilst rubbing the back of his head very Naruto-like

“Hey, There he is” Said Neji. Everyone was surprised due to the fact it was the first thing that he had said all night.

They all looked towards the door, but the light was blinding them, all they could see was an orange and black figure, as it came closer everyone Gasped in Surprise as Naruto, without his headband looked like the yondaime, Except for the whisker marks naturally.

Suddenly Hinata could feel her face burning up, Naruto was smoking tonight, and Geese he knew It. The way Naruto casually strolled up to them, no doubt about it, showed that he loved his look.

“Hey Guys” Naruto paused for a second seeing all the looks he was getting from, not only his friends, but other random people from the crowd too.

“What are you looking at?” asked Naruto, obviously confused.

“You just…You look so much like the Yondaime Naruto-kun” said Tenten as she stared at him in awe.

“Well thank you!” Naruto said with his trademark grin.

He sat at the end near lee for about 15 minutes, they talked about multiple things; Training, Food, missions, gossip. At least until Ino gave the ok to Sakura to talk to Naruto.

“Naruto can I talk to you for a second, on the Porch” Demanded the girl.

Naruto was puzzled, did he do something wrong? Or is this Sakura’s evil plan for the night. “Umm” Naruto was hesitant until he finally gave in “Sure”

Naruto slowly got up from where he sat and made his way to the Porch with Sakura. As they stepped on the porch Sakura Began to talk.

“Naruto, Its about Hinata” Started Sakura in a sad tone.

Naruto suddenly snapped his head towards the girl that was speaking “What’s wrong with Hinata?”

“First you have to promise to do what I want?”

Naruto looked over at the pink headed girl and nodded.

“She’s been upset lately…” Sakura trailed off for a moment, “And I think that if you dance with her tonight and get to know her. She might feel better.”

“Sakura-chan, I wish to help Hinata in anyway, she is my friend. But I don’t know if she wouldn’t dance with me” As Naruto said this, his facial expression turned to sad and his eyes dimmed.

“Yes she will, Naruto… You’re the person she most admires, she looks up to you. just do it, you promised…”

“Of course I will…Sakura-Chan,” replied a happy

They both then made their way back out towards where everyone was. Naruto had hesitantly sat next to Hinata and Five more minutes had past. Naruto decided to ask since now, Sakura was dancing with lee, Tenten with Neji, Ino with Shikamaru and Chouji and Kiba with random people. Of course Shino just sat there, not talking, as usual.

“Ano… (Umm) Hinata…Would you like to dance?” Asked Naruto as he turned to the girl with a big grin.

Hinata started to blush and thought to herself ‘Ohh please god don’t faint’

“umm…Su-Sure”

Naruto got up and walked over the other side of the table, he extended a hand to Hinata , who took it gracefully, they then got up and walked over to the dance floor. As they were walking the song ended and Sakura put in her request, Micheal Buble’s Song ‘You Don’t Know Me’ (recommended) came on

They started to dance Slowly, Naruto’s hands at her waist and Hinata’s hands around his neck, she was avoiding eye contact and staring at his chest. Naruto hadn’t notice how beautiful Hinata looked till now, Her Hair was let out, it tumbled over her shoulders and the dress she was wearing was strapless, revealing the shoulder, Her figure was great, and he hair was soft.

Naruto and Hinata slowly pulled back there heads so they could see in each others eyes, Naruto had the erge to kiss her, Slowly they both leaned towards each other, Hinata could feel his breathe on her lips and just prayed that she didn’t faint. Naruto lent down for the final time and Kiba ran up to them yelled ”NARUTO COME HERE QUICKY”

Hinata and Naruto Blushed at each other as they looked up to Kiba, Naruto giving him a deathstare. Naruto went off to see what had happened, soon followed by Hinata

“Look at those dogs for at it” said Kiba as he held his thumb up nodding his head back and forwards like an idiot.

“You brought me over for this, you’re worse then Ero-Sennin, You baka!

“Naruto, Hinata, Come over here!” Yelled a persistent Sakura from the porch, she saw her plan nearly work and then be destroyed by that pervert Kiba.

“Yes, Sakura?” Asked Naruto.

“I need to talk to you both please wait on the porch, I will be there in a second,” replied the girl.

“Ok Sakura” Said Hinata.

They walked towards the door that leads to the porch. As they just stepped onto the porch .Naruto turned around and walked backwards ready to start a conversation, “So-“ he was cut off when Hinata tripped on some string that laid upon the ground. Only to fall on top of Naruto

They Just Laid there staring into each others eye’s, Naruto’s mind just stopped working.

“Im So-Sorry” stuttered Hinata.

as she went to get up she was stopped by Naruto’s grip on her arms

“Don’t be” and with that Naruto Captured her lips in an Passionate kiss, His arms traveled to her waist whilst she brought her hands up to his cheeks, deepening the said kiss. After what seemed like an eternity, Naruto realized what he was doing and broke the kiss, He Quickly got up and went towards the edge

“i-i-im S-Sorry Hi-Hinata, I Sh-Shouldn’t Have” Stuttered Naruto as he got up from the girl and moved towards the edge of the porch. Before Hinata could say a word Naruto went jumping off from tree to tree.

Hinata just sat there stunned, not knowing what to say, then she got a depressed look on her face.

A minute later Sakura walked in to see Hinata just sitting on the ground.

“Hinata, Where’s Naruto……” She looked at her friends pale complexion, “Are you okay Hinata?”

Sakura was very worried for her friend who was standing there stunned

“he…he kissed me” as she put a finger to her lip and closed her eye’s in joy.

“He did WHAT!!” shouted Sakura as she rolled up her sleeves.

As Naruto jumped through the trees on his way home he mentally cursed himself for what he had done, he shouldn’t have done that, he doesn’t like her that way. At least that’s what he thinks.

Argh why do I do stuff like this Thought the boy

Kit, why don’t you give it a chance The boy suddenly looked around and then realized it was his ‘tenant’

I refuse too do that, I know she will get hurt he stubbornly told the fox.

She will get more hurt if u re-ject her

What do you know?! “stupid fox” He muttered.

I know you better then you know yourself, Im not the one that goes around with a mask on all day! Roared Kyuubi

Naruto suddenly missed the next tree as he heard Kyuubi yell at him, it had startled the blond. He fell down and hit the ground with a thump.

Stuff off you baka!

Naruto slowly, and painfully, got up and continued to his apartment in order to think of what he had done, he knew that tomorrow when he went out he was going to get a fist full of Sakura, Literally, she Probably knows just what he had done and is ready to pound him for it. He could just imagine himself sitting in Ichiraku’s and then suddenly, Sakura gaining the mangekyou Sharingan and torturing him for seventy-four hours, Even though she hasn’t got Sharingan.

As the thoughts of getting hit came into his head, he knew he had to get everything in order, but how he was to do that was still a mystery, he thought about what Kyuubi said, and took it into consideration. Naruto was now near his apartment only five more minutes and he was there, he stopped into Ichiraku and had a bowl of ramen to go, of course, with Sakura on the loose he wasn’t going to sit in there and eat, he took it to the park and ate it.

Naruto then walked into his apartment, sat down on the couch and looked out the open window. He began to think of what would happen if he and Hinata did become a couple.

If me and Hinata become a couple she will be shunned around the city, or worse she will get disowned and treated like I have been my whole life and I don’t want that for her, all she would have is me. She has a family right now. Why would she give it up for some orphan boy.

Kit, She Deserves to have a say in it though

Who asked you! Teme…

Kyuubi Voice Rose;

Listen to me, and listen to me good, you can’t just let her slip away like this, you need to give her a chance, tell her about me.

But- Replied Naruto, dumbstruck

If she truly loves you, she will not run, hide or be ashamed, she will stick by you, no matter what

But-

No Buts go and talk to her, and figure everything out Kyuubi then sighed.

Fine, but if I need your help, I will call for you and you are not to step in unless asked too

Agreed, I am the nine-tailed demon, and will not go back on my words.

“Finally something we have in common”Muttered Naruto.

Naruto bolted out of his window, landing safely on the ground below, and began to look for Hinata.

Back at the party Sakura was still trying to get a sentence out of Hinata which seemed hopeless about now. She had been standing there for a hell of a long time and she was yet to answer.

“Hinata, did Naruto… kiss you?” Asked the pink head.

Hinata still didn’t answer; she just sat still and looked forward, into the trees.

“Hinata!” Sakura yelled

“Ano…Gomen (sorry), Sakura” said Hinata quietly.

Still the same Hinata thought Sakura as she stared at the pale girl in front of her. Sakura then reached and grabbed Hinata’s arms pulling her up from the ground, “you should go and talk to Naruto”

Hinata looked like she was going to faint. Hinata looked down at the ground, confidence slowly slipping.

“Knowing Naruto he probably doesn’t know what to do about this, you must confirm to him that you will be there for him no matter what happens” Said the girl.

“B-But-“Stuttered Hinata.

Sakura looked Hinata in the eye with a firm look, “No Buts, as Birthday girl I demand u to go and find him!” Sakura then turned and left the porch, leaving Hinata with her thoughts.

What will I say to Naruto-kun when I find him, I mean how do I say what I’ve wanted to say for so, oh so long. I mean do I just blurt it out, or do I kiss him then say it, OR do I let him speak. That last one sounds good.

With that Hinata raced off to Naruto’s apartment dodging trees and people as she ran. She raced down the long roads, charging chakra into her feet to make her go faster. She ran past Ichiraku and towards Naruto’s Apartment, she saw, not wait. Stalked, him their often so she knew it was his house.

When she got there she was greeted by nothing, the leaves were dancing in the wind outside the window which was wide open.

Where is Naruto-kun? Asked a panicked Hinata to know one, her heart began to race until she finally gave in.

I should just stay here and wait for him to get home, Yeah! That’s a good idea She told herself as she sat down on the couch, awaiting her love.

Naruto was speeding off everywhere in search for Hinata and at the same as time trying to avoid Sakura. He could of sworn he had searched everywhere. He had gone to the Hyuuga compound only to get kicked out. He went to all Hinata’s favorite places, but she was no-where.

He suddenly turned around a corner, only to run into an enraged Sakura. As soon as Sakura had spotted him she slapped him over the face, hard.

“ITAI!! (Ouch),” whined Naruto as he rubbed his face “I take it you heard?”

Sakura looked at him with a look of ‘Ohh what do you think!’ and turned to him “of course I heard,” she then looked around at her surroundings, “wait why are you out here?”

Naruto looked at her sheepishly as he rubbed the back of his head and had a trademark grin on his face.

“Hehe,” He laughed as he turned towards Sakura, “Im looking for Hinata, you seen her?”

Sakura couldn’t help a smirk from the growth of Naruto’s mature-ness “she was heading to your apartment last time I checked”

Naruto’s hurt expression suddenly turned into an excited one as he began to run off. “Thanks Sakura!” he yelled from behind him.

Naruto ran around a corner and through the door to his apartment.

As Naruto entered his apartment he was greeted to the most adorable site, Hinata was curled up in a ball on his couch shivering, the breeze from the open window cooling her body off. Naruto slowly walked over to the closet and grabbed a blanket. He walked over to the petite girl and wrapped it around her, as he turned to leave for his room he felt her grab his wrist

Hinata shifted her head towards him and sleepily she muttered “Naruto-kun, please stay with me”

No stutter, ARGH!! Said Naruto as he mentally ran around in a circle what should I do Kyuubi?

Stay With her Kit Replied the wise Fox.

Naruto looked towards the girl, a small smile managed its way onto his face. I think I will…

Naruto slipped next to the indigo haired girl, putting his arm over her figure. He snuggled into the crook off her neck and she sighed in pleasure. The girl then turned around in her sleep and placed a small kiss on the blonde’s lips. “Thank you…Naruto-kun” said the girl in a sleepy tone.

Naruto placed his chin on her head as she rested her head on his chest.

They fell Asleep that way, lying in each others arms, in pure bliss.

The next morning Hinata awoke to something very warm in front of her body, she snuggled up to the heat and slowly opened her eyes to see a orange blouse with a black tie and a little bit of a black suit. She sleepily adjusted her eyes to her surroundings she looked over the room she was in, then her eyes widened on the site before her

She was in Naruto’s apartment and sleeping next to Naruto! Her loved Naruto, the one she admired most in the entire world, right in front of her. She could smell his odor, which consisted of ramen.

Hinata slowly got up, sure to not wake the blond, and went into the kitchen. The kitchen didn’t exactly surprise her; it was just a normal kitchen with the exception of cupboards stocked with ramen. Whilst she was there she decided she would make Naruto some breakfast, the thought of him eating her good made her happy.

After Hinata had finished cooking the smell of bacon had reached Naruto and awoke him from his deep sleep. He looked down and noticed that Hinata wasn’t there, He assumed that he had dreamt the whole thing and that Sakura was cooking him bacon because ramen was ‘unhealthy’

He got up and walked to the kitchen, he slowly rounded the corner and realized that it defiantly wasn’t a dream and that the person cooking was defiantly not Sakura. the site that greeted him reminded him of the kiss the girl had given him the night before.

He was snapped out of his thoughts when Hinata began to stutter a sentence to him, “Nar-Naruto-Kun, Your Aw-Awake”

Naruto nodded his head, “Yeah, the bacon smelt nice”

Kyuubi a little help? Asked the blonde to his so called ‘wise’ friend.

Ask her if you can talk to her for a minute

“Hinata… can I talk to you for a minute?” Asked the boy as he motioned towards the lounge room.

“about” said Hinata as she gulped, “Last night?”

Hinata picked up the two plates that had egg and bacon on them and walked towards Naruto, “how about after breakfast?”

Naruto’s facial expression turned to one of depression seeing as Hinata was trying to stall, but he continued to solider through it putting on his fake smile and nodding at her whilst sniffing at the air

“Sure! It smells so wonderful Hinata”

He then took a seat at the table and began to eat his bacon, talking only once to tell her how good her cooking was.

From that point on breakfast was very awkward; no-one spoke a word witch was weird for Naruto. Hinata just played with her food, every once in a while eating a bite, whilst Naruto ate his slowly, which was odd for him also.

After breakfast Naruto grabbed Hinata’s hand and led her to his room. He sat her on the bed and she waited for him to say something, he looked down, thinking of the words to say what he wished to say.

“Hinata, I need you to know something” said Naruto as a sad expression took over his face.

Hinata looked at him curiously

“I…don’t…Love you” he spat out, Hinata felt her heart sink and she turned her head to the ground, tears beginning to fall.

Naruto saw this and slowly walked up to the girl, he raised his hand to her chin and slowly lifted it so she was facing him “but” he said slowly as her heart began to beat faster, “I feel as though we could be more then friends,” he trailed off for a second, “and Im willing to give it a try, but before we do there is something you need to know”

“Naruto-kun…What is it?” Asked Hinata.

“Hinata, I finally realized what you’ve wanted to tell me all along, but before you say it yours self you have to know something. Also, at the end of this I will understand if you wish to run away,” He looked into the girls violet eyes

“You can tell me Naruto-kun” Said Hinata, unwaveringly.

“You know the story of the Kyuubi, no?” asked Naruto.

“Yes, the fourth killed Kyuubi-” Naruto cut her off.

“He didn’t kill the Kyuubi; he sealed it in a newborn”

Gasp.

Hinata put the pieces together already, she’s quick thought Naruto.

Hinata jumped towards Naruto and pulled him towards herself. Hinata and Naruto were suddenly in an passionate kiss, Naruto put his weight on her and they both went back on the bed, Naruto on Hinata. His hands went o her cheeks whilst hers behind his head. Each finding their own way to deepen the kiss. They then rolled over and Hinata was on top of Naruto, practically straddling him.

When Hinata pulled away she stated, very calmly, without a stutter, “I will not abandon you Naruto-Kun!”

Naruto and Hinata were now laying down in each others embrace, after about half an hour, they fell asleep.

Watching from a tree a little bit away was a kid who had the same eyes as Hinata. He grinded his teeth and clenched his fist.

“Hinata-sama, you’re father will not be pleased...”

TBC…