Author: redfeatherz PM
A twoshot thing. An Ari POV about his last moments. Reveiw if you want another chapter and a happy ending PLZ. and check out my other stories.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Tragedy/Sci-Fi - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,816 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 2 - Follows: 3 - Updated: 11-07-07 - Published: 11-06-07 - id: 3877549
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((random Ari POV thing. Just felt like writing something, so I did ;) please review even though it's a oneshotish, cause there's going to be one more chapter. Check out my other stories too plz. Review with thoughts/ideas/etc. If I get five reviews in the next fifteen minutes, then I'll post again today. Sound fair? So review if you want a happy ending : mwa ha ha ha!))
I was fighting beside Max, finally. I knew that I was dying, but all that mattered was that I was killing what had taken my place, killing the things that had ruined my life. I was fighting for all I had. Which was nothing. But I was still fighting hard.
I saw Max come to my help when I started to get overwhelmed, but then everything blinked weird. Almost like it was one of those film strips that they make the actual pictures. Negative. Then my legs got really cold, like I was slowly being lowered into icy water.
I stumbled, then fell to my knees. I made a choking sound, I think.
I was going deeper in the water. My eyes blinked negative again. And again.
Max crouched beside me, and then I started to fall back. Into my sister's arms. Into the icy water.
((sorry it's so short, but the next chappie will be longer. Promise! But only if you review!))