Author: DTakersGurls PM
A slight reworking of Ritchie's death scene in FDTD. Update It's not a slight reworking anymore now it's an AU story. it changes the endign of the movie completely.Rated: Fiction T - English - Angst/Tragedy - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,385 - Reviews: 1 - Favs: 2 - Updated: 12-18-07 - Published: 12-14-07 - id: 3946287
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Hot tears flooded Seth's eyes. He furiously wiped at his eyes as he watched his little brother scream in agony.
"It…fuckin hurts." Ritchie Gecko whispered. He coughed sending rivulets of blood flowing from his mouth. Seth's heart felt like it was being ripped apart. His brother was dying and there wasn't a damn thing he could do to save him. No hospitals nearby. All the vampires had been killed but they had locked the door before and they were unable to get out. Seth looked up and saw the Fuller's still trying to force the door open.
Seth looked back down at his brother. His face had become even paler and more blood coursed down his throat where that vampire bitch bit him. But her got her. She's now residing in hell along with all her other friends.
He gently placed a hand on Ritchie's head, smoothing his matted hair back. Suddenly he turned his head he violently coughed blood onto the floor. He turned his face back to gaze at his worried brother.
"Fucking…B…Bitch…" He mumbled around a mouthful of blood. The youngest of the Gecko brother's eyes began to gloss over. A sheen of cold sweat broke out on Ritchie's face, causing the blood to run rampant down his cheeks.
Seth's began to hyperventilate. But he managed to appear calm. He kept trying to comfort his brother. He gently ruffled his hair as he swallowed the burning lump in his throat.
"Hey Buddy…I'm sorry. I'm so sorry I fucked things up. It wasn't supposed t be like this. We were going to be so fucking happy in El Ray. I love you Ritchie."
Ritchie blinked as he struggled to hear him. He sounded so damn far away. He looked at his brother before the darkness claimed him.
"Love….y…you too…Seth." He whispered. Suddenly his head rolled to the side. Seth watched as Ritchie let out the last breath of his life. His eyes drifted close.
Seth let out a choked sob. The tears flowed freely down his cheeks as he cradled his brother's bloodied body in his arms. He buried his face in Ritchie's chest, sobbing.
"I'm so sorry. I…couldn't save you. I'm a goddamned fucking idiot!" He screamed into his brother's bloodied chest.