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Author: demonalchemist5
Fiction Rated: K+ - English - Friendship - Reviews: 4 - Published: 12-14-07 - Updated: 06-08-08 - id:3946654

THIS CHAPTER IS NOT A REPEAT!

There are some unique ideas in this chapter, so please enjoy, if you’re still reading.

Here’s a short chapter to get back into the story.


Ride 5: Coal Cracker

The group had taken Al’s suggestion. In line, Kagome declared that the seating order was returning to normal. That meant that Ed would seat in the front with Al, and Kagome would sit in the back with InuYasha.

The wait was a little longer than last time because there were slightly more people in line than last time. A little later, they arrived at the gate. Kazumi gave them a boat letter, just like last time.

…ED’S POV…ED’S POV…ED’S POV…ED’S POV…ED’S POV…ED’S POV…

Everybody got into the boat, except for Ed. Ed, remembering how wet Kagome had gotten last time, was hesitant to get in.

Tohru walked over. “I’m sorry, but you must get in now or exit.”

Ed, not wanting to abandon his friends and his brother, quickly stepped into the boat and sat in the front most seat.

Tohru, recognizing them from before, told them, “I know that you know the rules, so I won’t bore you with them. Have fun!”

The ride ran about the same as last time. On the turns, Kagome teased Ed about how poorly he was “driving.”

The final drop of the ride came up quickly. After heading up the last hill and turning the last turn, it was time. The boat passed the blonde guy sitting under his umbrella, then the boat plummeted down the final hill.

...KAGOME POV…KAGOME POV…KAGOME POV…KAGOME POV…

After the drop, Kagome had to laugh at the sight surrounding her. Ed was drenched, and water dripped from InuYasha’s white hair. Yes, InuYasha was drenched too. Kagome and Al didn’t get wet at all that time. No wonder Ed like this seat so much.

…EDWARD POV…EDWARD POV…EDWARD POV…EDWARD POV…

The boat pulled into the station again and the group exited. As they walked to the next ride, Ed complained, “Not fair! My boots are all squishy!”


As I said, this is a short chapter, but I’m just trying to get back into the story.

Next chapter, the gang rides a roller coaster. It’s metal with an initial drop of 124 feet. I hope that everyone continues to read the story.

It’s almost summer! Yeah!



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