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Cantare
Author of 26 Stories
Rated: T - English - Trunks - Reviews: 35 - Updated: 01-30-12 - Published: 12-22-07 - id:3960477

A/N: I believe it is good for authors to have at least one "brain dump." A piece of writing that has no consequence, hence a dumping ground for thoughts and an outlet for stress. Comments/questions/criticisms are all appreciated.


This is not a story.

A story has a beginning, a point at which a plot is born, sometimes quite messily and sometimes in a rather sterile fashion, and starts on the often tortuous, seldom straightforward path of a maturing process. A story also has an end. This word bears two meanings of unequal significance: the conclusion of the plot, and a purpose. The former is quite simple; the plot concludes when the words on the page are no more. The latter, on the other hand, is the essence of a story. Purpose is the lifeblood that pulses through every word, no matter how short or trivial. A story has a reason to be told. Without an end in this sense, it is a lifeless pile of words.

This is not a story, though the man who narrates it would like to think that it is, because of the crucial thing it lacks. It may have a beginning and an end in the first sense of the word, but it has no reason to come alive.

This is a long, largely mundane, often incoherent, at times sordid compilation of sentences detailing a man's life. Try as he might, he cannot extract a purpose from the events he narrates and thus inject meaning into his words. The reader may be more successful at that; to each his own.

On the next page is a beginning without an end.

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