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Sorry for the long wait but it's hard coming up with new stuff. Well on to the next part of The Fox and the Comet.
Same disclaimers apply.
And now Let the Magic Begin.
5 days has past since my class has got their headbands and I don't think my party is gonna leave anyone's minds. Just think of the one I'll make after the teamwork tests. I thought long and hard as I took a walk after showing up to have my picture taken for a book of some kind in Hidden Leaf. I used a salute in front of a flag I made, an American flag with the village symbol on it. The Hokage was confused by it but he let it slide. I told Naruto to do the same thing for his. Putting on my red Oakley Sunglasses I set out in my trademark speed to Hinata's house for her weekly lessons. Once at the Hyuga estate the guards saw me and greeted me.
"Oh hello Ryu. Hinata-sama is at the playground you made at the courtyard." one guard said.
"Thanks." I said preparing to walk past. "Where's Hiashi?"
"Over by the fireplace at the living room. Lady Hitome's out shopping." said the guard.
"OK thanks again." I said as I went inside. first I went to the living room.
"You know when I heard that sonic boom, I'd knew you come calling." said Hiashi.
"You know me. Lord Hiashi, I always like attention." I said taking the chair next to him.
"Taking Hinata bandit hunting today?" asked Hiashi.
"Yep. It's always a great way to build up confidence. You know I always step in if things get too hairy." I said taking out a roast stick, putting a hot dog on the end and using the fire to cook it. "Want one?"
"No that's alright. You've already have left enough leftovers when you cooked for us last time you and your brother came to have
dinner with us." chuckled Hiashi. "After all these years it still amazes me with your skills."
"I'm the 2nd generation Blue Comet remember?" I asked.
"I know, old jungle saying: The Blue Comet is skilled in many aspects in and out of the battle zone." said Hiashi.
"No matter what the age." I said finishing the quote while putting my cooked hot dog on a bun, putting on some squirt-on cheese and eating it.
"Last meeting I had with the Hokage, he said you picked the name for his grandson." said Hiashi.
"Well he wanted to repay me after I gave him the scroll on my Perfect Clone Jutsu to help him with his paperwork." I said.
"The same technique you taught my brother?" asked Hiashi.
"Well the one I taught him had a booby trap attached to it to give those Hidden Cloud jerks a lesson. The caged bird seal was the trigger." I said taking out a scroll. "Which reminds me. I designed a better seal for the branch members. It'll
still seal away those eyes when they pass on, but it won't make brain damage. It goes on the arm. I advise you use it on the loyal ones. Your brother and Neji fit well there." Hiashi unrolled the scroll, it was the Yin Yang symbol with the Kanji for seal in the middle of it.
"Bless your little heart. First that potion you made saved my wife can be okay after she had Hanabi, helping out my brother, now helping me unite my family." said Hiashi with tears in his eyes.
"With the way Hinata feels about Naruto, we could turn out to be family one of these days." I said in a matter of fact way.
"I know. Ever since you came here and made yourself an Uzumaki you worked hard to make sure no one saw him as the Kyuubi. You even made sure it wasn't her fault for attacking the village." said Hiashi.
"That honor goes to a certain Snake Sanin killing her kits, framing the village by wearing the headband and sending her in a bloodlust. She and the first Blue Comet was a great team. Together me and Naruto'll make sure that tradition goes on." I said.
"You and your ways of making points." chuckled Hiashi.
"Well, I'd better get Hinata and start the hunt. Somewhere there is a crime happening. Catch you later."
I said heading for the playground. Hinata was on a swing when I showed up. "Been waiting long?" I asked.
"Big Brother!" squealed Hinata as she ran to hug me. Since she wants to marry Naruto thus making us in-laws it's only suiting she calls me that. "I thought you forgot our trip."
"As if! You know me better then that!" I said in disgust. "Since you made the grade, I got you a few gifts." With that, I got out a midnight blue dress out of a sub space pocket I made. It was better then those sealing scrolls. No reason to waste blood.
"That dress is the same color as the jumpsuits you and Naruto wear." said Hinata. I chuckled. Naruto took to wearing my choice of outfit just to copy me. Least it got him out of that orange.
"Yep. Let's see how it looks on you." I said getting out a changing screen. "Try it on." Hinata got behind the screen to change.
"I'm waiting." I said after a while. Hinata came out wearing the dress. It fit her like a glove. "Great! Now for the finishing touches!" I said getting out a midnight blue jacket and crimson red boots. Hinata put them on. "I think we found your look." I said.
"I'm not so sure about this." said Hinata blushing.
"Sometimes Hinata girls ninjas use their looks to catch their male enemies off guard. That old look wasn't cutting it." I said.
"If you say so." said Hinata. I got out a vile.
"Now for your next present. This potion can change your eye color. You can still use your Byakugan, but this will make sure you have pupils. Thus giving you the element of surprise." I told her Hinata drank it and her eyes took a normal style with a beautiful shade of purple. "1 last touch." I said taking her headband from around her neck and ting it in her hair like Sakura's since I made sure her hair's as long as Sakura's after she was forced to cut it. I then placed a keyboard shaped medallion around her neck. "Perfect. Metal Style: HYPER MIRROR!"
"Wow!" said Hinata as she looked at the mirror I made. "Is that really me?"
"Ether that or a dark haired Tsunade. But I'm sure it's you." I joked causing Hinata to glomp me again.
"Thank you so much big brother. I love it!" she said.
"No big. Now what say we give some bandits a lesson on manners, Comet Style?" I asked getting a nod in return.
"Alright boys, that was a good score!" a bandit said to his crew at the outskirts of the village.
"This is the best caravan we've ever robbed boss." said the 2nd bandit.
"Yeah boss, we could retire in style." said the 3rd bandit.
"Say boss, what are you going to do with your share?" asked the 4th bandit.
"I'll tell ya." said the lead bandit.
"Give up and turn yourself in." I said from the shadows nearby.
"Give up and turn myself--HEY! WHO SAID THAT?" shouted the lead bandit befor I appeared.
"Hey look boss a Genin." said the 5th bandit.
"Hmm. 13 Chunin from the Hidden Mist Village. Nuke-Nins I take it. And dumb ones too." I said as Hinata appeared.
"Didn't you once say that all bandits are dumb?" she asked.
"True. It's just that these guys have no sense whatsoever. They don't even have fashion sense." I said making her laugh.
"How dare you tease the Rose Racketeers! Who are you?" asked the lead bandit.
"The name's Ryu Uzumaki. I am the 2nd generation Blue Comet." I said making the bandits laugh.
"That fairy tale? There's no such thing!" laughed the lead bandit. "Get them boys!"
"You take the ones on the right Hinata, I'll get the left." I said taking off in a burst of speed.
"Huh? where did he go?" asked the 3rd bandit.
"Fire Style: PYRO DARTS!" I cried throwing darts made of fire at them. "That answer you question boys, or do you need your brains looked at?"
"LET'S GET HIM BOYS" cried the 4th bandit as he and his buddies tried to get me with their kunais and water jutsus.
"Is that all? I haven't even broken a sweat yet." I said leaning against a tree.
"Let's try attacking from higher ground. Everyone up that tree!" ordered the 7th bandit.
"Bad idea." I said watching them climb. "Wood Style: DANCING TREE!" I cried placing my hand on the tree they were on, making it shake and throw them to the ground. "Wood Style: VINE ENSNARE!" I then tied them up with vines. I then took them and dragged them to where Hinata was. Who was creaming her half with her Gentle Fist Style and her Water Jutsus. I found out Water was her chakra nature the year before and give a copy of my Water Jutsu scroll.
Hinata slammed a palm into the pelvis of one of the bandits causing him to bend over to her height where she slammed a palm into his chest and then his face sending him down
She then rolled out of the way of a sloppy tackle by one of the bandits before she hopped to her feet and slammed her palm down on his back, knocking the wind from his lungs and sending him to an unconscious state.
She got blind sided by a much less sloppier bandit and his fist sent her down
“come on Hinata, you have 360 vision don’t focus on one spot!!” I shouted
She pushed her self to her feet as the bandit threw another punch but she tilted her upper body to the left avoiding it barely before pushing her legs to lunge at him to slam a palm in his gut, sending him sliding on the ground, knocked out cold
Another bandit ran up behind her and she quickly whirled around and slammed a palm in his gut then his chest and then again in the gut in a quick blur, knocking the bandit down,
Then one last bandit ran up behind her and she dropped to her gut and pushed the ground with her arms to slide under his feet before jumping up and slamming a palm in the back of his neck sending him face first to the ground.
"Nice." I said.
"I had a good teacher. Too bad the leader got away." said Hinata. Scout let out a screech.
"Not for long. Scout, think you can find him?" I asked my eagle. Scout screeched again and took to the air. "SIGHT SHARE!" I cried making both Scout's and my eyes glow. With this technique I was seeing through his eyes. "He's about 20 feet southwest. And it looks like he's having a heart attack." I snickered.
"What should we do now?" asked Hinata.
"Leave him to me." I said running off to him.
"H-how can this happen? T-they was just Genin! T-they can't be human!" stammered the lead bandit.
"Oh but we are." I said appearing 10 feet away from him while giving him a glare that could make a certain dark knight proud.
"S-stay away from me!" stammered the bandit taking out a sword. I took out mine. My sword is the same type of sword Kenshin uses only the handle and holder was dark red and if I channel my chakra to the blade I can make it change sides. An hour long kenjutsu match started and ended with me knocking the bandit's sword away.
"You will pay for this outrage!" he declared while I put my sword away. I then made a fist with my right hand and channeled my chakra to it.
"Tell that to the friends you make in person!" I said in a eerie voice while punching his right cheek. It now had the same image I had on the back of my right hand, a person being struck down by a blue comet.
"I'll get you for that!" said the bandit making hand signs but couldn't perform a jutsu.
"Don't waste you time. The fighting part of your chakra is sealed. And only I can unseal it." I said grabbing him. After turning him and his crew in we headed back to my house so Hinata can ask Naruto out on a date.
"Hey bro! I made this new friend and he asked to meet you and-- WOAH! HINATA IS THAT YOU?" asked Naruto when we came in. Hinata blushed but nodded.
"Amazing how girls bloom like that don't you think Naruto?" I asked.
"I'll say Hina-chan, you look really pretty." said Naruto making Hinata blush and faint. I sighed and threw a small scroll at her. it disappeared when it touched her making her wake up.
"N-Naruto, would you like to see a m-movie tonight?" she managed out.
"Sure I would love too." said Naruto.
"Why not go on a boat ride after it?" I asked.
"That's a neat idea bro." said Naruto. I smirked. The plans I have for that.
"So Naruto, who's he?" I asked pointing to a certain little boy I didn't need to think twice on who it is.
"Oh that's Tai. He's the Hokage's grandson and a new friend." Tai grumbled thinking I'd call him Honored Grandson as I bent down to his level.
"Is that so? Nice to meet you rookie. I advised that name of yours when you was still in your mom's tummy." I said ruffling his hair.
"You did?" asked Tai. I nodded and sat down on my favorite red rocking recliner allowing him to sit on my lap. "Naruto taught me his Sexy no Jutsu."
"Vega Omega Naruto, did you have to teach him THAT?" I asked.
"Well he asked me to." said Naruto. I sweat-dropped.
"Well I think I'd better teach him something more useful." I said. "Listen up kiddo, from now on you're under my wing. After classes you report here for advanced training. When I'm out on missions you practice on scrolls I'll be leaving you. If my bro thinks you're worth training then you must have potential. But I won't go easy. Understand?" I asked.
"Yes sir! I had enough easy anyway sir!" said Tai. I checked the clock.
"Okay. Naruto, Hinata. Your movie starts in 10 minutes. Better get going if you want good seats." I said sending them off.
Once they left I started to teach Tai tree climbing.
Another part done. I know I'm rushing things but I'm out of ideas here. Don't forget to review. To those with Wings, fly to your dreams.