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0'Hanabira'0
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Rated: T - English - Humor/Romance - Reviews: 6 - Published: 01-07-08 - Complete - id:3998035
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Disclaimer: No own, no sue, k? Also, this is a fic written in mental process...so it's not smooth like regular prose. It was a cute idea, so don't kill me...


Mental Notes

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No, more colour here…Sweeping arcs, sweeping arcs…Natural is key, not textbook…More delicate petals…too forced…erase that…Soft like…Koji's smile…wait, no. Focus…charcoal on paper… landscape… focus…ripples of water…gentle…gentle like Koji's eyes…STOP! ! Focus…nature...not nurture…put skill to use…talents…archery…bows…arrows…Koji's slightly revealed chest…NO NO NO! Windy fields…bending limbs…Tree! swaying bodies…I MEAN GRASS! LANDSCAPE! NOT KOJI! Paper…not lover…Koji…sweet smile…gentle heart…strong body…rough hands…on my body…Koji…please notice me…noticing you…

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