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Hello there! This is my first Mature rated fic I've posted so far, so be nice and tell me how you think.
The song I used was Dissolved Girl by Massive Attack
And I realize that the story Hells Nine Tails and mine are similar, but thats just what happens when there are thousands of stories on the same site. So, if you like mine, then I suggest you read the story Hells Nine Tails.
“No.”
“But you’ve never been there before! Just once, please?”
Naruto’s face began to take on the characteristics of a cute little puppy dog, combating his big blue eyes against my will.
I hesitated slightly before I refused again. The truth was that I really did want to go; I just didn’t want him to know this. Naruto worked in a bar somewhere downtown, but I was afraid that if I got drunk, that I might do some things that I might regret. I’ve had a crush on Naruto for as long as I could remember. Naruto was annoying, loud, obnoxious, and stupid. But he had the most gorgeous eyes I had ever seen, like the ocean, but even bluer. He also was nice and sincere, and he wouldn’t ever think of stabbing his friends in their back.
“Just once, and I’ll never ask you again.” Naruto pleaded.
By now, I was too distracted by Naruto’s signature orange shirt to even give him a proper answer. He always wore that damn shirt. I looked him over and sighed. Naruto was cute, but he had horrible fashion sense. He was wearing his favorite orange t-shirt, a pair of loose blue jeans, and sandals. The sight made my eyes hurt.
“Please?” His bottom lip started to quiver slightly as his eyed bore into mine.
“Fine. I’ll come if you give me $100,” I said jokingly. I really wanted to finally get to see the club he worked in. He hadn’t told me much about it; all I knew was that it was a very popular club. Naruto smiled at me and started digging through his baggy blue jeans for the money.
“I was kidding about the money,” I mumbled before walking away.
“YEAH!” Naruto jumped up and down a few times, “You won’t regret it!” He skipped away.
o.O.o.O.o.O.o.O.o.O.o
“This is it?” I asked after I got out of the car. I looked over to Neji for an answer.
“Yeah, I’ve been here before.” Neji replied nonchalantly.
I raised my eyebrows at Neji.
“What?” He asked, miffed by my reaction.
“Nothing, I just never would have pictured you as the clubbing type.”
Neji’s responding smirk was smug. “This is not an ordinary club. You’ve really never been here, huh?”
“What! Sasuke’s never been here?” Gaara asked from behind the car.
“No. I haven’t.”
Sai chuckled next to Gaara. “Well you’re in for a surprise.”
My eyebrows knitted together in confusion. I was just about to ask what the hell everyone was talking about, but they all pushed past me and started walking to the club door. The club was huge, and the large windows were tinted so you couldn’t see what was going on inside. As we neared the door, I could here music pulsing faintly from inside. As we went in, it looked like any other club, but there was something wrong, though I couldn’t really tell what it was. I looked around the room a few times, and then it hit me. There were absolutely no women in this bar. It was all men letting loose in this club. They were talking, flirting, dancing, and making out. Now I knew why Gaara, Neji, and Sai looked at me so funny. We we’re going to a gay bar, and I didn’t even know!
Wait! Gay bar? And Naruto works here? Does that mean he is gay like me? My heart skipped a few beats.
“OY! Sasuke!” I heard Naruto’s voice yell from somewhere in the dance floor. The crowd on the dance floor parted to let Naruto through. They all whispered together and looked at him with what was clearly lust. They all looked like they recognized him. He ran over here in a streak of orange.
“What do you think of the club?” He asked enthusiastically.
I could tell that he was not only asking if I liked the club, but also he was asking if I was ok with him being gay. The fact that he cared about what I thought so much made my heart skip all the more faster.
“This place looks like fun.” I replied as I mentally slapped myself; I would never normally say that.
“Great!” Naruto smiled brightly. “Listen, I have to work right now, so I’ll meet you at the bar after I’m off. Okay?”
I grunted in approval. He smiled happily and bounced away to God knows where. As soon as he left, I ordered a drink and started absently eavesdropping on others’ conversations to pass the time until Naruto was done working. As soon as Naruto left, conversations buzzed all around me. Everyone seemed to be talking about someone named Blizzard. I laughed at the name; whoever this guys was, he had to be a complete idiot to have gotten a lame name like that!
“Hey.” Someone said from my right. When I turned around to look I saw that it was someone I have never seen before.
“What?” I said.
“How do you know Blizzard?” He asked gruffly.
“Who the hell is Blizzard?”
His eyes widened in surprise. “The guy you were just talking to.”
“You mean Naruto?” I questioned him, wondering why Naruto had such a stupid nickname. But considering the dobe often did stupid things, it wasn’t all too surprising.
“So that’s his real name?” His face took on a dreamy expression. “How do you know him?” He continued almost accusingly.
“I’m his boyfriend.” I said jokingly, wondering what the stranger’s expression would be.
“You lucky bastard. I would kill to be able to do him every night...” He smirked. “His show is the best. But hey, you know they don’t call him Blizzard for nothing!”
I raised my eyebrows, curious. “Why does everyone call him Blizzard?”
He looked at me and smiled, “Cuz once he’s done with you, it’s like your frozen to the floor.”
I turned my back on him and completely ignored him. I wondered what kind of show Naruto was in.
o.O.o.O.o.O.o.O.o.O.o
I sat alone at the bar. I had been here for at least an hour, and I haven’t even seen a glimpse of Naruto. He told me he would meet me at the bar, but I haven’t seen him since he left earlier. I was going to kill him if he didn't show up soon. I looked at the dance floor in a futile attempt to get my mind off of Naruto. I almost fell off the stool I was sitting on in shock when I saw Neji grinding on the dance floor with Sai. I blinked a few times to make sure I wasn’t hallucinating, but when I was sure I wasn’t, I just stared at them. I never would have guessed that the quiet Neji would freak dance with anyone.
Suddenly, the music turned off, and the lights dimmed. There were shouts of annoyance from the dance floor, but they were silenced once the mist filled the room. One light flickered onto the center stage in the middle, silencing the crowd and drawing everyone's attention, including mine.
In the middle of the stage was a blond man holding onto a pole that rose from the floor clear to the ceiling. Everyone drew themselves closer, mesmerized by the sight of the male. Taunt, tanned skin peeked out of his tight red dress shirt. My eyes traveled down his body, and with one look at his cock in those black leather pants, I too drew closer to the stage.
Shame, such a shame
I think I kind of lost myself again
Day, yesterday
Really should be leaving but I stay
The man swayed his hips slowly to the beat, the tight leather pants shining dimly in from the spotlight. I wished desperately for the man to turn around so I could see his face, but as the music went on, he stayed with his back toward us. The speed of the music picked up and so did the speed of his seductive swaying. He put both legs on either side of the pole and ground into it. I closed my eyes and pictured myself there instead of the pole and instantly got a huge hard-on. As the verse ended, the man grabbed the pole with both hands and bent back, exposing his face. I was shocked to see that it was Naruto.
Say, say my name
I need a little love to ease the pain
I need a little love to ease the pain
It's easy to remember when it came
Naruto whipped his head up so he was grinding the pole again. He started walking around the pole so that he was finally facing the crowd. He smirked and linked his leg around the pole. At first his position looked awkward, but a second later he let go of one hand. Using his weight, he swung downward, it looked like he was going to fall, but at the last moment, his leg that was still around the pole caught him. His tight cock was pushed up against the pole and his hands were at his ankles, fully exposing his clothed backside. The crowd drew closer, almost as if they wanted to jump on the stage and fuck him then and there. They howled at his show of flexibility and agility.
'Cause it feels like I've been
I've been here before
You are not my savior
But I still don't go
Naruto slowly, seductively started to unbutton his red shirt; he slipped it off his shoulders slowly, then completely. He never took his eyes off mine as he tossed me his silky shirt. I caught it easily and smirked at the glares of the surrounding men. I looked back at him and blinked in surprise.
Feels like something
That I've done before
I could fake it
But I still want more
His taut abs glistened in the spotlight, his muscular arms flexed as he spun around the pole. I never would have guessed that Naruto had such a sexy body. Whenever I saw him at school, it was always with the same baggy clothes. And it was always the same too; he would always wear a horrible orange shirt, and blue jeans. But now, red was definitely his color. His red shirt contrasted with his blue eyes beautifully. And with his blonde hair and whisker markings, he had a very animalistic look to him.
The speed of the music picked up, and then Naruto started to saunter off of the stage toward me. I realized why he had the nickname of Blizzard. I couldn’t move; the sheer beauty and sex appeal radiating off of him made my legs lock into place. He reached me, after what seemed to be an eternity, and put his hand on my chest. He looked into my eyes and licked his lips, he started pushing me backwards, and I went with his game. At that moment, I would have gone anywhere with him. A moment later, I felt the back of my legs collide with something, and in the blink of an eye, I was sitting down with Naruto straddling my hips.
Fade, made to fade
Passion's overrated anyway
Say, say my name
I need a little love to ease the pain
I need a little love to ease the pain
It's easy to remember when it came
Naruto ground his cock into my erection lightly, making it almost unbearable. I started to pant heavily, and sweat began to form at my brow. Naruto put his hands on my neck and brought his mouth to my ear.
“Just relax and enjoy the ride,” he whispered huskily, and lightly bit my ear, making me shiver in response.
He began to grind his hips into mine roughly. I moaned softly in response. He brought his face close to mine, our mouths almost touched. His bottom lip barely brushed mine, and he pulled away. With the beat of the music, he arched his body against mine again and again, every time he came close enough for me to kiss, but then pulled away again. He grounded into me again, his tight as making contact with my groin, and I groaned .
'Cause it feels like I've beenHe started to get up and leave, but I wasn’t finished with him yet. I grabbed his hand and yanked him back onto me. His gasp turned into a moan as his crotch made contact with mine. I placed my hands on his back and pulled his chest into mine.
“We’ll finish this later. I get off in 20 minutes, meet me in the bar.” Naruto whispered, his breath tickling my ear.
He slowly rolled his body away from mine and got back up to the stage. I smirked and continued watching him, oblivious to the stares I was getting from the other men in the room.
I feel live something
That I've done before
I could fake it
But I still want more, oh.
He grabbed the pole and arched his back onto it. He closed his eyes and with his mouth slightly open, he slowly ran his hand down his chest and stopped just above the button of his pants. Suddenly it got dark, the dance music resumed, and when the lights went back on, Naruto was gone.
I sat down in my chair, frozen.
After I gathered my senses, I sprinted to the bar.
These 20 minutes seemed like 20 years as I waited for him in the bar. I tried to compose my face and hide my excitement and anticipation, but I probably failed miserably. Finally, after what seemed to be an eternity, I saw him. He sauntered over to where I was standing, a casual smirk on his face. I was disappointed to see that he had changed from the red shirt into something else. This time he was wearing a deep blue shirt, but I uttered a silent prayer of thanks when I saw that he was still wearing those tight, black leather pants.
“Ready to go?” Naruto smirked and jingled his car keys in front of me and started walking toward the door.
“Dobe, of course I’m ready.” I quickly followed him out though I tried not to look too eager. I didn’t want the dobe to think I was totally desperate for sex.
We went to his car, climbed in, and were on our way. We drove to his house in silence, there was no need to talk. We pulled up into his driveway, and he suddenly pulled me into a kiss. This wasn’t an awkward or chaste kiss; this was filled with lust and passion. He pulled away and got out of the car. I quickly followed him up to the door and waited impatiently as he fumbled with the house keys. He finally got his key into the hole and pushed the door open. I roughly grabbed him by the collar and pulled him inside without turning the lights on. I relied on memory to guide myself through his living room, up his stairs, and through his hall. I dragged him into his bedroom and threw him on the bed
Our mouths were everywhere. Our teeth scraped together as we kissed, but that didn’t matter. My hands clumsily traced over his body, and he shivered in response. I decided to get a little revenge for the torture he inflicted to me from that little lap dance, so I reached up and lightly pinched his nipples. He squirmed beneath my touch. He looked as if he wanted to burst from the clothes that restrained him.
I attacked his neck savagely, licking, sucking, and biting. He moaned in response, bucking his hips into mine. The sudden contact with my groin made me bite hard, drawing blood. Naruto moaned loudly at the pain. I licked up the blood and kissed the wound lightly. I trailed kisses up his neck and started nibbling on his ear and blowing in it gently. I made my way back to his lips slowly, torturing him further. When I reached his chin, he growled and captured his lips with his. My tongue explored his mouths every crevice, and his tongue did the same. It was as if our tongues were fighting for dominance, but eventually Naruto won. It was one battle I didn’t mind losing. His tongue was skillful as it swirled around in my mouth, and I couldn’t help but eagerly welcome him in.
I opened my eyes and looked into his as I reached under his shirt to play with his nipples. His eyes rolled back into their sockets as he cried out in pleasure. His arms reached up and clumsily started undoing my button down shirt. It seemed to be too hard for him, due to his current state of mind, so he ripped it apart. Buttons flew everywhere. My eyes narrowed as my expensive shirt was ruined. I looked into Naruto’s closed eyes and was about to chastise him, until he opened his eyes. His crimson, silted eyes stared into mine as he let out a low feral growl. The kyuubi had awoken.
Naruto roughly flipped us over so he was on top. He lightly scraped his claw-like fingernails up my sides, giving me a major case of goosebumps. I came here expecting to be on top, but as soon as I saw the kyuubi, I knew that it was not going to be possible. Naruto started playing with my nipples, sucking and biting them at the same time. This made me wither and moan at the same time. Naruto grabbed my belt buckle and undid it with ease; I shifted slightly so he could take my pants off without tearing them like he did to my shirt. I started to wonder why I was still the only one in my boxers while Naruto was still fully clothed. I decided to remedy that.
I reached up, undid his pants and slipped them off easily. I then went to his shirt. After he was only in his boxers I reached down to take care of those too, but he stopped me. I looked up into his red eyes, and he gave me a cocky smirk. I raised one eyebrow in confusion. Did I do something wrong? He smiled even further and revealed his fanged teeth. I was surprised to see that his appearance didn’t frighten me at all, it actually turned me on. Naruto reached into my boxers and pulled out my erection. I gasped loudly; I bucked into him hoping it would create that sweet friction I craved. Naruto held my hips down and slowly started stroking my cock. I tried to grind into him, but he mercilessly held me still.
Naruto’s red eyes settled on my dick, and he licked his lips in anticipation. He smirked, and I shivered at what I knew would come. His mouth came down on me slowly, torturing. I screamed loudly as Naruto’s tongue starting swirling around my shaft, pleasure slamming into me with each deft movement of his tongue. I moaned and gripped his hair tightly as I forced his mouth down deeper. He complied easily, deep-throating me instantly. His head bobbed up and down slowly in a slow torturous rhythm. He sped up suddenly, and I screamed in pleasure.
Yes, that’s right…I actually screamed.
Naruto took my balls into his hand and started gently massaging them. The pleasure kept building up until I thought I would explode, and then he pulled away, denying me my orgasm. But then Naruto came up and kissed me roughly. Naruto removed his tongue from my mouth and replaced them with his fingers.
“Suck.” He commanded in a rough, husky voice.
I complied. I practically molested his fingers with my tongue, getting them as slick as I could. He pulled away from my mouth and roughly flipped me over so I was on my hands and knees. He grabbed my cock, and I moaned. Naruto pushed one finger into my hole, and I gasped at the foreign pain, and then another finger went in. I cringed as he started scissoring my opening, stretching it painfully.
“Relax, princess; the pain will be over soon.” He growled into my ear.
“Don’t fucking call me-” I stopped mid sentence. My eyes grew wide as he hit my prostate. I moaned and pushed back on his fingers, hoping that he would do that again. He chuckled and began prodding my prostate.
“Ready for this?” Naruto said and pulled off his boxers. I gasped and my eyes grew wide in shock. He didn’t have a fucking penis!! That was a battering ram! He had a cock that was straight from a porno, it was long and thick.
“Fuck,” I said breathlessly.
Naruto grinned slyly, “As you wish.”
He positioned himself at my entrance, and looked me in the eye. I nodded slowly. He pushed in slowly, inch by inch, working in deep. My mouth fell open, and my eyes rolled back, I arched and cried out, and shook. When he was half way into me, I started to pant and curse. When he was three-quarters of the way in, I moaned and thrashed, crying out, “God, God, close, God, oh God!”
Naruto squeezed the base of my cock hard, growling, “Don’t you dare come before I’m even all the way inside you.”
I screamed as Naruto pushed in those last inches fast and hard. Then Naruto began to thrust. He growled loudly like the kyuubi he was. He pulled out slowly and thrust in hard and fast. I screamed in pleasure. He did it again, faster and faster each time, forcing himself deeper and deeper.
He leaned down, lips gently brushing my throat and bit down on the back of my neck, like the male animal in the wild does to hold the struggling female down, a bite to claim, to mark. He thrust in hard, fucking me like I was trying to tear myself away and needed to be pinned down. He fucked me like his life depended on slamming into my tight warmth as hard and as fast as he could.
As my orgasm neared, my muscles clenched tight around Naruto’s cock, and my body shook beneath him. My lower muscles seemed to spasm, clenching and releasing. Naruto’s cock responded, shuddering and shaking deep in my ass, and with his own soft cry, he released his load of sperm deep in my body. His orgasm triggered more clenching and releasing from me, and Naruto moaned and gasped. Naruto pushed to lift his weight off me, and then moaned. And fuck, if I hadn’t just come, I thought I might again at the sound. Naruto collapsed, and his weight fell down on me.
“Get… off!” I gasped for breath.
He rolled off me and started laughing. “Holy shit, that was great!”
“Yeah.” I said breathlessly. I began to sit up, but Naruto pounced on me, pinning me to the bed.
“Where do you think your going?” His eyes sparkled mischievously.
“To get dressed.” I replied casually, but I had a feeling that I knew what was coming.
Naruto bared his teeth and laughed. “You can’t honestly think were done yet.”
My eyes widened as he pounced on me again.
I have more fics like these, so if I get a good response I'll post some!
p.s.- (regarding the story Hells Nine Tails) Seriously guys, it was unintentional, really. If I get one more comment that talks about the resemblances, I'm going to go fucking cry, and I really don't like to cry. Do you really expect me to read all Naru/Sasu fics just so I can be sure this plot was never used before? So please, no more.