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Author: tokiohotelfan98
Fiction Rated: T - English - Suspense/Romance - Reviews: 11 - Published: 01-25-08 - Updated: 08-14-08 - id:4033841
YEA! MY FIRST FANFICTION! PLEASE REVIEW!

On one rainy day in a Math class in a boarding school not from Radiator Springs...something bad was going to happen.

The math teacher, Mr. Windsor, was going on and on about What not to do when dividing. Teaching a group of 14 year olds

how to do division. Anyway, Peyton's mind was still set on the fight she got into with her dad. The words "I HATE YOU!" were playing

in the back of her mind like a broken record player. Then a knock on the door stopped Mr. Windsor and his class from talking. "I'll be right back," he said. He drove

up to the door and it was the student messanger. After talking for a bit Mr. Windsor finally said, "Miss Mcqueen theres a message for you. The principle wants to

see in his office. Its urgent." he said. "Yes sir," Peyton said. She drove out of the classroom and down the quiet hallway. She couldnt think straight.

She dident know what made her explode at her father. She felt extremely guilty after her fight. She dident let it bother her though. When she finally

made it to the principles office, she took a deep breath and opened the door. She saw Mr. Lanman talking to someone. And not just any someone,

it was Doc Hudson. "Doc?! What are you doing here?!" She screamed. "Come on were leaving." Doc said jumping to counclussions. "Leaving! Where?"

she asked. "I'll tell you when we get there." he said, "Thanks for under standing Mr. Lanman." "Your welcome." He said. Doc drove

out and Peyton followed. "Doc whats going on? Why am i leaving?!" She yelled. Doc dident answer. Peyton finally gave up on asking.

When they finally got outside, Peyton discovered Mack waiting outside in the pouring rain. "Mack? Why are you here?" Mack also dident answer,

he just gave here a frown like he was sorry for something. "Doc tell me whats wrong!" She damanded. "Fine, i'll tell you in the trailer." Doc said

finally giving in. When they finally got in the trailer, Doc sighed and said, "Peyton all I can say is that we will get through this togather." Peyton remebered

her dad saying the same thing when her mother died. "Doc what happened?" she asked. "Please dont get mad when i tell you." Doc said.

"Why?! Why iam i gonna get mad for-" "BECAUSE YOUR FATHERS DEAD!" he yelled. "What?!" Peyton said shocked. Her chocolate-brown eyes

getting teary. "What did you just say." she asked. "Your father died in a traffic accident this morning. A-and by the time help came it was,it was to late he was gone."

he said also getting teary. Peyton finally gave out and started sobbing. Doc wasent sobbing but he did have tears streaming down his hood. Doc drove up to

Peyton and gave her a hug and said quietly, "I know this is hard on you espically after your mother Sally died when you were little but-" "BUT WHAT!? MY MOM

AND MY DAD ARE DEAD! WHAT DO YOU MEAN BY-" "but you still have me." Doc said weakly. Peyton reailized that Doc was right, she did still have him.

She hugged back and said, "I know Doc. Its just my last words to dad were 'I hate you,' and I think he hates me now." "He doesnt hate you, it just probly made him

sad." After that it was just quiet in the trailer. But Doc broke the silence by saying, " Are you gonna be all right when we get there?" "where?" She asked quietly.

"Radiator Springs." He answered. Peyton gasped. "Is that were the funeral's held?" She asked. Doc nodded and said, " But I know you'll feel awkward cause

of-" "bad memories." Peyton answered. "yea. Thats why you left to the boarding school. Cause after your mom's death, you started having bad dreams,and weird

feelings. So your father took you on the road with me and him, but your dad just decided that it would be best to be with people your own age." Doc said, "but,"

"but what?" peyton asked. "When you were away your father and I thought i'd be better if he retired. So a few months ago, we got a rookie in training." Doc said.

"Rookie in training?" She asked oddly. Doc nodded again and said, "His names Liam. If you ever meet him, dont let his temper scare you." "If?" Peyton asked.

"He ran out on his training a month ago. Lightning never met him though." Doc said. "Why?" she asked. "Lightning was angry about something so he dident want

anything to do with Liam, or Liam's training." Doc said. "Oh. Is he ever coming back?" She asked. Doc nodded, "its not like he has anywhere else to go."

There's the first chapter! Sorry that its short. I'll be writting the second chapter soon. PLEASE REVIEW!



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