Hey people went through the first 2 chapters and made minor changes so i hope its ok now :)

Oh and Cherry's doing the disclaimer today

Cherry: Why?

Me: Because i said so

Cherry: Fine BizarreBrunette does not own Tokyo mew mew but she wishes she did.

Me: See its not that bad is it now on with the story!

'thought' "speech"

“Cherry, can we go yet?” Faila asked her friend sighed as a shiver ran down her spine.

“No! Come on lets go to the park, It’s a warm day and I don’t want to go home yet.” Cherry replied grinning.

Faila just rolled her eyes and started to walk away.

“Hey Faila! Don’t be like that! Hey wait up!”

“Come on Cherry,” Faila replied without turning round as Cherry ran to catch up.

They carried on walking but after a while Faila looked over her shoulder. She just couldn’t shake the feeling they were being followed. However she didn’t say anything to Cherry in case she was just being paranoid. She looked over at her friend to find her humming to herself. Another shiver followed by a quick glance over her shoulder was all she needed to panic.

She stopped dead.

She fully turned her body to face it. It’s piercing yellow eyes staring into her own.

Her breath caught in her throat. She opened her mouth to scream but couldn’t. ‘Omg.’ Suddenly from behind her was a noise.

“Oh my god what is that thing? It looks like Adam!” asked a terrified Cherry, who was also staring at the creature. Not at its eyes, but at the rest of its body: its bull head; cockroach body; spider legs and moth wings.

The creature; now named Adam; spread its wings and effortlessly created a huge wind that sent both Faila and Cherry flying. Cherry landed softly on the grass but Faila flew straight into a metal fence and then landed with a groan on the concrete.

Adam then opened its mouth and the strangest sound was heard, it was laughing at them! It started towards Cherry who was curled up near a bush terrified. But when Faila realised what Adam was doing she felt something inside her boil.

She stood up, ‘What is this feeling?’ She looked up at Adam; “Hey ugly! Leave her alone!” ‘What am I doing!?’ “Strawberry Transform!” She yelled as she brought her clasped hands to her chest. She was surrounded by a black and pink light swirling around her and when it disappeared she’d transformed. She was now wearing a black boob tube with pink around the edge; a black mini skirt; a pink belt with a strawberry buckle; black booth with pink ribbons on the outside; black gloves which went just past her wrist with a pink band around it and a black chocker with a strawberry dangling from it.

“What just happened?” she looked down at herself wide-eyed.

“Oh my god!” Cherry shouted noticing something on Faila’s had and behind her back. “You’re a cat!”

“What.” She instinctively put her hands to her head and sure enough she had black cat ears popping out of her hair. She also realised her hair had grown and now cascaded down to her waist. As she touched the tip of her hair she felt something brush against her hand, she turned her head and saw a black tail with a pink bow. “this is so weird.”

Adam turned to face her, fully changed into a bull and charged at her. She easily dodged by jumping out the way as she felt words forming in her mouth, “Strawberry Scythe.” She stood there holding the scythe across her body, the top just slightly to the left of her head while the bottom to the right of her feet.

“This is amazing” She grinned. Adam transformed from a bull into a spider and tried to catch her in a web but she simply slashed it with her scythe. She ran towards Adam and jumped in the air while spinning the scythe above her head. She shouted, “Strawberry Night Darkness!” as she slashed the scythe straight through Adam’s body who yelped and turned into dust.

She landed gracefully, turned and walked over to the pile of dust. Cherry ran over and started talking or rather rambling on about what had just happened. She mentioned how she thought Faila’s transformation was cool and how she wished she could transform to. She was still transformed so when Cherry finally stopped talking she could easily see something on her leg.

“Faila what’s that?”

“What’s what?”

“That thing on our right leg, it looks like a heart.”

“Whoa, when did that get there?” Faila asked in surprise.

“I don’t know, but are you going to stay like that all day? Someone might see you.”

Hehe finished omg asif its that short -- oh well next chapter will be longer please review so i know what to i can do to make it better x thankyou