
Having the person I love protected by other person than me, watching her from far away because I know she will only be unsafe if I'm with her, can I still take it? I can't help it, I won't sit around, I can't let him win now...FIXED&IMPROVED!
Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Hurt/Comfort - Natsume H. & Mikan S. - Chapters: 6 - Words: 6,677 - Reviews: 20 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 9 - Updated: 07-27-08 - Published: 02-08-08 - id: 4059983
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Everyone!!!
This story is RENOVATED…
Yeah… You read it right…
Renovated/ Fixed/ Improved/ Developed…
Or whatever…
So please,…
Give me one more chance!!!
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Thank you very much to those who supported it even though my grammar is pathetic…
I really appreciate you guyzzz!!!
JUST SO YOU KNOW
CHAPTER 1: THE BEGINNING
The sun rises from the east making the surroundings of the academy brighter. It was another day, for others, who only thinks about how to look good, how to pass another quiz, when would they graduate, how to get the girl they want, how to impress Natsume-sama since Ruka-sama is taken by the ugly pig-tailed hair girl whose name is they don't know… and lot's of insignificant things.
But, it wasn't the same morning as before even though everybody thinks that same thing everyday, for someone, who had realized something important just now, this day, will be the beginning of something everyone thought will never happen again.
Natsume's P.O.V
Tch… another morning again, what's there to be seen anyways? I always wake up and do the same thing, then end up bumping on her early in the morning, and what???
I will always see her everyday walk to HIS boyfriend? My SUPPOSED to be best friend!!!
Did she ever know what I feel about her? I guess she did, but then…
It's my fault anyway, I shouldn't have let that opportunity passed by! And now?!...
Ruka got her…
My only love…
Sakura Mikan…
Did I really made the right decision???
Damn! I might as well get cleaned up and then hope to see her this day…
NORMAL P.O.V
Everyone started to go to their proper classes, some doesn't want to be late, but for others who doesn't really care, walked slowly since there's still some minutes left.
Well, everyone has left the dormitory except for a cute brunette who is enjoying her sleep in her comfortable two star bed… (A.N: yeah that's right! She's a 2 star now… don't ask why…)
She was sleeping peacefully, unmindful of the things taking place outdoor. She was still enjoying herself in her dreamland until the alarm clock broke the wonderful dream she was in.
"RRRIIIINNNNNNNGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"Five more minutes please…" the cute brunette said.
But still, the alarm clock continued to ring…
"I SAID FIVE MORE MINUTES!!!!" she shouted and grabbed the innocent alarm clock. She was about to throw it away when she noticed the time…
"WHAAAT?!?!?! TEN MORE MINUTES BEFORE TIME?!?!?! I'M GONNA BE LATE!!!!!!" she shouted so loud that if there are still students in the dormitory then she could have woken them up, but there were no students left because everybody went to the class.
Mikan rushed to the bathroom and cleaned herself up then put on her uniform.
Suddenly, there was a knock on the door. Mikan wondered who could it be since everybody is in the classroom by now.
"Mikan? Are you still here?" a gentle voice of a boy said.
"Ruka is that you???" a muffled voice of Mikan was heard.
"Yeah, it's me. You're not in the place were supposed to meet that's why I thought you are still here. I'll come in ok?" Ruka said as he enetered Mikan's room.
"I'm sorry, I overslept!!! Now we'll both be late because of me," she said as she tied her hair in her normal pigtails.
"Uhhmm… That's fine," Ruka said while watching her do her hair.
"I'm done!!! Let's go Ruka!" Mikan said as she grabbed Ruka's hand which he immediately blushed upon the contact.
ON THEIR CLASSROOM…
The teacher hasn't arrived yet and everybpdy was in their own world, specially someone with the alice of fire and he is certainly notin the good mood.
He didn't bump on her angel this morning and his "best friend" is not here yet which leads him to a lot of conclusion that only made his blood boil.
'Are they together? Of course they are! They are a couple now!' he thought bitterly. He certainly didn't like the idea of it, but what can he do?
Because of his alice, together with his current mood, he unconsciously turned the classroom's temperature to rise which made the Ice Queen annoyed.
"Oi! Hyuuga! In case you don't know, it's getting hot! Control your temper before I shot you with my upgraded baka gun!" she threatened him.
"Tch… Shut up Imai… Don't order me around!" he shot back and glared at her with his 'oh-so-famous' death glare.
"You're annoying me kitty!" Hotaru said as she shot natsume with her 'upgraded baka gun'.
Natsume mange to dodge the first and second attack, but he got distracted when he saw Mikan holding hands with Ruka as they entered the classroom…
"Holding hands?!?!?!"
Well, this is my first story…
Hope you will like it…
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I allow any review as long as you give me one…
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ALSO…
THIS CHAPTER HAS BEEN EDITED FOR THE READERS…
I DIDN'T CHANGE THE FLOW OF THE STORY…
I ONLY CHANGED THE WAY I EXPRESS IT…
THANK YOU!!!
A preview on the next chapter…
"Natsume! Watch out!" Mikan shouted…
Instead of dodging, it stared at Mikan, 'What's this? Does she still care for me?' Natsume thought...
He was shot that caused him to fly at the end of the room…
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