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Ok for those who don’t know what happened in the last chapter oh and thanks for the comments
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Last Chapter
Kagome thought and remembered that. She then leaned against a mirror putted the bag pack down and opened it to take out the knife out but then suddenly two arms came out of the mirror and caught her waist and pulled her inside the mirror.
Kagome: What AHH!!
That was the last words Kagome said before she disappeared from the scary castle and went inside the mirror.
End of Flashback
Kagome woke up and found herself in a beautiful room. She then got up and tried to remember how she got here and why.
Kagome: Oh my head…yes I remember entering a castle…but…that was creepy and these looks pretty…
Then suddenly she heard someone’s voice
“So you are finally awake took you long enough…” It was a male’s voice.
Kagome then turned and saw it was a boy but different. He had cute dog ears, silver hair and a crown.
“He must be the prince but…price and other stuffs don’t exist now…then…” Kagome thought
Kagome: And you…
“Feh I am…the one who lives in the castle…”
Kagome: That’s ok…but by you I meant…I don’t know… I meant what is your name…
He then looked at Kagome for a minute. He didn’t know why but he kind of trusted her. Maybe because she looks pretty and innocent and maybe he thought that she wouldn’t run away hearing that he is a phantom…
He then took a step closer to her and decided to tell her
Inuyasha: My name is Inuyasha…
Kagome: Inuyasha…that’s a really nice and uncommon name…
Inuyasha then looked away from her and then started talking to her again
Inuyasha: And I am a phantom…
Ijuyasha didn’t look at Kagome for some time because he thought she would start screaming and other stuff and try to run away but she didn’t she instead waited there for him to look at her and to reply him which surprised him. He then looked at her wanted her reply
Kagome: Ok…that’s cool…
Kagome said with hesitation since she didn’t know what to say after all she was talking to a phantom
Inuyasha: Soo…you won’t try to run away from me…or anything…
Kagome: Why should I…?
She said that and Inuyasha was surprised
Inuyasha: What do you mean why you shouldn’t…?
Kagome: Well…I would run away IF you try to threat me but you are not doing that soo why should I be afraid of you or run away from you…
Inuyasha was shocked hearing her say these but was glad she didn’t ran away. He then sat next to Kagome and asked her name
Inuyasha: Soo…what is your name…
Kagome: Oh…Kagome…
Inuyasha: That’s a pretty name
Kagome: Thanks but umm…how long have I been here anyway…
Inuyasha: A day…
Kagome: A DAY??
Inuyasha: Yep a day so…what are you doing here anyway
Kagome: Umm I did came here to do something…but when I entered it was all creepy but now it looks good
Inuyasha: Oh these is the real castle behind the mirror…the creepy part you saw…I kept that soo intruders don’t come here…inside the mirror
Kagome: Oh so these is the real castle…
Inuyasha: Ya…
Kagome: Soo you don’t look like a phantom to me…
Inuyasha: Oh ya that is behind the mirror I look like a human but in the real world I am a phantom...so do you want me to drop you home
Kagome: Umm well I wasn’t hoping to go back home but ok…I guess…
Inuyasha: Why weren’t you hoping to go back home…?
Kagome: Um it is nothing really…
Inuyasha: You were gonna commit suicide weren’t ya…?
Kagome: Wha…how do ya know that…?
Inuyasha: I saw inside your bag…
He said giving the bag to her
Kagome: You LOOK INTO MY BAG…DID YOU READ MY DIARY..!!
Inuyasha: Um ya…that’s how I knew you were gonna to it!
Kagome: Uff why did you read my diary…
Inuyasha: Ok ok I am sorry but you have to tell me why did you decided to do such a thing…
Kagome: Because…nobody cares…well how do I go back…
Kagome said trying to change the subject and Inuyasha understood it and didn’t ask anymore questions
Inuyasha: Through the mirror...want me to drop ya…
Kagome: Umm ok…I guess soo
Inuyasha then grabbed Kagome’s hand and pulled her and went inside the mirror
Then she was back where she had came and she was standing infront of the door.
Kagome then looked back and saw Inuyasha’s cloth, and his skin everything was blue and was a bit surprised
Inuyasha: Told ya…I look like a phantom in the real world…
Kagome: Oh…
She said that she didn’t know what else to say
Then when Kagome was about to go Inuyasha caught her hand and asked her
Inuyasha: Can you meet me tomorrow?
He asked expecting an rejection but Kagome smiled and said
Kagome: Sure…!
She said that and went outside happy that she had some friend
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So what do ya think? How was it? Is it ok or should I have made it more scarier. Should have I made Inuyasha rude and stuff or should have I made him a bad phantom tell me please…please...leave reviews…please...reviews