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Well, I changed the way this story is written. Those who have read the first version will find this quite different. Well, go on and read. It doesn’t really matter if you wanna review or not.
Fortnight Horror
Prologue
A boy was running in a hurry in a dark hallway. He carried something in his arm. The room he was heading for was getting nearer. Suddenly, there was a boy screaming in pain. He stopped and looked back down the hallway.
“Oh no, Kiro!” he yelled. He knew he couldn’t waste anymore time so he continued running towards the room. He kept on running. Then, he heard a terrifying screech from behind. He looked behind and saw it.
“Damn!” he cursed to himself. He’s not going to fail, not after he got this far. He opened the door to the room and placed the item on the floor. He began to set it. He heard the creature getting closer and looked behind. It was there, standing behind him.
In the distance, we could hear the boy screaming. The moon made the night pretty creepy. A light fog loomed over the haunted school.
A year later….In a town that we all know….
“I-I can’t believe it,” Ranma said shakily as he held the paper which had his final exam results.
“How did you do?” Akane asked as she walked on the street. She looked up at Ranma who was walking on the fence. Recently, they had taken their final exam, and today they received their results. Akane did exceptionally well.
“I-I did it!” Ranma exclaimed. “I passed!” Ranma shot a fist in the air. “WOOHOO!! YEAH!! I DID IT!! LOOK AT ME NOW!!” Ranma began to laugh hysterically. He jumped like a hyperactive kid on the fence.
“Uh, Ranma stop jumping. You’ll -SPLASH- fall,” Akane said. Ranma had fallen into the canal below. A section of the fence wasn’t there since it had fallen with the sputtering red head. Luckily Ranma lost hold of the result paper and it landed safe and dry on the street.
Ranma shook her head making the water in her hair fly around. She stood up and tried to climb out of the canal.
“-sigh-Ranma, Ranma,” Akane said as she shook her head. She grabbed Ranma’s hand and helped her out. She then took Ranma’s result paper.
“-chuckles sheepishly-I guess I was over excited,” Ranma said as she placed a hand behind her head.
“C’mon, let’s go home,” Akane said as she ran towards the Tendo Dojo.
“Hey wait up!” Ranma yelled as she ran following her fiancée.
“Wow, you did great Akane!” Kasumi said. Both of them had arrived home. Akane had given Ranma back her results. “You did great too Ranma!” Kasumi said looking at Ranma’s results.
“I hate to admit it but you did good Saotome,” Nabiki said a little surprised. The family had gathered around the two teenagers.
“Yeah, Ranma you did pretty well. I didn’t expect this out of you,” Genma said.
“And what is that supposed to mean?” Ranma gritted her teeth.
“Uh, nothing,” Genma backed away nervously.
Suddenly, they heard a ridiculous crying coming from Soun.
“Akane is leaving!-continues to cry-,” Soun wailed. Akane had said that she would go to another school -a boarding school if she got good results.
Then, Genma and Soun thought of something. Soun’s expression turned into joy.
“Ranma, you’re going with Akane to whichever school she’s going,” Genma and Soun said simultaneously.
“WHAT!?” Ranma and Akane exclaimed in unison.
“Well, since you two would be in the same school, you’ll get closer with each other and finally…”
“The schools will be joined!” both Soun and Genma exclaimed as they danced around like idiots. The other family members sweat dropped. Soon, the two fathers calmed down and dinner was served.
Well, I hope this is okay for you guys. Tell me if there’s anything wrong. You can comment or criticize if you feel like it. See ya guys in the next chapter.