I'm sorry for those who are excited to see that this was updated so soon, but there won't be a new chapter for some time yet. If at all, if I can't do something about a small pest that I've acquired. To the reviewer "" I'd like to say a few lengthy words. You do have many valid points in the long, arduous, and rude review that you left me. I agree that there are some holes in my story, but I also have to say that seeing as this is more of a work of fun than a literary essay, not meant for perfection at every given period, I have to disagree with the rest of what all you had to say. And as far as I know, a plot can be whatever it is depending on the writer. Unfortunately for you, that's me. If you're so opposed to my writing, I'll ask that you ignore whatever updates my story has in the future, so that you may spend your obviously valuable time elsewhere. I can understand your frustration, and can see the validity in your points. But the tone you set in your review was far more insulting than it needed to be in order to get your points across. I find that one small paragraph would have sufficed for that. As it seems, you take great enjoyment out of being the way you are, and have no worries about what you are saying to those you review for. And I ask, for the sake of politeness, that you not refer to anyone as "darling" when you, personally, have no idea who they are, or have any semblance of knowing them outside of a few pixels that catch your attention on your computer screen. I find this insulting and irritating, and as much as I'd like to make my work perfect for your sake, as important as you think your opinion seems to be, I have to say that you're making me consider taking down this story at all. I fear this mainly because I fear that if I don't get you to leave me, and my work, alone, that I'll never hear the end of it from you. And as much as I so thoroughly enjoyed reading over your excessive commentary, I'd be happy never to see your screen name again so long as I post on this site. Please consider this a cordial form of "GTFO," and I wish you the best of luck in finding other literature that suits your needs better.

Peace,

dzd