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Italics:showing on screen
(Regular): music
Bold: narrator
(Background: Playing Mary’s Song (Oh, My, My) by Taylor Swift)
He lived down the street from me
Shows the neighborhood
He was my sister’s best friend
Shows a twelve-year-old girl hugging a thirteen-year-old boy
(The music makes scratchy noises and cuts off)
And he was also five years older
Shows an eight-year-old girl admiring the thirteen-year-old boy from her house as he laughed and smiled with his brothers
(Don’t Forget To Remember Me by Carrie Underwood plays)
We moved away…
Shows the whole family at the airport
(Changes to China’s national anthem)
To China
Switches to the Beijing International Airport
(Changes again to a sad tune)
Two years later, I found out he’s famous
Shows the now eleven-year-old girl talking to her fifteen-year-old sister
“Why do they all seem so familiar?”
The sister smiles sadly
“They lived across the street from us.”
(Back In the USSR by the Beatles)
We moved back again, after three years in China
Shows the family standing outside their new home in North Carolina
“This place is huge!”
(Plays Speechless by the Veronicas)
After three more long years…
“Why can’t we go see the concert?”
“We can’t get tickets. I’m sorry, honey.”
“Stupid Jonas fans…”
We met again
Shows the fifteen-year-old girl and the twenty-year-old 'Nate' Jonas sitting in a café
“I’ve always had a crush on you, I think. It’s just that it became such a constant part in my life…I forgot.”
People didn’t approve of our age differences
Shows the girl and her sister sitting on a bench
“I know 'Nate'. He was my best friend. But he’s five years older than you…”
“Will it matter when I’m twenty-one and he’s twenty-six? When I’m thirty and he’s thirty-five?”
“…I guess not. But right now, it’s kinda weird when you’re still in your teens and he’s twenty.”
Scene changes to 'Nate' and the girl, plus his brothers and Miley
'Nate' kisses the girl on the cheek, who blushes
“Uh, guys, you know…that’s sort of creepy…”
(Music ends)
Sometimes, I wish I actually believed in the phrase ‘Age is only a number.’
Screen fades to black
Spontaneous Combustion…
Coming soon to a computer monitor near you
New story! New story!
The story I mentioned in my pro. Here 'tis.
Right. So...what do you think? I need feedback. Reviews are wanted. If I get good feedback, I'll put up the next chapter. The first couple chapters are going to be short because it's getting the story on a roll, and also...I kinda want to get to the good stuff. You know, with 'Nate'. In the first chappy, he's only mentioned, he's not actually in it. Don't be surprised if the first couple chaps. are extremely short and choppy. I tend to jump around in this one. Only because when the girl (I'm not saying her name...) was small, she didn't bother with details and only told things really momentous in her opinion.
Like, vacations, moving, etc. Got it?
(edit: 08/07/08. scared of ff deleting my stories. am laying low for a bit.)