ALL RIGHT!! So from the past few years, I've found poems/parody songs on my computer...And I kinda want feedback on them, just because I randomly just decided to read them, and then put them up. Some are directly related to a subject, like the Outsiders, and some are indirectly...Like, this one right here is supposed to be about Joe Jonas, but yeah...you can really tell...Anyway, just review them and tell me what you think :)

I was alone in darkness

I never knew the light

But when you took my hand

Everything was right.

You gave me that smile

The one you always make

For once I was happy

My heart just couldn’t break.

While we were together

Nothing could go wrong

My heart completely melted

When you sang me my song.

Some stared at you with wonder

Some only saw your face

But I could see inside your heart

What a lovely place.

You never went too fast

‘Respect a girl,’ you’d say

But for that one special kiss

I waited everyday.

I always wondered

If I was that girl

The one you would talk about

The one who is your world.

But I know that I am

When we are together

Now my only hope

Is that it will last forever.