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Author: Midnight Feathers
Fiction Rated: T - English - Romance/Horror - Reviews: 5 - Published: 05-16-08 - Updated: 05-16-08 - Complete - id:4261002

Silver Rain Fell

Kalas was industriously leading his group of intrepid adventururs through the land

Kalas was industriously leading his group of intrepid adventururs through the land. It was a normal day. Xehla was being bossy pompuss as usual while Gibari yelled quite loquashisly. Lyude was polishing his trumpet with very much vigor while Mizutee was being “Great”. Savyna was also there but no one really cared about her except for the mens who liked to look at her body.

All in all it was a very normal day for them. Until she arrived on the scens.

The girl wore a very beotiful kimono-style dress and her voluptuous indigo hair (with pink highlights) was up in a delicious bun on her head. The hair frames her gorgous face: the girl has bright golden eyes like a wolf and very lovely lips that many a mens would have liked to kiss. Next to her was a little white fox trottin happily alongs.

Kalas stopped dead in his tracks. She was beotiful!! He had never seen anything quite like her.

“Hi my name is Kalas” Kalas said while blushing alot.

“Hello Kalas-san my name is Sakamoto Asuka but it means “fragrance of bright day” she replied. “Also my foxs name is Kitsune but he likes it if you call him Kitsune-cham”

“Wow its nice to met you Mrs Asuka!” Kalas said still smiling very happilyful. Lyude and Gibari and Mizute and also Sayvna greeted her nicely so she feel welcome to the group.

Xehla on the other hand did not seem happy! She was frowning greatly. Kalas never trusted anyone, not even the great leader bill Clintin. So why was he trusting Asuka??

“I will tell you why” Asuka said very suddenly. Xehla gasped. How did Asuka now what she was thinking??

Asuka flipped her hair becominglys and began her sad story of woe. “As a child I was borned into an influential and weatlhy family of the empire. The emperor liked them a lot so they became very famous and helped and things. But they were secretly gods descendid from on high and they wanted to stop the emperor and Malpesheo. So they tried to lead a rebellion but unfortunately they died. So I had to take over in their steed” she sniffed a little.

By the end of her tale everyone was in tears. “That is so horrible! At such a tender age you were askd so much!” Lyude said, blowing heartily into a kleenex tissue.

“Yes indeed the Great Mizuti commends you!” Mizute said while wiping his nose on another hankie.

Even cold Savyna seemed quite sympathetic for the cause. “Even I have not been through such sad times” she said shaking her head.

Kalas hugged Asuka and patted her shoulder. “You are a brave girl! Would you like to join our party of five?”

Asuka’s painted lips smiled “Of course I would! I can read peoples minds so I can see where they are and I can also use the bow, dagger, knife, sword, katana, axe, magic, stileto, gun, baton, and microwave in battle”

“Your many skills will be very useful in battle!” Gibari said clapping her heartily on the back “Welcome to the motley crew!”

Now Xehla was very mad! She was so mad her face turned redder than a tomatoe and steam came out of her ears! “Kalas why is you letting Asuka join us?!”!

Kalas seemed very offended by her sudden and unexpected outburst. Why was the calm and nice Xehla so made? “Why because I think Asuka will be a nice addition to our group and besides her microwave skill may prove useful on the road ahead as Gibari likes his hot pockets”

“MMMMm!” Gibari rubbed his tummy like a hungry hippo.

“Grrrrrrr!” Xehla stompeded away still fuming. Kalas shrugged and said “what did I do?”

“Kitsune-chan and I will go find Xehla-sama to rectify this situation” Asuka said bravely.

“Oh Asuka that would be nice” Kalas said while hugging her again “But be careful because a woman on PMS is quite a danger”

“Oh I can sympathise with that” Asuka said with a brief smile. Everyone laughed at her witty joke and she left to go follow Xehla using her mind powers from beyond.

Asuka walked down a long and windy path until she saw Xehla crying under a sakura tree. Asuka sat next to her and waited silently while Xehla cried more.

“Why is you here?!” Xehla demanded still sniffling.

“Because I am sorry that I somehow hurt your feelings although I do not know what I did wrong” Asuka said. She petted Kitsune who barked and licked her hand.

“Oh he is so cute” Xehla said “Where did you find Kitsune?”

“Kitsune-chan has been my lifelong companion and he follows me everywhere” Asuka responded definitely “Oh by the way did I mention that since I am descindid from a long line of gods, I can talk to animals like wolfs and foxs?”

“Wow! That is amazing!” Xelha hollered “You are very amazing Asuka, I can see why Kalas loves you so much”

“Hehe” Asuka giggled.

Suddenly, the ground began to shake (like a polaroid piktuer!) Asuka hopped readily to her feet and pulled out her weapon: a standard katana like the one Kenshin uses. Xehla also got to her toes and gasped. Geldoblame was appearing before them in all his piglike glory!!

“Hahaha I have found you Asuka, daughter of the traitors!” he said spitefully.

Asuka tightened her hand around her katana. She had to avenge her parents; they died because of Gelderblame! “I’ll stop you!” she said running forward.

Xehla gasped as the battle commenecd. They fought and fought and fought and fought and fought some more before Kalas and his followers realized something was wrong and came runnin.

“Oh no Asuka!” Kalas gasped when he saw beutiful little Asuka fighting for her life!

Suddenly Geldoblame laughed and stabbed her through the heart. Asuka’s bright wonderful eyes widened and she fell to the ground.

“Hahahahahahahahaheheheheheh!” Geldoblame snickered again as she falled down and started drowning in her own blood. “The gods can no longer stop me!”

“Asuka! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Kalas screamed and fell to his knees. It reminded him of the day Gramps and Fee kicked the bucket unfairly. Geldoblame had to pay for his bad deeds!

Kalas picked up his sword and rammed it through Geldoblame’s chest It took a few times as Geldoblame had a very thick chest but he finally impaled him through the heart. Geldoblame also fell down scarlet blood falling from his deep and fatal wounds.

“I have revenged your deaths Gramps Fee and Asuka” Kalas said. He dropped to his knees and cradles Asuka’s head in his hands. “Don’t die Asuka please please don’t leave me alone in this world!”

“I am sorry Kalas but I have been hurt, please take care of Kitsune-chan for me” she said sighing a little as tears ran bravely down her face “Farewell cruel world”

“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!” Kalas cried for the second time that day. And everyone was crying, not just pitiful Kalas, but also Xehla because she felt sad. Asuka was her bff and she was sad to lose her.

:TWO HOURS LATER:

“It has been quite some times since Asuka’s death” Lyude said sadly.

“I knew her well!” Gibari sobbed as well.

“She died a very brave death, and I will remember her forever and ever” Kalas said.

Suddenly there was a sound from the bushes. A girl in a kimono jumped out with a little fox. Kalas gasped, as it was Asuka!

“I am sorry I scared you like that” she said “I forgot to mention that since I’m a god I don’t die. I went to the Spirit Realm and they let me live longer because of my good deeds on this earth” she continued.

Kalas hugged her and kissed her and was happy. Asuka wasn’t dead yet! Everyone else joined the group hug. Even Kitsune was happy because his master was not dead yet.

After that Asuka followed them on their journey and helped stop Malpercero and became a hero. Kalas married her and they lived in a farmhouse on Sadal Suud where they proceeded to produce a little girl. Her name was Sayuri and she had blue hair like her father and her mother’s golden wolf eyes. She had the ability to summon foxes and wolfs from the forests.

Kalas and Asuka were happy. They had a happy family and a happy life. The end.


Author's Note: I...I can't believe I did it. I also accepted Brenda's challenge and produced a Mary Sue story. I...hope I didn't kill anyone in the process. I'm going to hell for this.



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