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Okay, this is a re-post because I decided that the beginning was a bit rubbish so I'm fixing it now, and I will fix the rest of the story too, it won't be deleted, so I won't lose reviews, keep reviewing as I love to hear what you think
And Dead Composer, if you are reading this which I hope you are, then please read it properly and don't just read this chapter and deciding that you don't like it, please give your opinion in a completely non biased
She is Returning
The Doctor, Donna and Martha were about to enter the Tardis when the former spotted movement across the tunnel they were in. He unlocked the door and sent the other two inside and went to investigate, he could feel a disturbance in the universe and he now knew what the seer in Pompeii meant by ‘she is returning’ he knew that Rose had done the impossible. He reached the place where the movement was and the person creating the noise stepped out of the shadows and flung her arms round his neck, “Hello Doctor” the Doctor pulled her closer and kissed her head. The person eventually pulled back and the Doctor was able to get a glimpse of his wife. “Hello Rose” he pulled her into his arms again and pressed his lips to hers “I love you” he said after they broke the kiss. “I love you too” she said as she took his hand and the two of them walked back to the Tardis.
Just as the couple were about to enter the Tardis there was a shout behind them and they turned around and the Doctor thought that his eyes were deceiving him, as he saw someone running towards them that he thought that he would never see again, he closed his eyes and then opened them again ‘Nope not hallucinating then’because the person calling the Doctor was still standing there. “Hello dad” Rose looked at her husband and he said. “She was grown from my DNA in a progenation machine so I’m both parents. Do you still want to come with me Jenny?”
“Yes dad of course I do.”
The three of them walked into the Tardis and tried not to laugh at the looks of complete and utter shock on Donna and Martha’s faces. The Doctor cracked first and started to laugh, he was closely followed by both his wife and his daughter. When they had stopped laughing the Doctor said “Jenny’s alive and I think I know why” he turned to his wife “Rose?” she looked over at him and he continued now that he had her attention “You remember when I regenerated?”
“Yes, how could I forget that day, that was our first Christmas and it was also the most confusing day of my life”
“You remember when I fought the Sycorax, what happened to my hand?”
Realisation dawned on Rose’s face “The leader of the Sycorax chopped it off, why is that important?”
“What happened after that?” he prompted.
“You grew a new hand.”
“Yep” he said popping the “p” as usual “I had regenerated about 11 hours or so before this and because I was still regenerating I was able to grow a new had”
“So what you’re saying is that because Jenny had only been alive for a few hours the same thing applies?” Rose asked. The Doctor smiled at her and nodded.
“Doctor, who is this?” asked Donna, she thought that it was Rose but she wanted him to tell her
“Rose”
“You mean your wife don’t you?” asked Martha.
“Yes” was all that the Doctor said. “Jenny come with me, Rose you stay here with Donna and Martha and try to get to know each other.”
“Ok” the four of them said Rose sat down on the chair next to the console with her feet on the edge of the console and Donna sat down beside her Martha remained standing although she was leaning against the console facing the other two, Jenny followed the Doctor to the medical room on board the Tardis.
So that's it for this chapter, I haven't changed it that much, but one of the Ideas that I had had didn't work in the long run so, I'm going about it a new way.
TTFN
Julie20007