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Author: Supersaiyangirl
Fiction Rated: T - English - Angst - Goten - Reviews: 22 - Published: 06-26-08 - Updated: 08-09-08 - id:4352141

Fallen Angel

Chapter 8

I'm using Freiza's final form in this, just so you know.

“I quite agree.” Gradus said with a smirk. “But this room is a bit containing.” Goten smirked right back at him.

“For once you're right.” Goten said, and without even looking he raised a hand and sent a blast that destroyed the side of the building. Gradus chuckled.

“I was going to use a window, but I like your way better.” Gradus said. Goten glanced at the hole and saw that his blast had gone though several other buildings as well. He'd probably just killed hundreds of people, but he couldn't bring himself to care. The only two people he cared about were soon to be away from this monster's grasp. Goten looked back at Gradus, to see that he was looking at the sight of Goten's destruction as well.

Goten smirked he phased behind Gradus and delivered two jabs, one to the small of the back and the other to the side of his neck. Gradus stepped forward, then spun and swung his tail at Goten. Who caught it before it had a chance to wrap round his neck. He began to swing Gradus by the tail, faster, and faster. Then let go, Gradus shot out of the side of the building and ploughed into the remaining part of the building opposite, destroying it completely. Goten flew outside and stopped above the ruined building, he could feel Gradus within the rubble. Goten smirked as he crouched in mid air.

“Kaameehaa...” A foot ploughed into his back, Goten gave a small cry of surprise and a little pain. The blue energy between his hands vanished as he dropped a few feet. He spun round and glared at Gradus. Who was floating above him, his arms folded and a smirk on his face.

“You did really think I was still there did you?” He asked.

“I was kinda hoping so.” Goten said.

“Ha!” Gradus said. “That's why I like you, Goten, you're still so naive!” Goten growled and attacked Gradus with a flurry of punches and kicks. All of which Gradus dodged or blocked, with a bored look on his face. Goten got angry, and his aura flared as he increased his pace, but Gradus still seemed like he wasn't even trying. Gradus smirked and caught Gotens latest punch in his hand. Goten grunted in pain as a series of cracks came from his fist as Gradus squeezed it. Goten shut his eyes for a moment against the pain and he opened them again he was shocked to ball of ki the size of his head, inches from his face. The blast hit him and he barely felt it, but it had set him backwards a little. Goten heard a loud pop and felt a stab of pain from his shoulder.

Gradus grinned and let go of his hand. Goten left arm fell down limply by his side. If he tried to move it, there was a stab of pain from his shoulder. He looked and realised that his shoulder was dislocated. Goten glared at Gradus as he took a firm hold of his left arm and ignoring the pain, twisted and pushed his arm back into place. He pulled his broken hand protectively to his chest. Gradus watched this, he face unreadable. He didn't notice when Goten pulled his right hand back, their was no sound as Goten soundlessly chanted the words. Gradus only noticed the blue energy of the imminent attack of Gotens just before, he thrust his hand forward.

“HAAA!!” He yelled, and the wave hit Gradus at point blank range, sending him flying back. The blast hit the ground and exploded, destroying a large part of the city. Something due Gotens attention off the battle. It was his mate, her ki was heading straight up into the air. Goten smiled, and failed to notice that Gradus had already got back from attack.

Goten felt a shot of pain up his back and he felt him self drop down to normal super saiyan. Gradus chuckled.

“You'd think a race that prides it's at being strong, wouldn't have such an easy weakness.” He hissed in Gotens ear. Goten felt sick, he knew that Gradus had his tail. Gradus hit him in the face, making him snort out blood. Then he hit him in the stomach making him double over. Then proceeded to constantly knee him in the gut. Goten coughed up blood, and the combined pain from his tail, hand and gut, made him see dark spots.

Suddenly Zukis ki left the atmosphere, and rapidly went beyond his power to sense. Goten smiled through the pain, she was free, his child was not going to be a slave. Now it was time to join her. Goten blocked the next knee, with his left arm, and bite back a scream as he heard another crack as his arm broke. He charged up a blast in his right hand and threw it at Gradus's face. Gradus blinked in surprise and let go of Gotens tail. Goten immediately put distance between him and Gradus. But he couldn't straighten, and face was covered in his blood. Gradus on the other hand was not harmed in the slightest.

“Ready to give up and die?” Gradus asked him. Goten slowly shock his head.

“I will not die at your hand!” He said, panting. Gradus actually laughed at that, then looked at Goten curiously.

“I can see why uncle and cousins had such trouble with you saiyans.” He said. He phased and appeared behind Goten and delivered a vicious elbow strike to his back, sending Goten crashing to the ground below. Goten screamed as he landed on his injured arm. He shock his head trying to clear his vision, but it didn't work. He managed to roll away from his injured arm, and looked up in time to see an energy blast heading right for him, he didn't have time to do anything, not that he could have anyway. He closed his eyes. He knew that Zuki would get the others to wish him back in a year, but he couldn't help being afraid. He felt the blast getting closer, and could feel it on his skin. I wonder what hell will be like. He wondered just before the blast hit.

Ok that's the last chapter of Part 1. It turned out to be more painful for Goten then I thought it would be.

Part two is focused on Zuki.

Please review! Any comments welcome!



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