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Welcome to my latest story yet. It is a parody of the Disney Movie, "The Little Mermaid" Here is the cast.
Ariel: Amy Rose
Prince Eric: Bruce the Hedgehog
Sebastian: Mike Wazowski
Flounder: Alvin, Simon, and Theodore
King Triton: Ian Narver
Ursula: Gruntilda
Scuttle: Captain Falcon
Max: Cheese the Chao
Grimsby: Mr. Tanaka
Chapter 1: The Open Sea
We fade into a scene as we see creatures of the under world, VG coming out on the ocean of Earth. They start swimming after a ship appears from the fog.
I'll tell you a tale of the bottomless blue
And it's hey to the starboard, heave ho
Look out, lad, a creature be waitin' for you
In mysterious fathoms below.
On the deck we see a green hedgehog with orange streaks. He had green and orange eyes and had a robotic arm on his right arm. He was Bruce the Hedgehog.
"Isn't this great? The salty sea air, the wind blowing in your face . . .a perfect day to be at sea!" Bruce said.
Leaning over the side of the ship was a man with black hair, butler suit, and was wearing glasses. "Oh yes . . . delightful . . . ." he said with a green face. He was Mr. Tanaka.
"A fine strong wind and a following sea. King Narver must be in a friendly-type mood," said SpongeBob SquarePants as Bruce walked up to help him with a few stuff.
"King Narver?" Bruce wondered.
"Why, ruler of the VG creatures, lad," Mr. Krabs said as he started putting food in a barrel. "Thought every good sailor or person knew about him."
"VG creatures!" Mr. Tanaka disbelieved. "Bruce, pay no attention to this nautical nonsense."
"But it ain't nonsense, it's the truth!" Mr. Krabs waved a strange looking creature at Mr. Tanaka. "I'm tellin' you, down in the depths o' the underworld they live," He gestures wildly, the creature in his hand flops away and lands back in the ocean, relieved.
Heave. ho. Heave, ho.
In mysterious fathoms below.
The creature sighs and swims away.
Title appears with the cast.
Lisa Ortiz
Sean Schemmel
Billy Crystal
Ross Bagdasarian Jr.
Janice Karman
Jason Griffiths
Andrea Martin
and
Sam Vincent
Various creatures swimming. VG people converge on a great undersea palace, filling concert hall inside. Fanfare ensues. Walking out was Miles "Tails" Prower.
"Ahem . . . His royal highness, King Narver!" Ian Narver enters dramatically to wild cheering. "And presenting the distinguished court composer, the one eyed monster, Mike Wazowski!" a green monster with one eye, Mike Wazowski, enters to mild applause.
"I'm really looking forward to this performance, Mike," Ian said.
"Oh, Your Majesty, this will be the finest concert I have ever conducted," Mike agreed. "Your daughter-they will be spectacular!" He loses control of his vehicle.
"Yes, and especially my daughter-in-law, Amy," Ian whispered to Mike.
"Yes, yes, she has the most beautiful voice," Mike regains control of his vehicle. "If only she'd show up for rehearsals once in a while," he said to himself angrily.
He proceeds to podium and begins to direct orchestra.
Ah, we are the daughters of Narver.
Great father who loves us and named us well:
Cream, Tikal, Sonia, Daisy (Mario series), Kali, Sairisa.
And then there is the youngest in her musical debut,
Our seventh little sister, we're presenting her to you,
To sing a song Mike wrote, her voice is like a bell,
She's our sister, Am-y . . .
Container opens to reveal that Amy is absent. Mike reacts to this and is scared to what Ian is going to do.
"Amy!!" Ian shouted very angrily.
We cut to a pink hedgehog with green eyes looking at sunken ship. She was Amy Rose.
"Amy, wait for us," we hear high squeaky voices from the distant.
"Alvin, Simon, and Theodore, hurry up!" Amy rolled her eyes.
Catching up to her were three chipmunks. They were wearing red, blue, and green shirts while the other was wearing a red cap. They were Alvin, Simon, and Theodore.
"You know we can't run that fast," Simon pointed out.
Amy didn't pay attention to what he said and pointed at a sunken ship.
"There it is. Isn't it fantastic?" she asked.
"Yeah . . . sure . . . it's great," Simon didn't seem interested.
"Now let's get outta here," Theodore walked away.
"You're not afraid now, are you?" Amy grabbed him.
"Who, me? No way. It's just, it, err . . . it looks - damp in there. Yeah. And I think I may be coming down with something. Yeah, I got this cough," Theodore coughs unconvincingly.
"All right. I'm going inside. You can come with Simon and me while Alvin just stays here and - watches for ferocious Pokemon," Amy said as she, Simon, and Theodore go inside.
"O.K. Yeah - you go," Alvin said, feeling confident. "I'll stay and - what? ferocious Pokemon! Amy!" He tries to fit through porthole. "Ariel . . . I can't . . . I mean- Could someone help me here?"
"Oh, Alvin," Amy laughed.
"Amy, do you really think there might be ferocious Pokemon around here?" Alvin asks as Simon and Theodore help pull him in. Outside a shadow passes by.
"Alvin, don't be such a wimp," Simon groaned.
"I'm not a wimp," Alvin said as he gets pulled through porthole.
"This is great - I mean, I really love this. Excitement, adventure, danger lurking around every corn- YAAAAHHHHHHHH!!" Theodore screams as he sees a skull, crashes into pillar causing cave in, and running frantically away, knocking over Amy, Alvin, and Simon. "Guys!!"
"Oh, are you okay?" Amy asked.
"Yeah sure, no problem, I'm okay," Theodore squeaked.
"That's great. Now can you all get off of me?" Simon asked, being at the bottom of the pile.
"Shhh . . ." Amy hissed as she went up through a hole. She looks and sees a fork. "Oh my gosh! Oh my gosh! Have you ever seen anything so wonderful in your entire life?"
"Wow, cool!" Alvin gasped.
"But, err, what is it?" Theodore wondered.
"I don't know. But I bet Falcon will," Amy puts fork in bag.
A monster flies by outside.
"What was that? Did you hear something?" Theodore asked.
"Hmm, I wonder what this one is?" Amy was distracted by a pipe.
"Amy," Theodore said.
"Theodore, will you relax," Alvin said. "Nothing is going to happen."
Theodore sees Rayquaza looming behind him. "AAHHHH!! Run!! Run!!" he screamed. "We're gonna die!!"
Rayquaza chases them all around. Amy's bag is hung up. She goes back for it. Rayquaza almost gets them. They head for porthole.
"Oh No!!" Theodore gasped.
They crash through and go round and round. Alvin gets knocked silly but Amy and Simon save him and traps Rayquaza.
"You big bully. THBBBTTTT . . ." Alvin raspberries.
Rayquaza snaps at him and he runs away.
"Boy Alvin, Brittany is right. You really are a wimp," Simon groaned.
"I am not," Alvin whined.
On surface of Earth. Falcon on his island humming and looking through his telescope.
"Falcon!" Amy shouted.
Falcon jumps and looks through the telescope the wrong way and shouted, "Whoa! Hedgehog off the port bow! Amy, how you doin' kid?" He lowers telescope to reveal Amy at wing's length. "Whoa, what a flight!"
"Falcon - look what we found," Amy hands him the bag.
"Yeah - we were in this sunken ship - it was really creepy," Alvin explained their adventure.
"Earth stuff, huh?" Falcon asked. "Hey, lemme see," He throws the anchor down along with himself, due to his leg being caught on the chain. He runs to the bag and runs over Simon's head. Simon shakes his head as he sees Alvin snickering. Falcon picks up fork. "Look at this. Wow - this is special - this is very, very unusual."
"What? What is it?" Amy asked.
"It's a dinglehopper! People on the Upper World use these little babies-," He bends the fork as it springs up into the air and he catches it. "-to straighten their hair out. See - just a little twirl here," he takes off his helmet and twirls his hair with the fork. "...an' a yank there and - voiolay! You got an aesthetically pleasing configuration of hair that humans go nuts over!" he hands Amy back the fork.
"A dinglehopper!" Amy repeated.
"What about that one?" Theodore points to the pipe.
"Ah - this I haven't seen in years," Falcon examines the pipe. "This is wonderful! A banded, bulbous - snarfblat."
"Oohhh," Amy and the Chipmunks awed.
"Now, the snarfblat dates back to prehistorical times, when humans used to sit around, and stare at each other all day," Falcon gets right into Amy's grill. "Got very boring. So, they invented the snarfblat to make fine music. Allow me."
Falcon blows into the pipe; bunch of stuff pops out the other end.
"Music?" Amy gasps. "Oh, the concert! Oh my gosh, my father's gonna kill me!"
"The concert was today?" Alvin gasps.
"I had a feeling we were forgetting something," Simon said.
Falcon is still contemplating pipe. "Maybe you could make a little planter out of it or somethin'."
Amy grabs the pipe and says, "Uh, I'm sorry, I've gotta go. Thank you Falcon," she waves.
"Anytime sweetie, anytime," Falcon waved back.
We cut to Master Hand and Crazy Hand, then someone in background watching magic projection of Ariel swimming.
"Yeeeeeees, hurry home, princess. We wouldn't want to miss old daddy's celebration, now, would we? Huh! Celebration indeed. Bah! In MY day, we had fantastical feasts when I lived in the palace," we now see an ugly looking witch that walks out into the room. "And now, look at me - wasted away to practically nothing - banished and exiled and practically starving, while he and his flimsy folk celebrate. Well, I'll give 'em something to celebrate soon enough. Master Hand! Crazy Hand!" the big hands jump after she shoutedto them. "I want you to keep an extra close watch on this pretty little daughter of his. She may be the key to Narver's undoing."
We hold onto her ugly mug for a while and then fade out.