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emoTWiLiGHT
Author of 18 Stories

Rated: T - English - General - Reviews: 17 - Updated: 12-04-08 - Published: 09-28-08 - id:4563709

Hello my lovely readers!!

I was thinking yesterday (yes, I am capable of thought. Shut up.) and I got a great idea for a story. Well, not a story… But… Something to test my writing capabilities.

So, I’ll explain my idea, and then I’ll beg you lovely readers to participate and help me.

Ok… My idea:
I want to test how well I write, and how well I can get into the mind of the characters, by being given a new situation each chapter and writing the situation and how the character would feel.

For example, if I was told to write how Bella would feel if James kissed her in the ballet studio, I would put my skills to the test and then upload the chapter and see how you readers thought I did.

So, what I’m asking for you to do is: Review with a situation you would like to see me write, and the character’s POV you would like me to do, and I am going to try to get their thoughts and actions correct. (So I’ll also need your help in saying how well or horrible I did).

I just want to test myself on something, and see if I can tap into others’ emotions as well as I think I can.

So please, give me a situation for a character to be in and which character’s POV I am writing from.

(NOTE: Keep it T-rated. I do not write lemons.)

((NOTE: Depending on how many people review with situations, I probably won’t be able to do everything, but I will try).

And an off-topic note, in the month of November, I will not be writing fanfiction as much because I am going to be participating in NaNoWriMo, so I’ll need to focus on that a lot.

Another off-topic note, for some reason, my profile hasn’t been working. I am unable to edit it. It’s driving me crazy, and it’s been this way for about two weeks.

But yeah.

Please review and give me a situation and a character.

And if you don’t understand the point of this, or the “instructions” then please tell me… Sometimes I’m not good at wording stuff. Lol.

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How this idea came up:
My mom and I were watching Legally Blonde, and when the people were making fun of Elle, my mom said something about discrimination, like they didn’t like her cause she was beautiful and blonde.
And I said, “That’s what jealousy is like.”
My mom was like, “I don’t think it’s…. Well, maybe it is jealousy.” And she said something about how I knew what they were thinking, or something like that.

And it got me thinking… That’s how I do… When I write my songs, little lines come to me and then I turn it into a story almost… Like someone feelings of an experience…. 90 percent of it being experiences that have not happened to me.
I always called it tapping into others’ emotions.

So then I was thinking, do I do that with my stories? If so, wouldn’t that be very artistical and sort of intelligent?
Then I realised…. I might have the mind of a writer.

But, I don’t know for sure. So that’s why I want to do this challenge for myself by seeing if I really can tap into others’ emotions.

Haha… Like an empath.

(Which I do think I sort of am… in a way… I’m very good at verstehen, or putting myself into other people’s shoes.)

So I want to apply that to my writing.

And I’m asking you, my readers, to help me with this!!

PLEASE and THANK YOU!!

So review, and give me ideas. I will post all of them in chapters for this story.

Love you.

Thanks to my beta, .writing who I’m sure will give me ideas faster than I can write them and really test my limits. You pushy, obnoxious, demanding cheesecakehead!! Oh, did I leave out encouraging, nice, inspirational, and essential? Hmm.



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