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AuroraandRosalieWannabe
Author of 13 Stories

Rated: T - English - Adventure/Romance - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 07-22-09 - Published: 11-03-08 - id:4634850

A/N: Hi! I KNOW I have other stories, Atlantis, Avatar, Narnia, Charlie, and others, (2 out of those stories are not up yet). Anyway, on with this story.... I do not own the FF, Stan Lee does (If your reading this you have my permission to take the twins and make a Twin Duo) I am such a kidder!(No seriously!!) Each chapter will be a different characters POV, sometimes switching POV's.

Summary: What if there were twin women along with the Fantastic 4? Jamie and Lee Ann are Reed's twin sisters, with Reed's super brain power too. Jamie wants people to see the real her and cool off her sister. Lee Ann has always been a hot head ( hence her sister wanting to cool her off and just like their friend Johnny). They also always want to know what others think about them and know what each animal goes through just living their daily lives. Jamie and Lee Ann have brown hair like Reed's but big blue eyes the color of royal blue. This story starts right after Reed gets permission from Doom to go into space, at the field where they will launch...

Prologue:

"Reed, slow the hell down! Doom isn't gonna leave without us!" Jamie cried trying to keep up with her brother. Yesterday they got permission to go into orbit to study the cosmic cloud. Unfortunately, Reed didn't invite them.

"Jamie, Lee Ann, I told you to stay home!"

"Well tough shit bro!" Lee Ann said hitting her hand on his back. "You may be 5 years older than us, but you don't control us anymore, today we turn 18." But Reed wasn't listening, he was arguing with Ben.

"Can't do it. Cannot do it."

"External S.R.B's, orbital system engines. It's just like the shuttle he flew..."

"No! I cannot take orders from the underwear model."

"Oh come on now."

"That wing nut washed out of NASA for sneaking two Victoria's Secret wannabes into a flight simulator."

"Youthful high spirits."

"They crashed it into a wall. A FLIGHT SIMULATOR."

"When have I ever asked you to do something you absolutely said you could not do?" Reed asked stupidly.

"Five times." Ben said showing Reed the number.

"I had it at four."

"Well this makes five!" Ben yelled at Reed.

"Hello Ben." Jamie said.

"Aloha Ben!" Lee Ann yelled.

"Jamie, Lee Ann! How are you?"

"We're fine!" Jamie and Lee Ann said in unison.

"Let's go inside huh?"

"OK!" Jamie yelled. They raced inside.

Chapter 1: The Space Voyage: Jamie's POV

I unpacked my bag in my room when I heard a familiar voice.

"I miss you already Debs." Ben said sadly(this was not it)

"Captain on the bridge!" Johnny yelled. Ben immediately stood at attention. Johnny and Lee Ann started laughing at Ben's face as they took his picture. Ben looked at them like he was going to kill Johnny. Aside from the jokes, the room was nice. The latest in technology TV, bathroom fixtures, lighting fixtures, the whole nine yards. The beds were the softest material. Basically it looked like a hotel room, and a five star hotel at that."Digital camera- $254. Memory stick- $59. The look on your hard-ass former C.O.'s face when he finds out he's your junior officer- priceless." Lee Ann busted out laughing and I tried to stifle a giggle. By the time Ben talked Lee Ann was blue.

"Lee Ann breath!" I yelled. Ben wanted to choke Johnny, but instead, he unzipped the suit Johnny was wearing a little bit. I didn't realize he was so... muscular.

"Whoa!" Lee Ann muttered under her breath. "Remember when he was chubby?" Lee Ann said loudly. I busted out laughing, so did Reed and Ben, even Sue when she came in. I turned red and laughed harder when I saw his look.

"Thank you your too kind." Johnny said sarcastically.

"We can handle this ship. I can even handle Mr. Blond Ambition."

"But what I can't figure out Ben is if we should be flying..." I started

"Or do Swan Lake in these suits." Lee Ann finished.

"Who the hell came up with these?" Ben asked.

"Victor did. The synthetics act as a second skin, adapting to your body's individual needs." Susan said after zipping down her zipper. I looked at Reed. His eyes said 'Whoa' but I knew him well enough to know he was about to say something scientific...and stupid.

"That means it keeps the hot stuff hot and the cool stuff cool."

"Wow. Fantastic." Oh crap, I heard Lee Ann slap her hand to her head and rub her face down, making a boing sound effect, she's funny when she wants to be. "Material made from self-regulating, unstable molecules." I smacked Reed upside the head as I left to get changed. So did Lee Ann. I faintly heard Susan shove Reed his clothes. Ben and Johnny had the same idea we had. That Reed was STUPID!

Lee Ann's POV

We reached the space station a week after we left.

"THIS IS AWESOME!" I yelled. Jamie just laughed at my outburst.

"E.T.A. until cosmic event, nine hours." Doom said mockingly. I don't like Doom, he has a God-wanting-power thing going on.

"...Daddy will let you drive." I missed a conversation, crap!

"You keep talkin' and there won't be a next time." Ben said threataningly. I walked with them, turning around to see Susan trying to flirt with Reed, BLECH! Jamie was watching intently.

"Jamie give me details later."

"Got ya." I walked to to Johnny and Ben. I slapped Johnny upside the head.

"Hey!" I don't like Johnny, just as a friend. I like Ben, but like a brother. Johnny started chasing me.

"YAHH!" I started yelling and running around. Johnny soon caught me and we fell to the ground.

"Try not to run." Johnny whisperd in my ear, "I can't catch you like that." I kicked him in the nuts. "GAH!" I ran to Ben.

"It's my SISTER you like, not me! Try not to confuse us!" Ben started smirking, but I slapped him too.

"Now your gonna get it." Ben started tickling me.

"Ha ha ha ha. Stop! Uncle! Uncle!"

"We can monitor the cloud's approach and observe the tests from here."

"Is it safe?" I asked as Ben asked.

"The shields on the station should protect us." Reed said.

" 'Should?' " Jamie said scared.

"I told you not to come." Reed said jokingly.

"What's the matter Ben? Getting paranoid in your old age?" Victor said venimously. Ben looked like he was about to explode and clobber his boss.

"Let's start loading those samples." Reed said.

"Get your suit ready Ben." Jamie said.

"So I see you're still doing all the heavy lifting. Maybe you should have stayed in the lab. Field work never suited you." THAT DID IT!

"Jamie, hold me back!" I yelled as I started running toward Doom. Jamie grabbed my shirt collar.

"Lee Ann, I know they're both like brothers to us, hell Reed is. Let them fight their own battles." I almost bit her, I really did. Jamie's been reading too much Twilight. We both were.

Jamie's POV

Lee Ann was getting harder to hold onto until Ben spoke again.

"He does the talkin'. I do the walkin'. Got it?"

"So take a walk Ben." That only made Lee Ann pull harder. She grunted. I finally let her go and she socked Victor in the jaw.

"Augh!"

"RUN!" I yelled and Reed, Ben, Johnny, Lee Ann and I bolted out the door. As Ben was getting ready, me and Lee Ann were reading Reed's notes.

"Too much math. My brain hurts."

"You majored in Mathematics in college."

"So? I'm teaching vet skills!"

"...strictly buisness." I need to pay more attention when they're talking. The station was huge, made of metal and glass. The glass was actually 10 inches thick and the metal was reenforced steel!

"Hey, two hearts got busted last time. Maybe she's not over it either."

"Wow, that's deep. Let's think about that. You got Victor, more money than God, stud of the year..."

"And you got my brother Reed, world's dumbest smart guy..." I started.

"And worth less than a postage stamp." Lee Ann said sadly. We've been broke for nine years strait. The money me and Lee Ann made was barley enough to cover the bills, considering the size of Reed's lab.

"Don't wander off now, boy." Johnny closed the airlock chamber and Ben went to arrange the flowers. I pushed Lee Ann out of the room to check on Susan and Dr. Doom(my nickname for him).

"Ouch! OK, I'm going."

"Tell me everything." I quickly said to her. I then turned to Johnny, who was sitting right next to me. "YIPE!" I yelled as I fell off the bench and flung everything everywhere.

"Maybe I shouldn't surprise you like that." Johnny said while trying to hold in a laugh

"You think Hot Head?" I said jokingly. He helped me back up and I sat next to him again.

"The view's beautiful isn't it?" Johnny said as he was staring right at me.

"Yeah it is." I said staring back at him. We both knew we weren't talking about the Earth. I stared into his blue eyes until he spoke again.

"Reed really needs to forget about my sister."

"Yeah, I know. He really needs to get out mormhvh!"

A/N: Well, I left you with a cliffhanger! I love those, except when I read them. So, what do you think made Jamie stop speaking? I'll let you vote!

A) Johnny kissed her

B) Jamie kisses Johnny

or C) Lee Ann puts her hand over her mouth, saying "CLOUD ACCELERATING! GET BEN IN!" With Reed behind her saying to get Ben inside

Those are the choices, I also need a love interest for Johnny, for jealousy effects and stuff like that.

I want 5 reviews at the most for this chapter, and after reviewing, you can help yourself to homemade ice cream, cookies, cake and chocolate! I also have milk to wash it all down. Lots o' dairy!



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