Author: PeteTheMagicalUnicorn PM
A forbidden love rises in the town of Forks WA when a lonely priest, hiding a dark secret, falls in love with the only person he can trust: Sister Bella, the new nun that teaches at the school. Can their love survive, or will sin drive them to heartbreak?Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Drama - Edward & Bella - Chapters: 3 - Words: 4,741 - Reviews: 5 - Favs: 8 - Follows: 4 - Updated: 11-23-08 - Published: 11-09-08 - id: 4645359
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A/N: Alright, let me start off by saying Thank You for even checking out this story but before you read I need to give credit where credit is due. So first off, I got this idea through numerous things. But it's mostly based off a play I was a part of that my highshool did called 'The runner stumbles' which is about a priest who is on trial for the murder for the woman he loved (sister rita)
Anywho, there's some MAJOR DIFFERENCES between the play and my story. Bella, playing the nun in the story, isn't murdered or what not. She's just a school teacher who falls in love with Father Edward Masen who is a well...you'll find out. ::Wink::
Another thing I want to point out is something that, for people who read my story are going to get a little controversial about. I warn you now there's definitely going to be some religious references in here of course and don't get all "THATS A SIN BLAH BLAH BLAh" on me b/c of the plot. It's basically more a forbidden romance and having to chose between love (ie; God and Edward)
Also, please, take into consideration that im just a kid...just like the rest of you so please don't flame me up if i do happen to get reviews on this. It'll hurt my feelings....
Moving on, I hope you enjoy the preface of SINNED. The first chapter will be up veryyy shortly.
A Twilight fan fiction
Preface: Learning to read between the lines
Dear Father Masen,
His eyes were a firey contradiction. Hate and Love burning liquid gold.
Sin attachted itself to my name by the feelings that filled me.
"What did you just say?" He demanded, tilting my chin towards his face so that I was forced to look at him.
I had no right, but want consumed my every thought
"You heard me," I replied, struggling to break free of his grasp. Salty tears fell down my face as I looked Father Edward straight in the eye. "I'm leaving. I'm leaving and I'm never coming back. I hate-" No chance to finish. No chance to think. No chance to breathe before cold hard lips covered mine.
I knew it was wrong but seperating myself from you causes my heart to ache.
Our mouths moved in unison, never breaking contact.
But yet, when were together, I feel the weight of a thousand sins sitting upon my shoulders.
It seemed, as though while he kissed me I forgot. I forgot every worry, every sin, every tear I ever cried.
"Bella." When we broke apart he whispered my name.
As kindred spirits , your feelings must akin to mine.
Mmmmmm." I sighed contently in his lap. And then I realized what I had just said to him. "Edward, I didn't mean it. I don't hate you. Forgive me. Please."
Because with this weight, I have learned that devotion for the lord and your love can't exist without destroying one another.
He looked into my eyes even deeper.
And this is why I write to you,
"Edward I lo-" But once again I was cut off. Instead of a kiss it was a large crashing noise. Then I felt the firey heat.
For I must choose between my love for the lord, and the love that I hold for you...
"Whats going on?" I asked though I think I already knew by the cloud of smoldering black dust that seeped into the room.
I apologize if your saddened by my choice, for whatever I choose, I'll be leaving behind one of the things I love most.
Sister Isabella Swan
A/N: Everything in italics are a letter that Bella wrote to send to Edward. BTW this is only the preface which is why its short. Thanks for reading! Cookies if you review!!!
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Hugs, kisses, and Thanks...
PETE THE MAGICAL UNICORN