|That's my baby
Author: Tears On The Balcony PM
Alice has seen a vision of the future like she has never seen before. Who know vampires could concieve? Based on Breaking Dawn when Bella finds out she is pregnant. ((23/11/12 - Hey guys! I'd completely forgotten about this story, but I'm thinking of continuing it. I'll be starting over and fleshing things out a bit. Who's interested?))Rated: Fiction M - English - Romance/Family - Alice & Jasper - Chapters: 2 - Words: 5,102 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 11 - Follows: 12 - Updated: 11-23-12 - Published: 12-23-08 - id: 4736599
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((Hey guys! It's been foreverrrr since I've last been on here. I'd completely forgotten that I'd even started this story until I got an email a couple of days ago saying that someone had added it to their favorites. So, I logged on, read through some review comments, and decided to have a go at continuing it. Obviously, this story was started 4 years ago (Four years! Holy crap I was fourteen then!), and since then my writing style has changed a LOT, though hopefully in a good way. So, I've decided to completely revamp this and start it over from scratch. The content of the first chapter is the same, but I've fleshed it out a lot and gave it some substance seeing as it was mostly all speech before.
I'm planning on continuing this, but it'll be around college work, so give me a chance! I'm not promising any speedy speedy updates. I'm leaving in the original start for those of you who have seen it before, and on the next page is the new updated version. I hope you like the newer one better! So, please, please, please leave me some comments and criticisms and tell me what you think. This is the first time I've ever seriously worked on a fanfic, so I'm more than open for hearing what you think! Thanks all, Ciao! x ))
I ran through the double doors separating the dinning area from the living area. "Carlisle!" I all but screamed, my usually calm and catchy voice high and scratchy. I skidded to a stop, the movement all but invisible. Carlisle, Edward, and Bella all turned and looked at me. I took in each anxious face etched with curiosity and worry. I fell to my knees, breathing deeply, not that I needed to breathe. I felt a warm hand on my shoulder.
"Alice?" Carlisle's voice was barely more than a whisper. "What did you see?"
I looked up at him, he was crouching next to me. He looked worried. I could only imagine what my face must look like. My gaze drifted over to Edward, leaning forward slightly on his toes, his mouth a tight, straight line. I looked at Bella, her heart beat was faster than normal. My gaze dropped to her stomach. She held one hand protectively over her faintly visible bump. I shuddered.
"Alice?" Carlisle asked again, slightly louder this time. My gaze never left Bella's stomach. "Tell me Alice."
"I need to talk to you." I'm not sure whether I said the words or just mouthed them. "It's important."
Carlisle turned, his gaze followed mine. "Ah. Edward, Bella, give us a moment."
They didn't argue, just walked silently from the room. I could feel Edwards gaze on me the whole time.
Carlisle sat next to me on the floor, not making contact, but close enough for me to be comforted. I knew he would wait for me to tell him, not force me to speak before I was ready. For that I was grateful. I took a deep breath.
"Bella's having twins you know?" I started, my voice was indifferent now. "They're going to kill her." I looked up at Carlisle's face.
"All the myths have said that she won't survive, Alice."
"I saw a way for her to live, for them to live. Rose is going to love it."
"Yeah, it's going to be her dream come true. You know how's she's always been about having kids."
His eyebrows knitted together ever so slightly.
"What does this have to do with the… with Bella?"
"I saw her agreeing to let you take them out of her if you had a way to keep them alive. I saw you taking them out of her and putting one in Rosalie and one in…" I didn't finish that sentence. I couldn't. It didn't seem real.
"I also saw that Bella would almost die as you took them out of her, so while you put them in…us, Edward bit her."
"I then saw in a few years time Rosalie surrounded with a good half a dozen children. They were vampire children, but not like the immortal children. These children grew. They were full blooded vampire children, if you get what I mean." I was silent for a minute or too. "Bella was also holding a child. Because she was turned whilst pregnant her body was still able to conceive… I think that's the only reason she agreed, because she was able to have more."
"How…How does Rosalie have… more?"
"I think it's because she had a half formed baby planted into her and it allowed her body to change in a way that would allow the baby to carry to term. Then because her body had already done it once there was nothing stopping it from doing it again. You're the doctor, Carlisle, you should know this stuff." I smiled a bit, "It's not exactly high on my list of need-to-knows."
We laughed together.
"Carlisle?" It was Esme. She was at the doorway looking in.
"Come in, Esme." Carlisle smile at her.
"I couldn't help but overhear the end of your conversation there, but do you really think that will work?"
Carlisle reached out his hand towards her which she took. She gently pulled her down so she was kneeling in front of us.
"It's has to work Esme. Alice has seen it."
"It just doesn't seem possible to take a baby out of its mothers' body, put it in another, and for it to live."
"These aren't human babies we're talking about, Esme. Edward isn't human."
"I know. When is this supposed to happen? How far through does Bella have to be for this to work and for her to be safe?"
"Esme, she isn't going to be safe." I said. "She nearly dies, that's why Edward has no choice but to change her."
If was possible for a vampire to get paler, then I'm sure Esme would have. I almost laughed out loud.
"This is...certainly going to be challenging." She whispered.
She was certainly right about that.
Challenge number one: Explaining it to Bella and Edward