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Kayleigh-Lauren
Author of 15 Stories

Rated: T - English - Hurt/Comfort/Family - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 10-27-09 - Published: 12-26-08 - Complete - id:4743879

So here’s the first chapter of the nine I am writing. Hope you like it please review

Bridget walked through the door, Bryony in her arms and Kyle stood behind her,

‘Mom we have some news’

‘Go on Beach what is it?’

‘Me and Kyle are engaged’

‘I know I was there when he proposed’

‘But now he’s bought me a ring’ Bridget said while showing her the ring.

‘It’s beautiful’ Cate said, ‘it looks very expensive’

‘Price doesn’t matter’ said Kyle and kissed Bridget

They sat on the sofa and spoke about the wedding, ‘I want a big white wedding’ Bridget told them, ‘with a long white dress and 3 little bridesmaids and snow, it has to be snowing and in and old English church, and the reception at a hotel, where the guests can sleep over and obviously a limo, or maybe a horse drawn carriage, I like the horse idea better’

Kerry walked through the door with a boy stood behind her, ‘Mom I have someone I want you to meet’ she told them, ‘this is Jay my boyfriend’ Kerry and Jay walked in the house and joined the others on the sofa, ‘this is my mom Cate, and my sister Bridget and her boyfriend Kyle ...’ Kerry didn’t get to finish off the sentence as Bridget butted in, ‘fiancé Kyle’ ‘this is her fiancé Kyle and their daughter Bryony, and my brother Rory is upstairs or somewhere’ Kerry said pointing to each one, ‘Hi’ Jay greeted, everyone was silent, ‘anyone want a drink’ Cate said breaking the awkward silence, ‘Jay, Kyle?’ she asked, ‘No thanks’ said Jay and Kyle, Bryony started to cry, so Bridget patted her back and shushed her.

‘So Jay, do you live around here’ Cate asked curiously

‘I live a few blocks away’ he replied

‘How did you meet Kerry?’ she asked

‘We’re both in drama club and we had to do a scene together’

Noticing that Jay was starting to feel uncomfortable Bridget changed the subject

‘So do you think we should get Bryony christened?’

‘It’s up to you’ Cate replied

‘I think we should’ said Kyle

‘Yeah we will, Kerry please will you be a godmother’

‘I’d love to’ Kerry replied

‘I’ve got to go now bye’ Jay said while walking to the door,

Kerry followed, ‘I really like you’ he told her, ‘I like you too’ she replied and they kissed, meanwhile Cate and the others were talking about them, ‘I like Jay’ Cate told them, ‘yeah they look cute’ Bridget replied, ‘I think she’s got over me and you getting married’ said Kyle, as Kerry walked in the room went silent, ‘were you talking about me and Jay?’ she asked, ‘yeah but only how cute you looked together’ Bridget said and made her blush.

And that’s the end of the chapter sorry it’s short I have writers block still, so please tell me ideas for the next chapter it isn’t going to be the wedding or the christening yet



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