Author: jaz719 PM
Max and the flock are on adventures around the USA and the world. Along the way Max and Fang must figure out their feelings for eachother. There is only going to be about 5 chapters FAX. Come on and read, you know you want to! Criticism welcome!Rated: Fiction T - English - Family/Romance - Max & Fang - Chapters: 3 - Words: 1,400 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 7 - Follows: 10 - Updated: 05-09-09 - Published: 01-07-09 - id: 4777219
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So I really like reading fanfictions but I have a hard time writing them but I want to finish this one. So I'm going to make it only about 5 or chapters, I think! The ages are going to be as follows: Max, Fang and Iggy 16, Nudge 13, Gazzy 10, and Angel 8! Please review and tell me what you think.
I woke the kids up and we ate hotdogs for breakfast. I was really sick of eating this king of food, we needed some place to chill. Ummm, how bout a hotel? As this thought crossed my mind Angel started jumping up and down screaming!
"What's up with her?" Iggy asked sarcastically.
"Well, what would you guys think if we went and stayed in a hotel in say, New York?" I asked.
Shouts of "YES" and "YAY" filled the cave. Of course Fang sat there looking as emotionless as ever, but I know he would want to go New York because who wouldn't?
We packed up the little things we owned and launched ourselves into the blue summer sky. I felt a little self conscious with Fang stealing glances at me every 5 minutes, but I tried to ignore him again.
Finally after 2 potty and food breaks we arrived in the Big Apple, the lights were so bright they were almost blinding. Haven't these people heard of conserving energy? I asked Nudge to scan the ground for a decent hotel.
"Max, look down there that hotel looks nice and cozy and affordable and I want to stay there, please, please, super uber please--
"Nudge, I get it. We will stay there. So everybody lets hit the ground running," I instructed.
We landed in the parking lot and proceeded through the hotel entrance. I asked Angel to use her powers on the clerk to get us 3 rooms (I know she's not suppose to use her powers for evil but what the hell).
"I call dibs on sharing with Angel," Nudge exclaimed.
"I wanna room with Ig," Gazzy said.
So I handed out the room keys and headed to my room with Mr. Emotionless following behind ( he better not be checking out my butt).
The room was average but it felt good to have somewhere somewhat safe and dry to stay for awhile.
"I'm taking a shower and then do you want to watch a movie?" I asked Fang.
"Yeah, sure," he whispered as he hopped o a bed and flipped om the TV.
I went to the bathroom and took a steaming hot shower. I enjoyed the water relaxing my muscles. I also washed my dirty mane of hair and scrubbed the dirt off my skin. I got out and dried off, then put some short shorts on and a t-shirt. I brushed the knots out of my hair and brushed my very filthy teeth. Then I joined Fang in the room.
"I'm going to shower while you tuck the kids in," fang informed me. I went to the boys' room and told them good night and to be in bed by midnight. Then I went to the girls' room and tucked them in. After Iloveyou's I went back to my room and plopped down on Fang's bed.
I decided to order a scary movie, Haunting in Connecticut. Fang finally came out in black pajama pants and a wife beater. He looked really hot with his dripping wet hair. I patted the spot next to me as the movie started.
I actually got scared at one part and hid my face in Fang's bare shoulder. He froze up at first before putting his arm around me. Eventually we went from sitting up to laying down, with my head in the crook of his neck. I was very comfortable and started to fall asleep.
"Max, lets get up and go to bed," Fang whispered in my ear and sent shivers down my spine.
"No, Fang… lets sleep like this tonight," I whispered back.
Fang liked that idea because he kissed my forehead and tightened his arms around me. The last thing I remember thinking was "Max don't freak out in the morning".
So, there is chapter 2. I know it's short but please review. I really LOVE reading them!