Hey guys! I was reading this over and I was amazed at how many mistakes I made and everything. So I just thought I would just redo everything!

Revised – August 26th, 2009.

Sam’s POV

“Danny! Watch out!” I yelled to him.

BOOM!

I winced as I saw him get hit by an ecto blast and smashed into a nearby building. I watched as Danny smashed though the wall and landed inside the building.

“Danny just run!” I pleaded with him. Danny, Tucker, and I all knew that Danny didn’t stand a chance against this new ghost, she was just too powerful.

The new ghost called herself Ayer. She looked white as a sheet, even whiter than a ghost. She was very beautiful though, wearing a long flowing silver dress. Her eyes glowed silver as well, matching her dress perfectly. But most striking of all was her hair, it wasn’t white like Danny’s, it was silver like her eyes and dress and as she fought her hair moved almost as if it were a rippling pool of liquid silver.

Beautiful but deadly.

“Give up halfa.” Ayer said as she slowly advanced on Danny.

“What do you want?” Danny asked, shaking as he got up.

“Ha! I don’t want anything from you. I just came to get a job done.” As she was speaking, her eyes darted around, almost as if she were looking for something or someone. She stopped looking around once her eyes met mine. She grinned evilly and started stalking towards me slowly.

Out of the corner of my eye, I saw Danny sneak up behind Ayer. I noticed that he had started charging a powerful ecto blast behind his back, he threw it at Ayer, hitting her right in the back of the head. She didn’t even flinch.

“I am one of The Four Elements child! What makes you think that you have the slightest chance in defeating me?” She yelled with a slight crazed sound in her voice.

“What do you want with Sam?” Danny grounded out from clenched teeth. He glanced at me and met my eyes, trying to send me some kind of message.

I blinked and next thing I knew, Ayer was behind me and had me in a headlock. I could see the shock on Danny’s face at how fast she moved from the corner of my eye. “Sam!” Danny yelled out, “Let her go or I’ll blast you to the ghost zone!” He warned, already starting up another blast.

“Blast me and you’ll blast your little girlfriend as well.” She crackled.

Danny and I gazed at each other as he reabsorbed the ecto blast.

I could clearly see the panic in his eyes, among other emotions as well.

“But of course, I'm still taking her.” Ayer said smiling evilly.

“What do you want with her anyway?” Danny asked her furiously.

Arye smiled evilly, “I want her power of course.”

I closed my eyes, breaking my gaze with Danny. How does she know…? How does she know about my powers…?

“Sam!” I heard Danny shout out, instinctively my eyes flew open. I was home.

I was in the Ghost Zone.

Done! :)