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Rated: T - English - Mystery/Humor - Reviews: 16 - Updated: 06-11-09 - Published: 04-13-09 - Complete - id:4989947

Chapter 11


All over New York, the people could see a big black cloud growing up above East Village. Many people stood at thier windows and stare at the cloud. There where flames on the ground, and the people asked themself: What happend?


Susan Long stood up and look for her family and the others. She couldn't see anything, the air was full of dust. Than she found concilour Kulde, laying on the ground. With the old Mr. Smith in his arms. She look for the old man but he havn't any chance, he was dead.

Jonathan and concilour Kukulkan both laying unconcinous in a room in one of the houses at the other street-side. They smashed threw a window and landing at a coffee-table in front of two old ladies, who sat there and drunk thier tea. The house, they landed in, also start to burn when Jonathan woke up. The two confused woman run out.

"Awww... what... concilour? CONCILOUR! Please wake up!" Jonathan jells.

Kukulkan who still was in his dragon-form woke up and transform back.

"Oh my god! Were are we?" she asked. Than they also realize that the house they where in also was in fire.

On the street, Spud and Trixie laying under a big piece of debris when somebody carry it away and relieve them. Trixie couldn't stand up, she was hardly injured. Spud was unconcinous. Omnia and Lao Shi carry them away, but than somebody screams. Lao Shi look around and could see a group of people who ran out of thier houses, most of them woman and children who see the dragons and run away in panic.

"Oh no! They will think that that's our fault." Omnia shout.

"That's not important now! We have to bring away everybody from here and... oh my god." Lao Shi stop talking, they could now see something...

The Smith's house disappeared, there was only a burning heaps of rubble. The Long' house and the house at the other side where hardly damaged and stood also in flames. The street was full of debris, damaged or burning cars and dust. The half street was in fire. And all over the people leave thier houses and run away, because when they see the dragons, they thaugh that was a monster attack.

"MY HOUSE!" Mr. Smith shout when he could see what happend. He turn around and when he saw the dragons he became angry.

"THAT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!!! I WILL ENSURE THAT ALL HUMANS START TO HATE YOU AND...ahhh...."

Mr. Smith fall down and lays on the street. Lao Shi and Omnia could see Haley fly above him, with a car-door in her hands, she had hit him.

"Sorry." she said and transform back. "Where is Jake?"

They look around and found the Smith's daugther, Jake catched, laying unconcinously on the street. Jake lays, in his human form behind a destroyed car. Also unconcinous and hardly injured. When they found him all others arrive. The half of the dragons was injured and every human, instead of Jonathan who safed by Kukulkan, too.

"Jake, what's with you?" Susan yells and hold her son.

"Wait we will help him!" Kulde said and bring Jake away "We have to go now!"

"And the people who saw everthing?" Haley asked.

"Later!" Lao Shi explain and every dragon flew away with a injured or a human when the police and the fire-brigade arrive.


At the electronic-shop all injured laying on a hospital-bed. Brad, his father, and the Smith's where enclosed in another room with Omnia and Kukulkan who delete thier memories. The dead body of Grandpa Smith was in the morgue of the hospital with 15 other injured people from the explotion in the street.

"And the people who saw us?" Haley asked again when Kulde give Jake an injection.

"In 30 minutes we will start to spray a special potion aboth the city. The people won't remember the explotion and us." Kulde explain and walk to Trixie who had a broken leg. And give her a glass of blue water.

"Drink that! In five minutes you can walk again. And during the people lost thier memory we send a team to your street and rebuild the destroyed buildings. In two days nobody will see that there was ever an explotion."

"And Jake?" Haley asked and Kulde get a worried face.

"I have to admit that he his hardly injured. But don't worry." he said to Haley and the Long's who also sitting in the room to get some medical help. "He need's a few days but he will totally recover."

The Longs got happy and where relived. But than Susan remember that somebody was not thier.

"Wait, concilour! What's with Mrs. Smith?" she asked worried. Mrs. Smith wasn't thier and she could talk to somebody from press about the magical things she saw.

"She is catched by our team in your street. She's on the way." Andam said when he entered the room.

"And what you want to do with them now,... I mean... they..." Jonathan wanted to ask.

"We couldn't send them to prison!" Andam explain.

"What?! everybody, instead of the concilours shout. "Why not?"

"Because, when we delete the memory of them, nobody remember that they were your neigbours. The old man died, not during the explotion, he died against a hearth attack, one of our spys from hospital said. And your neigbours never paid for the huntsclan, only Mr. Hubberton and he is died in January 1995." he explain.

"But that hostage two hours ago, Brad's housebraking into the shop,..."

"We have a special punishment for them!" Omnia said when she also entered the room and give Spud a glass of water.

"And... what?" Spud asked.

"You will see... and... wait the American Dragon wake up!!!" Kukulkan said and everybody look at Jake who open his eyes slowly...

"Jake, how are you?" his father asked.

"Aww man... I think we are homeless!" he said and smile.


Three days after that terrible happening, the Long's could back into thier house. The street looks better than before. No other neigbour seems to remember that there was a little armageddon here. When the Long's walk to thier house they could see a For Sale sing in front of the Smith's house. They look threw the window and saw that the house looks like before the Smith's move in.

"What could you see Jake?" his dad asked.

"Wait! ...eye of the dragon... Hmmm... a old woden floor instead of that expensive carpet, old 80s wallpaper... look's live the Smith's never moved in!" he explain and walk back.

"Than everything is okay now." Jonathan explain and opens the door.

When the Long's entered thier house they found a big present basket in thier living room with a note. During Jake, Haley and Susan start to eat the choclate or other sweets Jonathan read the note:

"Dear Long's, welcome in your new (old) house. With that document's from the Smith's cellar, we could win new informations and maybe we can indemnify a few victims of them. Well, enjoy your new (old) home, the only thing the rebuild-team couldn't repair is the doorbell. Creetings from the dragons concil."

"Wow, that's friendly from them!" Jake said.

"Wait there is more," Jonathan interrupt him " PS: And we hope you all enjoy the Smith's and Brad's special punishments.

Everybody look very confused.


More than 100 miles away a bailiff gave Mr. and Mrs. Smith a enforcement action. He took away them all thier expencive stuff and cars. Later they don't move to East Village, they moved to a cheapy flat in a little village in near Albany. The daughter was most angry: what can I do in this little village? And I need better clothes and not that cheap, boring trash from market!!!


In his house, Brad was sitting with his friends in front of the TV and play videogames when his parents enterred and switch it of.

"Brad we have to talk!" his mother said angrily.

Brad's friends wanted to go, but Mr. Morton said they should stay, there where also involted. Than Mrs. Morton shows a letter. Brad look at it was scared.

"Your former principal, Ms. Derceto, wrote us that you and your friends bullied your classmates, espacially smaller and weaker people, sometimes so hard: many of them now need a psychatric.!!!" Mr. Morton explain angrily.

"Wait, that's not true!" Brad yam but than his mother shows him some photos who show Brad, during hit Frederic, during stealing money from a little, thin boy, his Jake4Freak auction and reading the student files.

"What do you say about it?" Brad's mother asked angrily.

All what Brad said was: "Shit! Who took this photos?"

"THAT'S ENOUGH YOU HAVE HOUSE ARREST!!! FORREVER!"

"AWWW... MAANN!!!"


THE END

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