i was just walking to my math lesson,and i met my best friend have been best friends for over 2 years. any way i sat be hind this boy called jack,he had bright blue shinning eyes and the brightest blond coloured hair you could imagon.

i was laughing around and all of a sudden the bell rang for break.i was about to call my best friend when a voice shouted " rachel ,rachel ". it was paige so i said "what "! paige shouted as she was running down the corridor "jack want's to know will you go out with him ", it went silent. i didn't know what to say .so i just said yes, i couldn't belive it. a actuly boy friend had ask me out . it was like a mircal. he took my breath away every time i looked at him. he wouldn't stop looking and smiling. every time he looked at me i couldn't belive it my own boyfriend.

-----please help me to think what will happen next,
could you review the story and come up with ideas to tell the nxt chapter in the story.-----