Author: Kavi Leighanna PM
TV Prompt Challenge - She's not asking the world of him, she just wants to hear him say it. H/PRated: Fiction K - English - Humor/Romance - A. Hotchner/Hotch & E. Prentiss - Words: 358 - Reviews: 12 - Favs: 12 - Published: 06-20-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5153004
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So this is my first crack at the newest set of prompts. Which makes Prompt Set 7, 6 new prompts posted today. Check 'em out, see what comes of your muse!
PROMPT: Just Say Oops (Judging Amy)
"You just have to say it, then this is all over."
She raised an eyebrow. "No? Do you have any idea how much trouble I got into? How much trouble this is going to cause me? The least you could do is just say it."
"I told you we should have had it fixed ages ago and you kept putting it off and putting it off," Hotch replied. "I have no reason to say anything. And I have work to do."
"Nuh uh! Every time I've been ready to go you've been too busy. There's no way you're pining this just on me, Buster. And I'll get out of here when you just say it."
"I'd appreciate it if you didn't call me 'Buster' in the office."
"And we both would have appreciated this not coming into the office at all, but, well, it did. It's not much, you know. I'm not asking you to jump off a cliff here."
But just as she could be stubborn, he could be too. "Since it's not entirely my fault, I'm not saying anything."
"You were the one who picked up my phone at an hour they would never think of you at my apartment with Garcia on the other end!"
"Fine!" he huffed, looking at her with a glare.
She raised an eyebrow. "Well, go on then."
He pursed his lips. "Oops."
Emily grinned as she stood. "Oops is right. And that wasn't so hard, was it?"
I know that was really short, but I kind of wanted to try my hand at something that was as close to completely dialogued based as I could. And 'oops' isn't exactly a word Hotch would have in his vocabulary, so I thought it kind of worked out neat.
Review? Even though it's short?