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Grape Icies
Author of 4 Stories

Rated: T - English - Romance/Humor - Agito W. & Yayoi N. - Reviews: 19 - Updated: 10-01-09 - Published: 06-23-09 - id:5161154

A/N: I recently recieved a lovely little review from someone who called me a story thief. Since 'Straight-Up' didn't give me a reply address, here's what I'm saying to you. As I've warned many times, stupid flamers will be flamed, cooked, deep-fried, and grilled with class.

Here it is (Any Parentheses is just me nit-picking the review):

you ('you' should be capitalized) fucking bitch (Whoops. Run-on sentence, love) the only reason your not up-dating (it's updating, not up-dating) is because you know that this isn't your story and even if people are asking you to up-date (update; there should also be a comma right here) you just take your sweet ass lazy not even your story ass (The last bit made absolutely no type of sense the first time I read it and also, if you want to have all those words to make a point include these: - in between) time okay, (Ouch. That comma doesn't belong there. A period does) you (Again. Capitalization. It is important) suck!!

anyway (Capitalization. Again. And a missing comma) this is from deviant art (A comma belongs here too) but it's not this girls (Apostrophes make words possessive. Or am I more than one girl? Either way, it's still wrong) story (Whoops! Another run-on!) the author that wrote it on deviant art only made (Posted. How do you know she didn't write more?) two chapters (GASP! Another run-on!) the reason why this person can't make (Write. Do I magically produce chapters out of thin air?) another chapter is because the author on deviant art only made (wrote/posted, love) two, (You didn't space between 'two,' and 'she's'. It looks like two,she's)she's probly (You spelled probably wrong) been stealing stories instead of writing them herself (I have? If you bothered to read my stories, you'd be able to tell that the writing style is identical in each one), so all of you don't waste your time...

I am ladyRanko, dumbass. Note that in the beginning of the first chapter (which was the one you reviewed), I say that MY most popular story from DA was being posted. If you look on my fanfiction profile, my homepage links back to ladyRanko at DeviantArt and the homepage on MY ladyRanko account links back to Grape Icies on fanfiction. So what if the names are different? The only reason that isn't so is because I came up with my deviantart name back when I was obsessed with Ranma 1/2 and can't change it. My first pen name was, in fact, Lady Ranko. You can look at old forum posts if you don't believe me. Not only that, but to prove that Grape Icies and ladyRanko are the same person, when I get home, I'm updating ladyRanko's journal and stating in BOLD PRINT 'I am Grape Icies on fanfiction.' and whatever the hell else I decide to write on that journal.

The only reason I'm not updating is because I'm a student just like every other slow updater (Some people are special cases). I'm very busy with three honors classes, double physics, and a history teacher who does not know the meaning of no homework. I also just finished losing my English notebook, so I'm busy rewriting the entire damn thing. That and also, I did in fact start chapter three, but not only do I not have time, but I'm also in the middle of a very long and stressful writer's block with fan fics. I don't know what to do with chapter seven of Life or Death and I hate how chapter three of Boys Will be Boys is coming out. So I'm writing free-lance for a while (you can check my fictionpress page. It's been pretty busy as of late.) until I can get back into the fanfiction fever.

It's sad really because I actually was in physics after a crappy ass week where bad news after bad news kept on piling on. When I saw the review alert in my inbox, it made me happy that yet another person liked my story. Thanks a lot, Straight-Up. You really made my day.

And for all you loyal, wonderful readers out there that are anxiously waiting, just know that I feel your pain and it nags me everyday to get my lazy ass on my Mac and get to writing more chapters. Soon... Soon... It'll all be up soon.



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