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Rated: T - English - Tragedy/Hurt/Comfort - Chi/Elda & Freya - Reviews: 4 - Published: 06-29-09 - Complete - id:5176259

operation start , command confirmed

I sat with hideki on the floor of his appartment I looked into his troubled eyes, he wanted to tell me something. He took a breath as if he was going to say something but he didnt utter a word he simpily exhaled loudly then he looked deep into my eyes.

I opened my mouth and said “ chii likes hideki”. he looked at me with happy eyes but I didnt understand what this meant. “does hideki like chii” .he looked back up at me and said “chii I … chii I love you” we stood up and as if it was automatic he hugged me, I held his arm and burried my head into his chest.

the arm around my waist tightened and he said “chii never let go please” .then I got a surge of energy through me. I glowed and I flew ouside I could hear my system stalling inside of me as if i'd hit something. I glowed a luminous yellow that turned to a deep orange. I landed on the roof my body faded as I could hear the static my operating system was making. Hideki shouted “chii whats going on” .then miss manager turned out on the roof she said “no darling you cant do this” hideki turned to her as my os was making more sounds .miss manager explained that a series of humanoid robots called chobits were a special kind of persocom and that they had the ability to love but once they found true love they would run a program but the program is dangerous and should never be ran not if anybody could help it.

Then miss manager said to hideki “sorry I have to do this”“chobits”.

I replied “voice recognition confirmed”.

“system shutdown and erase all data”.

I interupted “ shutdown interuped software intallation complete now running, recently installed software”.

miss manager cried, i tired to run after her but my legs woudnt move my software took me into a small ball of luminous red and circled me then quickly carted to my heart where I kept my sister freya. Then without a warning I felt like I was being surrounded by another spirit my heart split into two but I wasnt in pain. I felt somewhat lighter then a light formed into another being who looked like me but had different eyes I knew she was my identical sister freya.

She looked at me then we both were confused at we felt a bite in out necks then I screamed and then I felt like there was no more pain and no more suffering so me and my sister ran to go and see miss manager our mother.

Me and freya ran down the staires and we called out for mother but she didnt answer so we went to her room we knocked on the door but she ignored it. Me and freya walked in and we sat and comforted mother who sat crying freya asked her .“whats wrong mother are you not happy no more” she just looked at us together again and cried so I sat next to her and hugged her she seeed to calm down but I could see she was putting it on she really wasnt happy.

Mother finally said “you have become monsters chii your program set off now I cant love you the same way again. The end of her sentence turned into a sob and so we left the room and went to hideki's room .we met hideki and he quikley ran over to me and hugged me but when I sniffed up I coudnt take his lovley smell of ginger and spice instead I got the nicest smell of blood I had to push him away I coudnt take it my fangs were here and ready.

I growled my sister has grabbed me and pinned me to the other side of the room against the wall she told me “no matter how hard this may be chii we have to controll ourselves though I didnt know how though I know somebody who might” .we marched out of the apartment house and walked with my sister to minrou's house he always knew what to do when it was an emergncy like this. We arrived at his house with a usual warm welcome but I hid behind freya incase my instincts took over again. We were welcomed into his house with tea but I quickly explained what was going on and he said “good timing I just created a human persocom tht now reacts to pain even with blood”. my lips quickly formed a large smile as I shouted “where is this persocom! I must see it” then minoru took us down to a dungeon and he said because we are friends and we are in a bit of trouble that we could have the girl for free.

As he took us down into the dungeon we were locked in a room with the humanoid girl who sat in sheer horror when our fangs showed. we sat on either side of the girl she shook so we decided it was time to put her out of her misery. I leaned in at her neck and I sniffed up and could smell the blood pulcing through her veins. so I leaned away from the neck and bit her hand she screamed but she soon fell under a deep sleep. she went limp in our grip freya enjoyed the blood from the neck the same as I enjoyed the taste of the blood from the hands. We enjoyed every second we had with this exciting taste but it wasnt as good as an human because I still had a small lust for blood in the back of my throat. the girl got lifted up and and I followed the arm that picked her up it was minoru. he had come to collect the girl I ask so what do we do for the next feed minoru said this girl can be refilled. He said come back here everyday and I will refill her for you.

The next day came and I woke up next to my sister we decided that we would stay over the other side of the room from hideki because of my power now and what I could do if I let go of my control. I sat next to my sister who looked at me with her new red eyes I loved her brown eyes but they were forever red now. Then I thought to wake hideki up I didnt feel like a feed noe actully the thought sickened me so I went to sit with hideki he woke up at I kissed him he opened his eyes then closed then so he could enjoy her but i became a bit to over powering hideki held me but I was trying not to let go of the control not now but I coudnt resist I pushed hideki back to the bed. Then freya could see me and she ran over to me and dragged me off hideki and held me on against the wall once again to calm me down but I wa so in the moment that I coudnt let go. So I set off to minoru's house to go and have a morning feed before I hurt soebody. Freya held my hand as we walked around the corner to go and experince what I did yesterday.

AT MINORU'S HOUSE

yuzuki stood my minoru and she looked over his shoulder then she looked startled as she told minoru he had recived new mail. The mail had an attached image minoru was very surprised to see chii with her sister and thn feeding from another human. Then there was a knock at the door.

I sumbled through the door and asked for the girl to be refilled then we got took down to the dungeon I sat with the girl and I leaned in toward her neck I could feel her breath on my neck as I leaned in her breathing pattern was weird she was scared but I still wanted to take my time freya took her hand and lifted it toward her mough where fangs formed. They pierced her skin and she let out a scream but freya procceded to eat away at her. I still was at the neck though I hadnt started yet I watched my sister but I coudnt wait anylonger I sank my teth into her neck and she fell into my arms as I held her. Then again it was time to go back home.

Minoru sat us upstaires for a talk about our past day he said have you fed on a human yet wwe both said “no why” he showed us the pictre he was recived earlier but how was this possible no computer could ever get the detail that this picture displayed. But I asked him the adress it came from and he said it was sent by a persocom called kotoko.

I had a sudden flash back

chii sat on the bed and she was held captive by dragonfly he was running his own bot net at his own home. he had over twenty persocoms so he was never seen outside his home. chii sat and he called his persocom over to help him with some planning for the next persocom. he stole chii to use her for a new brand of computer coming out. then freya took over chii and she pushed him away and ran to saftey to save both herself and chii who has now in freya's heart.

I said slowly “dragonfly he was a persocom by the name kotoko” minoru said “dragonfly is the kinda guy who would do this kind of thing. what happened on the night of the software running I told him hideki was confessed his love for me and so I had set off the software. but minoru corrrected me and told me that “it is not possible to set off something so powerful by a simple phrase chii someone has hacked into your system and now you are the way you are because of someone who hacked in” .freya stood up and said “who hacked into her who hacked into my sister!” .

minoru had an idea of who has hacked into my system and he did it using a mail message from a persocom called kotoko dragonfly would do this he was probally testing out some software he was going to put into his later persocoms. Why would he do this to m to my family and most of all my mother.

I used my built in software gps to go and search for his address. I found him within 2 minutes I ran out of the house and down the street. my sister followed to make sure I didnt do anything I might regret later we ran past mothers apartments and down the road past the shops an over the road. I ran into his house without thinking and I grabbed him he dropped his tea on the floor but I didnt care he will pay for what he has done to me and my family.

I pushed him against the wall and I growled at him I shouted at him “you have to stop my program I am becoming a monster!”. but he didnt so I said “leave this one to me freya” I took him to a corner under the stairs and mt fangs apperard from the tops of my mouth. I dived into his neck and I started to taste his nice tasing blood he was so different to artifical blood. this was much purer and rich so sweet like eatig toffee. I coudnt stop but I knew I had to because I was going to give him a chance to turn off the machine he had set on me. I drew back and my fangs and they dissovled back into my mouth he looked at me and ran up the staires and turned off the machine. Freya ran to my said saying “i feel different like I dont have to hide anymore” we went home and I went to go and meet hideki.

I ran to hideki's loving arms we held me in embrace and started into my nice ward brown eyes. I loved him because he was forgiving like that. He looked down at me and he went for a kiss I could finally be at ease. I returned the kiss and he put his arm around me and pulled me in for a tight hug that could send any normal girl looked deep into my eyes and he told me to worry about loosing control over him. I told him though I cant help but to have contol. I put my arms around him and we fell toward the ground still hugging tightly, luckily we fell onto the bed. He kissed me again and said “how lucky I am to have you chii” I opened my mouth to tell him something I managed to let the words escape “hideki love you” our hand locked together as we sat on the balcony under the sunset.

and so the two embraced and they woudnt let anything interupt them

freya lived with chii and the two were the best sisters and dragonfly was thrown in jail

mother lived without a worry for her children and dad looked down on us telling us he's happy.



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