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shakira58
Author of 13 Stories

Rated: K - English - Friendship/Romance - Reviews: 5 - Updated: 07-03-09 - Published: 06-30-09 - Complete - id:5178889

Teddy looked at the time and remembered the time he promised his mother that he would be home before 7:00. “Oh, guys! It’s already 6:30, I better go .” said Teddy as he went out of the house

“Alright bye Teddy!” said Elena

“Ow! Ah! It hurts!” said Zick as he touched his wound

“Zick, it won’t hurt if you don’t mind it.”

“But it hurts so much! Like, so much!”

“I said don’t mind it. Now, let’s talk about something else.”

“What?”

“I don’t know.”

“Well, I was thinking of suing Emily, but it really won’t work. So I thought, maybe we could visit her at prison and . . ..you know .. .figh-“

Elena cut off Zick “NO WAY ZICK! What might happen if you show up there. She maybe plotting on something we don’t know about!”

“Well, I just bet she is, Emily’s a lot of things, but I know she don’t give up that easily.” said Zick.

“Dinner’s served!” said the guard, and all the prisoners got to the canteen to eat

“What are we gonna do know Emily?” asked Creola (the other aguana)

“Drink this.” said Emily as she handed the other aguanas a bottle of potion.

All four of them drank the potion and got out of the canteen

“What are we going to do know?” asked Zaira

“What else? We will pass at the front door of the prison and get back to my house.” said Emily.

And they successfully did what they planned, unluckily!

Elena slept soundly in her room after a whole day at Zick’s.

Puffy, her rabbit was beside her sleeping and her Purcy was sleeping at the foot of her bed.

Zick couldn’t sleep for some reason, he felt like something is going to happen.

He stood up and stared outside his window at Elena’s house, and he took his telescope and spied at Elena’s room, and he found her sleeping quietly.

The other aguanas had been instructed by Emily to go to Elena’s house and get her.

The three aguanas were still invisible so they weren’t seen even if they went in Elena’s house through the front door. But they didn't know it's gonna wore off after five seconds

Elena was sleeping soundly and peacefully until someone barged in her door “Over there sweetie! Tie her up!” said Creola, and Zaira and Amelia (the two other aguanas) tied up Elena with a rope dragged her out the house, Zick who was distracted by Timothy who was talking to him didn’t notice this, so he kept on talking with Timothy.

“Do you think your aunt will still be able to get out of prison?” asked Timothy

“I don’t know Timothy I think-“ Zick stopped talking, as he saw some dark figures moving, then the dark figures were lit by the light of the post light.

The other three figures were carrying, or rather dragging another dark figure.

‘The three figures looked so much like aguanas.’ thought Zick as if he was imagining

‘Wait, I didn’t imagine it! Those really were aguanas, but the one their carrying looks so much like . . . .like . . . Elena!!’ thought Zick

“Zick something wrong?” asked Timothy

“Timothy, Elena! Elena was . . . .I mean. . . .aguanas were .. . .the aguanas were, dragging Elena!” said Zick

“And I think I know where they will take her. C’mon Zick. open your window.” said Timothy

Zick opened his window and asked “Why the heck are you thinking of opening a window at this time of night Timothy?” asked Zick

“What else?! Of course we get out of here and rescue Elena! Now, we have no time to loose!” said Timothy as he jumped out of the window, Zick Jumped out of the window after Timothy and closed it so it wouldn’t be obvious that they snuck out of the house.

Elena had been hit on the head with a baseball bat by the aguanas, and of course, she fainted.

Elena woke up in a room, a room dark and unwelcoming.

Elena touched her lips and it was bleeding

“Zick? Zick! Are you here? Zick!” said Elena as she squirmed because she tied with a rope

“Zick!! Help!! Anyone, please?!” yelled Elena as he voice echoed

then someone who was fat and flabby opened the door “Shut your mouth girl!” said Emily

“Where am I Emily?!”

“Where else?! In my penitentiary room of course!”

“What?”

“You’re kept my prisoner, you won’t be eating and I made sure that you were tied up tightly ‘cause I won’t have you going around my house. You will only beaten and hit!” said Emily as she formed a fist in front of Elena’s eyes

“Only if you want to be in jail again?!!!”

“I won’t be going back there and I’ll make sure of it! For the mean time, enjoy your stay dear.” said Emily as she shut the door.

‘Zick, I hope you’ll come and get me out of here. And I hope you’ll be careful.’ thought Elena

Zick and Timothy were outside a peeking at a window

“C’mon Zick, we better go in.” said Timothy

“Go in? At this time of hour? Timothy it’ll be obvious! We better improvise.” said Zick

“Listen Zick the dom don’t work on aguanes and they will not be affected by it.”

“I know that Timothy, what I do not know is how to get in here.”

“How about we . . . . .”

“We what Timothy?”

“I have no . . .idea.”

“Really? I thought you had somethin’ in your skull by now.”

“Shut your criticism Zick! I’m thinking.”

“Fine, fine. . . .”

Zick. while Timothy was thinking, telepathically called Elena

“Elena? Elena, can you hear me? Elena, please answer me?” said Zick telepathically.

Elena was lying in the room crying, then she heard Zick’s voice

“Zick? Where are you? Zick are you here?” said Elena then a voice answered her in her mind

“Elena, it’s me, Zick! Elena can you hear me?” said Zick

“Zick? Why are you calling me in my mind? And by the way, are you telepathically calling me?” asked Elena

“Yeah, I’m telepathically calling you, but where are you?”

“I’m at Emily’s penitentiary room. But where are you?”

“Penitentiary room? What does that mean? Me? I’m outside the house.”

“Outside the house where? The garden, the front door?”

“We’re near the window.”

“What window?”

“The window with carvings on it and a crimson red curtain inside.”

“Crimson red?! Carvings?! In what direction are you?”

“The, um . . . .left direction.”

“Zick, the left direction? Are you serious?”

“Ya, I am . . .why?”

“Zick, is there a big four-poster bed inside the room?”

Zick peeked in and said,

“Yeah, there is. Why? And how did you know that was in there?”

“Zick how high is your voice?”

“This high.” Zick made his voice clear,

and when you can count it, his voice, in between number one and five,

it’s about four.

“Zick, your voice is too loud! Zick, check if there’s a person sleeping on the bed.”

Zick peeked in the window and saw no one on the bed

“No, there’s no one there. . .”

“What?! Zick! That’s Emily’s window! Get out of there now!” telepathically said Elena.

Zick looked at Timothy who stared at him while he was calling Elena.

“So, what’d she say?” asked Timothy

“She said. . . . .it’s Emily’s window.”

"Emily’s window? Oh no! We have to get out of here before-“

before Timothy could finish his sentence, the window opened

“Well, isn’t it my dear nephew and his cat. Fancy meeting you here.” said Emily as she pulled Zick in by the shirt.

“Tell me Zick, what are you doing here at this time of night?”

“First, tell me how you got out of prison?”

“Simple, me and my anguanes used an invisibility potion.”

“So that’s how you got out!”

“Yes Zick, and I also know you have your powers back. So I have no choice than to steal it away from you again!”

“No way Emily!”

“Yes way. I have my plan Zick.”

“W-what plan?”

“Just . . . .come with me sweetie.”

Emily led Zick out of the room, Timothy tried to get out of the room too but Emily kicked him aside

“You stay here fleabag! I have my own plans for you . .” said Emily as she closed the door.

Emily forced Zick to walk to a room at the second floor of her house.

“Stay here . . .” said Emily as she turned on the lights and went to Elena

“Elena?!” said Zick

“Yes Zick. I kidnapped her again. And . . . . .I’m gonna cut you a deal.” said Emily as she took a gun from the pocket of her robe and pointed the gun at Elena’s head.

“Elena! Emily you jerk! Let her go!” said Zick

“Fine, I’ll let her go . . . .if . . . .in exchange . . .you put your dom in here.” Emily showed Zick a jar with unique patterns, and if you can read monster language you can understand it.

“Zick no! Don’t give it to her! She’ll only use it for money! You . . . .you can help people and monsters with it. Zick don’t give it to her!” said Elena

“I have no Choice Elena . . . I can’t let you die.”

“Zick no!!!!!”

Elena was too late for convincing Zick ‘cause he already put in his dom inside the jar

Emily closed the jar after Zick put in his powers

“That’s what I’ve been wanting all along from you Zick!” said Emily

“Zick!” said Elena as she ran to Zick

Zick, on the other hand fell on his knees on the floor

“Zick, are you alright? How do you feel?"

“I . . .don’t, exactly . . . .know.”

“I feel . . . .much . . . .lighter. I don’t really know why.” he added

Emily laughed evily as she put the jar on her pocket and walked out of the room

“You may go Zick. . .” she said

Emily followed Zick and Elena as they went back to her room and got Timothy out

“Alright Emily! What’d you do to Zick?!” asked Timothy

“That’s easy, I stole his powers.”

“What!? You vile, unspeakable, diabolical monster!! I’ll get you for this if it’s the last thing I do!!!!”

Timothy almost scratched Emily but and aguana held him back

“Let’s go girls. I feel we’re not welcomed here.” Emily said as she took a handful of blue powder from her right pocket and threw it on the floor.

The smoke was too much to bear, it had an awful, weird smell, it’s like it’s mist is blinding your eye,

Zick couldn’t use his envirodom ‘cause he got no powers left.

When the smoke was all gone, Emily and all the other aguanas disappeared.

“They got away! Again!” said Timothy

“Don’t worry Timothy, they’ll have their end.” said Elena

Zick almost fell on the floor,

but Elena ran to him and held him back

“Are you sure you’re alright Zick?” Elena said

“Y-yeah, I’m fine, don’t worry about me.” said Zick as he stood up straight pretending nothing is wrong with him

“You gave up your dom . . . . .for me!” Elena hugged Zick

Zick blushed and said: “Wouldn’t you have done the same?”

“Of course I would! I would even give up my life. Thanks Zick, it’s the nicest thing you ever did for me.”

“Thanks. I hope you appreciate it.”

“I do, very much. And, I’m sure we’ll get your powers again from Emily soon.”

“No, I’m tired of running around like a fool.”

“What?” asked Elena in a confused voice

“Elena, you’ve been hurt, so many times, and I’ve caused it. I’m tired of getting you hurt. I’m tired of fighting, I’m tired of getting the ones I love in danger. So what of Emily has my powers, if she wants it, then let her have it! Maybe it wouldn’t be so bad being normal for a change.”

“No Zick, if you don’t want to get your powers back then I will. It’s not right! You’re the one who owns your powers, not Emily! It’ll be hard for you to see the monsters in the house and all the monsters around. “

“I don’t care. And don’t bother to find Emily ‘cause you won’t find her, it’s ok for me if I lost my powers. . . . . .as long as I have you.”

Zick blushed a little and so did Elena

“Zick, that’s the sweetest thing you ever said to me . . .”

“I love you Elena . . . . .I always have and I always will, I would rather give up my life than to see you hurt.”

“I-I love you too, Zick.”

Zick slowly moved closer to Elena, and closer, and closer until his lips met hers

Elena pulled away from the kiss playfully and grabbed Zick’s hand and dragged him out of the house

“C’mon you guys we better go home, it’s getting late!”

“Aw, you had to ruin the romantic moment Elena.” whined Timothy

“I thought you never liked lovestories?” Elena said

“Not on t.v., but in real life I do.” said Timothy

“I guess we won’t be seeing aguanas for a while won’t we?” asked Zick

“Nope. I guess not.” said Elena as she put both of her hand in her pocket

And the three of them set home together . . . .knowing that there was no one, and nothing to disturb them, no monsters, no bad thoughts, not even aguanas, Zick knowing that he was just going to live a simple life now. No adventures and no fun, but he also know that his aunt was already far away, away from him, his friends and his family . . . . .. . . or so they thought.

A/N: I think I’m going to add a sequel at this story . . .but for the meantime, I hope you liked it! Please review. . . .



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