|I Take My Words Back
Author: naruhina-addictedyellowluver PM
Well...i and aQuamarine had talked about this earlier. She said she'll give her work to me because she does not want NaruHina fics so....here's the summary. Can Hinata stand a chance after being rejected by Naruto?Rated: Fiction M - English - Hurt/Comfort/Romance - Naruto U. & Hinata H. - Chapters: 3 - Words: 2,841 - Reviews: 11 - Favs: 3 - Follows: 6 - Updated: 07-06-09 - Published: 07-02-09 - id: 5184317
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AUTHOR'S NOTE: I'm the writer in this article now so I own this fic. Not aQuamarine or anybody else. Besides…I helped her giving Ideas with this fic..so there will be slight changes on this fic and….KUDOS!!!
Me: So uhmmm…Yeah… It is sooo happened that my lovely friend aQuamarin1427 (coughs)Allison(coughs) stopped on continuing this lovely fanfic of Naruto and Hinata's so…. I just well…decided to continue this fanfic with full pledge!
Naruto: (wonders and scratches his head)Uh-huh?!
Me: So…I'll just simply do what ever I want with you and Hinata!
Naruto: (eye twitching moment) WTF! Why the—STUPID!
ME: what? YOU LIKE HINATA AS A—
Naruto: (cuts in while blushes) FRIEND! That's why, so stop pairing us and PLEASE don't make it rated M just T just like what aQuamarine did.
ME: Well…uhmmm…I'm not like her you know… I'm a little bit more exotic and daring than her when it comes to writing.
Naruto: NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! YOU REALLY ARE STUPID!
ME: HINATAA!!!! COME HERE AND FUCK NARUTO!!!
Hinata: U-uhmm… i-I c-can't –fu—c-c-him..so—rr--y…. (blushes then faint)
ME: oh Hinata!!! You are so cute when you blush!!! Hahaha!!! (evil smirk)!
Naruto: NOOO HINATA ARE YOU ALRIGHT??!
Hinata: (gets up) am I in heaven??.
ME: (adores) ahhh…uhhmmm…cute couple!!!!
CHAPTER 1: You and I are "JUST" Friends
It was a rainy morning and two shinobis are sparring with each other in the training grounds. A blonde pressed a moon-eyed girl in the tree. The wet clothes rubbing each other made them moan in pleasure and it is a very blissful feeling that feels ohhh sooo right but at the same time, felt so wrong. Naruto backed off and started walking towards the town leaving Hinata startled looking back at his retreating form. "Hinata. I got to go, see you next time," naruto said.
"W-wait! Naruto-kun!" Hinata said as he tried to catch up with him. Tears were freely flowing and It was hard for her to breathe. "Don't leave me behind; I don't want you to leave me. Have I ever done something wrong?" She felt resolved and cool after that emotional feeling building up after all these years. She finally caught up and hugged him (think about when Sakura hugged Sasuke). "Hinata, I, how should I say this, don't even love you or like you. So please, don't hug me like we have an intimate relationship with each other" Naruto looked down at the shocked and hurt kunoichi before sighing an expiration sigh "I like you only as a friend nothing more, so please act like one" he ended his sentence with a snarl.
She felt rejected.
She doesn't know what to do.
The world is crumbling down to her feet.
The only man she loved, she cherished, she cared for..
Doesn't love her…
"Why?! Why?! I have loved you for all these years and yet, you just can't return it back! Aren't I good enough for you?! Naruto-kun, if you stay with me I'll promise you everyday will be enjoyable" she cried her heart out.
"Hinata! So you wanted your love to be returned huh?! Are you greedy or something?! You're acting crazy snap it out!" he said, irritated "Man! I'm soaked and it's all because of you! Remember, I only liked you as a friend" he spun on his heels and started to walk down the gloomy lane.
"N-naruto, h-help me" she was now, shivering. Too many heartbreaking events, too many stabbing words and too many emotions, all and all this is too hard to process. She beamed a dull smile in his treating form before looking at the crying sky with her ghost eyes wishing that this was all a bad dream. Her head, her heart, her body ached and she willingly plunged into the realm of unconsciousness.
Naruto, peeking at the girl she left behind, saw that she was about to fall to the muddy ground. "Che, troublesome woman" he languidly picked her up and brushed off her locks. Naruto smiled idiotically at his self thinking about what he said before "Ha, I'm starting to talk like Shikamaru" he laughed light heartedly before going back to the village.
It was a dark oblivion with events that were never good for the soul and the heart repeating over and over again, it was hell for Hinata. She knew she can never change the past but, she will try her very best to make the man she wanted the most, love her
ME: Remember. I just continued aQuamarine's writings because she doesn't want to continue this fic. She's not that much kind of a NaruHina fan…so…don't tell me that im copying her…
aQuamarine: I would like to hear reviews to keep me motivated because if not, it's okay but the thing I might get bored and won't continue this story.-------------- my hobby =D.
ME: AND JUST LIKE HER… I WANT REVIEWS OK?!!