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LoViNtheCrAzY
Author of 36 Stories

Rated: M - English - Romance/General - Lorelai G. & Luke D. - Reviews: 13 - Updated: 09-13-09 - Published: 07-25-09 - id:5248639

Author's Note-

I want to thank everyone for reviewing the last chapter !!!! I love the comments, :D. And I want to thank the Yankees for teaching me everything I know about baseball. My knowledge came in handy for this one.

And here's chapter two! Enjoy! And please review on your way out!

That's Where It Is

Chapter Two: Going For The Cycle

Luke sat up in bed, his legs lying over the covers as he held the little black box in his hands. In just a few minutes, he would give her back her engagement ring. The band may be a bitdifferent, having been sized to fit her, but the diamond was the same. It received some polishing to give it a new shine, but essentially, it was the same ring his father gave his mother allthose years ago.

Just for a second, Luke thought back to Rachel. The whole town thought he would propose to her. They all thought he would marry her, get her to settle down. And yeah, he thought about it. He did love her, but he knew that she wouldn’t ever stay put. He knew he wouldn’t give her his mom’s ring. With Lorelai, it was different. He knew. He knew it when they first met, when she came in like a tornado, babbling a million miles a second; he knew she was something special.

“Hey,” Lorelai whispered.

Luke’s head snapped up as he came back from his thoughts and scrambled with the box, trying to hide it underneath the blanket, but it was too late.

“Whatchya got there?” she asked with the biggest grin while leaning against the door.

The man shook himself back to the present and his eyes widened. They awed at the sight of her bare legs that were dusted with a light tan. They awed at the silky red material that just barely covered her sex. They awed at the teddy that flared over her curves, the neckline a V cut with black lace lining the trim. They awed at seeing the thin spaghetti straps that curved over her shoulders. They awed at the smile that he fell for, her eyes that drew him in, and her dark hair that she left in loose ringlets. Those curls drove him crazy, and she knew it.

“Wow,” he managed to utter, being unable to keep his eyes from tracing her body again.

“You like the red?” she asked, her smile growing.

Luke nodded, his eyes wide like he was a little boy at a candy store.

“So you gonna give it another go?” she asked while jerking her chin at the box in his hands.

Luke nodded. “Come here,” he said, his tone dangerous.

Lorelai pushed off the door frame and walked across the room to crawl in bed next to him. She put her head down on his chest and wrapped her arm around his belly while he dropped a kiss to the top of her head. “Lemme see it,” she whispered.

Luke sighed while propping open the box to reveal the ring. “This wasn’t how it was supposed to go,” he said gruffly. “Patty’s gonna kill me.”

Lorelai smiled. “Just tell me you love me. Tell me you’ll run out tomorrow and find us matching jogging suits,” she finished with a grin while tipping her chin up at him.

Luke smiled, he couldn’t help it. The curve of her lips was contagious. “I love you,” he said simply. “And no pink,” he warned.

Lorelai giggled while pressing her face to his shirt. She pressed a kiss to his belly before rolling her head to look back at the ring.

Luke’s hand traveled up her back to tangle in her hair. “Can I put it on you now?” he asked with an amused smile.

“Thought you’d never ask,” she said while holding up her hand.

With the biggest grin, Luke carefully plucked the ring from its box, and then took her hand in his. He slid the ring down her finger, turned the diamond so it faced the right way, then kissed her knuckles before laying her hand over his stomach, trapping it there with this.

Lorelai sighed in contentment with happy eyes glued to her new ring. “You really know how to make a girl wait, but wow,” she awed, “so worth it.”

“Yeah?” Even without the one knee thing and a speech?”

Lorelai nodded. “This was more us,” she said. “I must be the only girl who gets proposed to twice, by the same man, after saying yes the first time, and before getting married even once.”

Luke couldn’t help but laugh. “I can do it again if you want. Maybe you’ll break a record or something.”

“Nu uh, you’re never getting it back now,” she said while hiding her hand underneath her chin.

“Good,” Luke said before kissing her forehead. “I don’t want it back.”

With a smile on her face, Lorelai sighed while nuzzling his chest, pressing her face to his warm skin. “So it's offical,”she murmured.

Luke looked down and smirked at the sight of her petting him.

“No going back now,” he warned.

“This is it, you and me. And when we say 'I do' that's really it. Death can only do us part then.”

“Or a really bad divorce.”

Lorelai tilted her face up to frown at him. “You divorce me and I'll go after your empire, buddy.”

“Empire?”

“The diner; keep up.”

Luke rolled his eyes. “And what the hell would you want with a diner?”

“Um, hello, have we met? I'd have all the pie and coffee I want, at my disposal, 24/7.”

“Don't you have that now?” Luke challeneged.

Lorelai shook her head. “You wouldn't give me coffee now; it's too late... mabye after sex. You're highly agreeable after gettin' some,” she said with a grin.

“No im not,” Luke argued with a frown.

“Yeah?” Lorelai asked with raised brows. “Bet you ten bucks I get all the coffee I want when I'm through with you,” she promised with a sure smirk on her face and a gleam in her eyes as she swung her leg over his body to straddle his lower torso.

“Lorelai,” Luke tried, but his hand automatically found their way to her hips.

“Yes?” she asked sweetly and innocently while bending to press her lips to his scruffy cheek.

“No coffee,” he muttered stubbornly while rubbing the silky material of her night gown with his hands.

“Mhmm,” she hummed while trailing kisses around his cheek and over his jaw until she stumbled upon his lips. She flashed a big smile before tugging at his lower lip, trapping the pink flesh between her teeth and pulling at it playfully. She released him not a second later, instead molding her lips around his in a passionate, possessive kiss. His hands tightened around her hips when her tongue swept through his mouth and then the battle began. They kissed for minutes, Lorelai grinding her damp sex over his belly, Luke's hands moving up and down her covered body and their lips sharing small kisses between every oral duel.

Soon enough, Lorelai felt a pair of big, strong hands cup her breats and when she did, she pulled away panting and out of breath.

“What's wrong?” Luke asked anxiously, his chest heaving as he searched her eyes.

Lorelai's smile was slow to come, and when she finally managed to relgulate the flow of oxygen, she found his gaze and accused, “you're trying to distract me. I'm supposed to be wow-ing you so you're left in a helpless daze, thereby agreeing to everything I say,” she explained with a wicked grin.

“Yeah, right,” Luke scoffed. “I do that and you'll have me walking around in nothing but an apron everyday.”

Her smile widened. “Only in public. When we're home you can lose the apron,” she offered generously.

Luke rolled his eyes. “Gee, thanks.”

“Anytime,” she returned before sliding down his chest, leaving kisses over his flat nipples and solid abs in her wake.

“Where are you going?” Luke asked while watching her.

“Where do you think?” she retorted when reaching his boxers. She hooked her fingers around the band of the shorts while motioning for him to lift up. He complied and so Lorelai pealed the shorts off, inch by inch, wanting to build the anticipation. Her eyes followed every move, her blue orbs turning dark with lust after every passing second. When his hardening manhood was freed, her smile doubled.

“Start practicing,” she whispered while leaning close, the words washing over his cock.

“What?” Luke asked absentmindedly with his attention focused on her swollen pink lips that were just inches away from him.

“Yes, Lorelai, you can have some coffee,” she started before poking her tongue out and swirling it around the sensitive head of his stiff cock. Luke groaned deep in his throat at the sudden shock. Lorelai left a light kiss where her tongue left a moist trail and then she tilted her face up to look at him. “Oh, yes, Lorelai, you can have as much pie as you want,” she said with her previous smirk while wrapping her fingers around his shaft and stroking up and down with eyes glued on his. “How you doing, babe?” she asked at the look on his face. “Ready to give in yet?”

“Nope.”

“Okay. Then you leave me no choice,” Lorelai said through a sigh. The second the words left her mouth, something else took their place. She wrapped her lips around his hard dick while her hands wrapped around his balls. Her fingers massaged him while she took his cock deeper into her mouth.

Luke had to fight the urge to thrust up into her. Her moist mouth, her talented tongue and her soft hands were driving him to a point of no return. He tangled his hand through her hair, wrapping his fingers around her dark locks, urging her to take him deeper.

“Mmm,” Lorelai hummed, the sound bouncing around her mouth and zipping through his cock, pushing him even higher.

“Lorelai,” he warned.

“Mhmm,” she agreed while laying her hands over his torso, on either side of his belly button. She brushed her thumbs back and forth over his headed skin, trying to sooth him, letting him know it was okay; he could let go.

“Damn,” he cursed, his voice low and deep, but desperate. “Fuck me, Lorelai,” he begged just before coming. And when he did, the Gilmore swallowed her prize with a smile .“All yours,” Luke surrendered while patting his panting chest.

“Knew you'd see things my way,” Lorelai gloated with crawling over his body, getting down low so her curves brushed over his spent cock. When she reached his chest, she let her body fall to his with a big smile.

“Jeez,” Luke groaned at the impact.

“You're not as light as a feather, you know.”

“Maybe not, but you were as stiff as a board just a second ago.”

Luke rolled his eyes at the cheap shot. “I walked right into that,” he said through a sigh while wrapping his arms around her back and holding her close.

“Yes you did,” Lorelai agreed with mock seriousness before leaving tiny kisses over his lips.

“That's it?” he asked with a frown when she pulled away.

This time Lorelai rolled her eyes with a smirking smile as she brushed her lips over his again.

“That was shorter than the first time,” he argued with such a sad face that Lorelai couldn't help but cup his scruffy cheeks in her hands and press a long, crushing kiss to his pouty lips. A moment later she pulled away, but went back for small kisses.

“How's that?” she asked in a whisper after finding his gaze. Luke shrugged.

“I've had better,” he teased.

Lorelai narrowed her eyes at him. “Mean.”

Luke loosened his hold around her so he could slide her body up enough so her perky nipples were lying over his flat ones.

Lorelai looked down and grinned. “Like that, huh?”

“Love that,” he said while reaching out to cup the sides of her breasts, his thumbs swaying back and forth over her tantalizing mounds.

“Time to get naked?” she asked, hopeful.

Luke shook his head. “Like this thing,” he said while his thumbs continued to brush over her new gown.

“And I'm glad you do, but I wanna get naked,” she argued stubbornly.

“You always wanna get naked.”

“And usually you want me naked,” she grumped.

“This is new; don't you want to get your money's worth?” he challenged with raised brows.

Lorelai sighed. “Fine.”

“Sit up.”

“Bossy man,” Lorelai grumbled, but none the less, she pushed off his chest so she was straddling him again.

“Just want you to enjoy your new outfit,” Luke said while taking his cock in his hand and stroking it a few times.

Lorelai's eyes fell south. “Ready to go again?”

“Yup.”

“And you say you're an old man,” she mocked.

“Yup,” he agreed while pulling the end of her nighty up just enough to get a look at her bare pussy. He put his fingers to her belly, but rubbed his thumb over her smooth skin. With every swipe, he followed the curve of her sex, his finger disapearing between her folds and back and forth again.

“Oh,” Lorelai breathed through closed eyes, a shock shooting through her every time he brushed over her clit.

“Lean back,” Luke whispered, the words dangerous.

Lorelai planted her hands on the mattress behind her, exposing more of her pink folds to his hungry eyes. He ducked his thumb into her opening, taking some of her liquid with him when his finger trailed between her folds and over her sensitive clit. With her head thrown back, Lorelai grinded agianst him while Luke rubbed the pink, wet bundle in small, slow, torturous circles.

“Oh God, more, faster,” she moaned while pushing back and forth.

“You sure you want more?”

Lorelai nodded enthusiastically. And with that Luke quickly rearranged them so Lorelai was lying on the mattress with her head on a pillow while he was stretched out between her legs, his own hanging off the bed while his eyes swept over her glistening folds.

“Look at you,” he couldn't help but aw.

“You mean, 'look at the promise land?' she questioned with a grin.

“You,” he whispered before flicking his tongue over her clit, testing the waters.

A long breath filled her lungs while her eyes fluttered closed. She reached down to thread her fingers through the small curles at the nape of his neck while the waves of pleasure coerced through her body.

Quickly, Luke grew more demanding. Seconds later, while he was fiercely sucking her clit into his mouth, two fingers were moving back and forth between her tight walls.

“Oh, Luke, suck me,” she encouraged mindlessly at the feel of his mouth tugging and pulling on her wet clit. “Oh yeah, so good,” she moaned.

Luke continued lapping at her juices and fucking her tight pussy with his fingers until finally, she came. He peaked up at her while she traveled higher and higher and if the sight of her coming body wasn't enough to make him rock hard all over again, the sight of her squeezing her soft breasts in her gentle hands took him over the edge. He could see her hard nipples peaking up through her fingers and was more than ready to claim her breasts as his own.

Lorelai felt that coiling in her belly, the rush running through her veins and her juices dripping from her pussy when she reached that peak.

Luke groaned as she came while he couldn't help but rub over the mattress, needing the friction as he watched her climax. Getting her there, it always drove him crazy.

“Your tongue should be illegal,” Lorelai managed to say through panting breaths while her heart hammered away in her chest as she readjusted her nighty so the top was covering her breasts again.

“You should be illegal,” he grumbled while falling back on the pillow.

Lorelai turned to smile at him. “If I was illegal, then you'd go to jail for screwing me, and then think of how boring your life would be without Lorelai there to entertain you, eat your food, drink your coffee and suck your dick,” she listed with a big grin.

“Lorelai,” he warned.

“Just think what would've happened tonight if we weren't here together because you were sitting in jail with a big guy named Larry and his brother Mo.”

“I don't like where this is going.”

“After having spent months locked away with nothing but a picture of the beautiful, wonderful, amazing Lorelai, you just can't take it anymore. You need someone to suck on your dick. But your poor mouth can't reach.”

“If you don't stop, I'm taking the ring back.”

“And so Mo comes along and shares his troubles with you. He says he's in the same boat as you. His pretty girlfriend was illegal too and what he did was a no-no when he threw her on the table and fucked her senseless.”

“Your mind needs to be censored.”

“And you say, 'Oh my God, Mo, I have the same problem. I'm about ready to burst!' Mo says, 'Me too! And so Mo offers to suck your-” but before the next word could come, Luke put his hand over her mouth.

“You're a sick woman, you know that?”

Lorelai nodded through a smile.

Luke sighed while dropping his hand. “I say one thing and that comes out,” he said while shaking his head at the mistake.

“I can pull out a story with a snap of the fingers. Impressive, huh?”

“Very,” he agreed dryly.

“I want pie.”

“And you can switch gears faster than anyone I know.”

“Oh, and coffee, I want coffee,” she added with a bright smile.

“Tomorrow; come on, it's late,” he begged, knowing the last thing she needed right now was caffene in her system.

“But earlier you said it was all mine,” she argued through a pout.

Luke sighed. “You know I'm gonna give in, so if you want it, go get it.”

Lorelai smiled while leaning over to peck his lips. “Tomorrow. I just wanted the satisfaction of getting a yes.”

“And if I said no, that woulda stopped you?”

“Pft, no,” she denied while turning to roll on top of him. “You know what I just realized?” she asked while looking down at him.

“What?” Luke asked while rubbing his hands up and down her bare thighs.

“I never got naked,” she whispered.

“Well, you know, you could get naked now,” he offered with a shrug while watching as she wiggled around a little. “If you want.”

“How kind of you to offer,” Lorelai said while lifting the nighty away from her body and tossing it across the room.

Luke's eyes immediately flew up at the chance to finally see her breasts bare and wanting. They've been mostly covered up, but still managed to drive him crazy.

Lorelai leaned forward, pressing her chest to his while whispering, “I want you to come inside of me.”

Luke nodded, his eyes widening at the words.

Lorelai sat up again, her sights set on his dick as she leaned up enough to guide him to her opening. She sank down on him slowly and carefully, enjoying the feel of his manhood filling her tight walls. “My God, you're so hard,” she moaned in aw through closed eyes while lowering her body further, wanting every bit of his pulsing cock inside of her.

“Oh yeah,” Luke gloated, the words deep as he felt her surrounding him.

“Oh,” Lorelai breathed in surprise. “Luke!” she gasped as he suddenly thrust up into her hard and fast.

“So hot, so hot,” he chanted. “You're so fucking hot,” he said while lifting her body up and down, watching as her breasts bounced with every move, her hard nipples begging to be sucked on.

Lorelai squeezed him between her walls, trying to get him to slow down a bit, but that just spurred him on further as he quickly leaned up and wrapped his lips around one rosy nipple while pulling a hand from her hip and squeezing her other breast roughly.

“Oh, Luke,” she moaned while reaching for her clit, her finger rubbing fast circles. “I love you, I need you.”

Luke tugged at her nipple before releasing the bud with a pop and sucking the beaded tip into his mouth again. Seconds later he switched to her other breast, giving it the same attentions while pounding her pussy.

Lorelai held him to her while riding his dick, matching him move for move when suddenly his mouth ripped from her nipple and his forehead fell to the valley between her breatsts. One hand wound to her back, holding her close as he found himself coming.

“Yeah, baby, come on, come for me; come inside me. Fuck me."

The words gave Luke that extra push and Lorelai smiled at the feel of him spurting into her. When he gave her everything he had, Luke quickly went about leaving kisses over her skin, trailing his lips around her breasts, over her nipples and to her neck, letting her know hew as still in this. He wanted her to come.

Lorelai reached her climax seconds later, her hot juices pouring over his throbbing cock.

“That was... whoa,” she stated, being at a loss for words.

Luke looked up to give her a shy smile. “Sorry,” he apologized. “I didn't hurt you, did I?”

She shook her head before kissing his forehead. “You never do, babe. You couldn't hurt me like that.”

“Got a little rough,” he admitted gruffly.

“It was hot,” she assured him. “Ready for bed now, energizer bunny?” she asked while brushing her fingers through his hair.

Luke nodded before pressing a kiss to her belly, then easing her down on the bed next to him.

Lorelai quickly cuddled up on her side with Luke wrapped around her body behind her.

“Hey, we did it,” she whispered a moment later.

“Did what?” Lorelai turned on her back to look at him.

“You know that thing baseball players do? I saw it on T.V with you the other day on one of those classic thingys. When somone hits a homerun and gets to first base and second base and third base. What's that called?”

“A cycle?” he asked with a grin. “When a player hits a homer, a single, a double and a triple in one game,” he listed.

“Yeah, that. We did that,” she said with a pleased smile.

“We did, huh?” he asked, amused at the comparison.

She nodded. “You sucked me, I sucked you, and we fucked eachother. The cycle,” she said simply.

“You're crazy,” he said while reaching to tuck a few loose locks behind her ear.

“We got a cycle,” she whispered happily while turning and burrowing into his chest. Luke's smile widened while he hugged her to his body.

“Yes we did.”

To be continued... Please Review!!!! Thank you!!!


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