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Rated: K+ - English - Poetry/Fantasy - Reviews: 4 - Updated: 10-16-09 - Published: 10-01-09 - id:5415143

Just something I wrote real quickly while in the middle writing Seth and Ivory =)

The Queen of Hearts

The visual is disoriented.

You’re in front of me. I see your lips move. Though, you’re miles away.

I’ll try to answer you, but I sway.

I choke on words that I can’t even hear.

Words must have formed because you turned away.

Blinding lights. I see them marching. I see them right in the opening of a new dimension.

They won’t stop. They just keep coming.

I’m so hypnotized by it.

I gawk and fall further into another realm.

I can feel my own mind flutter and my whole body spin. Yet, I am still.

When will it end?

I can hear the steady rhythm of my beating head.

It consumes my senses as I wonder ‘What are these stringy things on my head?’

I lower the weight, blocking out the marching lights.

It’s so cold.

It tingles my senses, pulling me out of the realm only half way.

I squeeze my eyes shut.

No.

The marching is still there. I am falling once more.

My mind goes numb as I fall further.

I feel blood rushing like a dam just broke in my head.

My eyes blink.

The marching lights are gone.

The dimension has closed up.

All that is left is the steady beat of my head.

You’re in front of me. I can hear you clearly again.


Just to let readers know, I have Alice in Wonderland Syndrome. What I'm describing here is what I expirence in my migraine. This happens to be my very first painful experience.

The title relates back to the scene when the cards are marching towards Alice.

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© 10/1/09 Nicole Pierce



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