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Crystal the Angelhog
Author of 2 Stories

Rated: T - English - General - Published: 11-08-09 - id:5497679

Star Fox New divide

Chapter one: Mystic O’Donnell

Disclaimer on star fox characters excepted Mystic, Rain, Comet, Aurora and other names that are not part of star fox.

A Red fox from the planet Corneria, named Fox McCloud, sat in his chair in the great fox, playing his IPod he lesion to Linkin Park ‘In the end’. When out of nowhere a flash came across his eyes, Fox jumped up and ran to the window see a black and purple ship. Inside it looked like a grey wolf. The wolf made the black and purple ship barrel roll to the side of the Great fox. Fox ran to the communication link and contacted the wolf.

An image of the wolf came on screen. The wolf as a she-wolf, her eyes were just like Wolf O’Donnell’s, also her fur, the only thing different was that she had hair that was purple. She wore a black and yellow jacket over an orange tube top and blue jeans.

What took you so long to call McCloud?” the she-wolf asked

“How do you know I’m a McCloud?” Fox asked

Because there are only six McCloud’s and only two are guys.” The she-wolf said

“So what do you want she-wolf?” Fox asked

I need assistance on saving a little Fox named Rain.” The she-wolf said

Fox gasped when he heard the name Rain. The black and purple ship barrel roll to the other side of the ship, As Fox tried to think of something to say in response.

Oh by the way My Name is Mystic. And I’ll be on Sauria.” Mystic said

The black and purple ship flew off to the planet Sauria. Fox could not believe that the she-wolf asked for help. Fox stood their for a moment thinking of the girl named Rain. Fox closed his eyes and let a silent tear fall. Fox then turned on the over head speakers.

“All member’s of Star Fox on to the main deck now.” Fox said

After a few moments Falco Lombardi, the blue and red falcon, Krystal McCloud, the blue and white vixen, Marcus McCloud, Blue and White fox, Slippy, the green toad, and Peppy, the gray hare, stood in the main deck with Fox.

“So Fox what’s the problem?” Falco asked

“I’m going to Sauria to help a she-wolf to save a girl name Rain.” Fox said

Krystal gasped which made everyone look at her.

“Rain… Rain as in Lunirainos, the girl we meet year ago?” Krystal asked

“Maybe the same Rain but I need to help this she-wolf save this girl.” Fox said

"You are not going alone." Falco said

"I volunteer father." Marcus said

Fox nodded and Falco also volunteer as well before they got in their arwings Krystal pulled Fox aside.

"Fox if you find Rain she'll call you Daddy and you would have to tell Falco and Marcus." Krystal said

"I know but I need to find our daughter she might be in grave danger." Fox said

After kissing Krystal on the top of her head fox walked to the arwing hanger.

"I'll bring her home Krystal, I promise." Fox said

As Fox waked to the hanger a memory came to Fox on his three daughters he had to give up.

In Krystal's arms were three triplet girls each looking a little like Fox and Krystal. One was a light brown fox with blue hair, another was a blue fox with red hair, and the last one was a brown fox with purple hair.

"Fox we have girls now besides Marcus." Krystal said with enjoyment

Marcus, age 5 walked in and looked at his three sisters.

"Im a big brother now." Marcus said

A pounding on the door made Fox look away from his three daughters, wife and son to see who was at the door. Fox opened it to find a gun at point blank range. In the door way stood Wolf O'Donnell.

"Hello Pup." Wolf said

Panther slamed his arm into Fox making him pass out. When Fox woke up he saw Krystal holding Marcus and the one girl with blue hair. Fox ran over to his wife to see she was crying.

"Wolf took Comet and Aurora. He took our baby's." Krystal said

Fox looked at his only daughter and sighed

"Then Rain should be placed some where safe from Wolf." Fox said

"My family will watch her." Krystal said

Fox stoped and let a tear fall once again

"I will save our Daughter." He said walking to his arwing

Meanwhile on the plant Sauria Mystic ran from a Redeye. Mystic shot her blaster at the beast until the beast tried to stomp on her. Mystic rolled out of the way when a object went across her stomach. Mystic looked over to see an Orange bear with a red scar over his cold yellow eye while the other eye was hidden in Shadows

"It's you." Mystic said

"Good to see you too Mystic." The bear said

Mystic shot her blaster at the bear nicking the corner of the bear's ear. The bear laugh.

"Good to see you still hate me Mystic." The bear said

"What are you doing here Apep?" Mystic said

Apep eye stayed on Mystic, Almost as if trying to figure out what to say. Mystic closed her eyes and remembered the words the old women at the hut taught her.

"Brindo unst los tango Medo. (Fire storm of the sky)" Mystic said

Fire came down and struck Apep making him fly back onto the Redeye. Mystic got up and ran back to her Black rose.

"At least that will slow them down." she thought

After running for quite some time mystic dropped down to her knees and looked at the Injure Apep gave her. Her whole world started to spin until with a flop Mystic fell to the ground watching blackness take her over.

Mystic then started to dream.

"Mother Wolf and Kyro are fighting again." Mystic said To a white and purple wolf

"All right I'm coming." She said

Mystic ran back and saw Wolf had Kyro in a head lock.

"Stop it!" Mystic screamed

Mystic grabbed wolf by the back and pulled him away only to be slashed in the back by wolf.

"What have I done?" Wolf asked

Wolf ran out of the house and was never seen again. Kyro grabbed his sister and held her close.

"Damn you Wolf." Kyro said

Years past and Mystic held on to a little cat named Lemonade and her sister Be-Dena when she ran into a light brown fox with blue hair.

"Who are you?" Mystic asked

"I was about to asked you the same thing." the Fox said

Mystic pulled out her blaster and the fox place a staff to her neck. Mystic laughed.

"You think your pathetic stick will help you?" Mystic asked

"I am more deadly then I appear to be." the Fox said

"I like you kid My name is Mystic O'Donnell." Mystic said

"I'm Rain McCloud."Rain said

Rain to Mystic how she was looking for her twin sister's Comet and Aurora.

"How about I help you?" Mystic asked

"Would you? I could use the help." Rain said

"Sure and Lemonade and Be-Dena will help too." Mystic said

"Thank you." Rain said giving Mystic a hug

"No problem." Mystic said

Meanwhile Fox, Marcus, and Falco had landed next to a black and purple ship. Fox gasp when he saw the same ship he saw earlier.

"That's Mystic's ship. She's here." Fox said

Falco looked around and did not see this so called she-wolf.

"I bet she set a trap up for us." Falco said crossing his arms over his chest.

Fox ignored him and saw Marcus run to the forest.

"I'll go ahead Father." Marcus said over his shoulder

"Marcus Wait." Fox said

Marcus did not want to hear his father and Falco fight. Marcus just wanted to find this she-wolf to help her out. Marcus stopped to see a grey and white wolf, with purple hair. Turning the She-wolf over Marcus saw she had a wound across her stomach, Marcus pulled off his jacket and wrapped it around her. Marcus picked her up and walked right back to find Fox and Falco fighting still.

"Hey dad is this the she-wolf you talked to?" Marcus asked

Fox turned to see Marcus holding the she-wolf.

"Yep that's Mystic alright." Fox said

Mystic started to grunt as she rubbed her head. Marcus set her down as she opened her eyes.

"Damn Apep." Mystic said

"Who?" Marcus asked

Mystic looked at him, then at Falco, Then Fox and back to Marcus.

"Are you all members of Star Fox?" Mystic asked

They all nodded, Mystic sighed and then set her head on the ground.

"May I rest a little before I tell you all I know?" Mystic asked

"Yha just a quick Q and A, what is your last name?" Falco asked

"My last name is O'Donnell." Mystic said

Closing her eyes Mystic fell asleep. Marcus placed Mystic's head on his lap as she slept. Marcus thought that O'Donnell's were evil but Mystic was different she was nicer then wolf.

"I'm not going to trust her now." Falco said

"Let's hear her out when she wake's up after she rests up." Fox said

Mystic took a deep breath in.

"Rain I promise I'll find you soon." Mystic thought


R+R please



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