Author: Minerva Rapter PM
This is a work in progress. I would like advice, critiques, perceptions on how to make this piece better.Rated: Fiction K+ - English - Friendship/Romance - Words: 591 - Reviews: 7 - Published: 11-22-09 - id: 5528520
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Everyone has a personal ad but some of us are not sure of what we actually want. I mean we have a complete list of criteria's that our perfect match should adhere to. However, over time we grow and we change. My friend, Lisa, always knew what she wanted. She wanted to marry a rich guy with good hair, taller than her, intelligent, funny, sophisticated, and powerful. She's one of the few girls in this world that actually get everything they ever wanted. Of course, she's a complete princess but I still love her. We had met at an orphanage in New York in 1972. It was the worst thirteen years of our lives. We both had been abandoned by our parents and we had nobody but ourselves. We were both five years old when we were emitted into St. Claire Orphanage located in Queens.
I met Lisa when I was eight years old. I had gone to clean my clothes at the local Laundromat and as I finished loading my clothes into the washer I realized that I had not eaten all day. I didn't have much money to go and buy myself something good to eat. I hated the food that they served us at the orphanage. They always served us the same thing; smashed potatoes or oatmeal and milk. I couldn't take it anymore! I wanted a nice big juicy burger so bad. So, there I was looking at my stomach as it loudly growled to be fed. I turned to see if my clothes were ready and there she was with a big juicy burger in her hand. I guess she saw the ravenous expression on my face.
"Would you like a piece?" she asked. "Its way to big for me and I has hoping to share with someone."
"I guess I could have a bite," I responded. She tore the burger in half and handed me a half. It was hot and juicy. As I bit into it my mouth exploded with flavor. I never thought something could ever taste so good. I thought I was in heaven. I savored every bite because I knew this would be my only meal for the day and I licked every single drop of ketchup off my fingers.
"My name is Lisa, by the way" she said. "What's your name?"
"Jessica" I responded. "Thank you for sharing your burger with me. You don't know how much it means….." my voice trailed off. I didn't want to seem needy. I had prided myself on being self-sufficient.
"I know exactly what you mean. I had to save for weeks so that I could buy it." Lisa exclaimed. "I've seen you around at St. Claire but always too shy to say hi"
"You're at St. Claire?" I asked. "I've never seen you. Wow." Who would have thought that I would become friends with the future Lisa Bordet? At 21 she would have married a real estate tycoon and run a successful multi-billion dollar business. At just nine years of age she knew what she wanted but never imagined it would be so magnificent. I didn't have her ambition because I was just trying to get by another day. I didn't know it then but Lisa would change my life entirely. We would embark on a journey that would take us from rags to riches just because there was more to life than just to live.