|Sonic's Ninja Adventure REWRITE
Author: sonicnarutoartist PM
Plot: Sonic uses Chaos Control to beat Eggman and ends up in Naruto's world. Now it's up to Sonic and Naruto to find the seven emeralds before Dr. Eggman does but what is Eggman's true goal? RE-WRITERated: Fiction K+ - English - Adventure - Sonic - Chapters: 19 - Words: 11,859 - Reviews: 9 - Favs: 20 - Follows: 5 - Updated: 01-28-10 - Published: 11-25-09 - Status: Complete - id: 5534982
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I do not own Naruto or Sonic The Hedgehog
Normal Speak/ Narrative
Some ones thoughts
Action words like bam!
A Setting/POV change
Sonic's Ninja Adventure Re-Write
Sonic The Hedgehog was beaten battered and weary He couldn't feel his leg. Eggman finally got the seven emeralds and revenge was inevitable
" HO HO HO HO HO HO HO HO HO" Taunted Eggman " Well, Well, Sonic this is checkmate"
Sonic thought as fast as he was " Yea for you CHAOS…"
" Sonic stop if you do that there's no telling what will happen"
A great flash engulfed them. Then they both disappeared.
In a near by forest
Sonic appeared next to the tree " Where the heck am I? This isn't Eggman's base so that means" Sonic looked around at the forest he was now in " I did it guys"
In the distance two voices can be heard one male and one female
"Hey Sakura look what I found" said the male. He looked arund for the female till he came to one conclusion.
" Well what ever it is it needs help lets take it to the hospital" Sonic finally drifted to unconsciousness
1. If at first you don't succeed yada yada