|FOR PLANET STAR!
Author: ChipmunksChipettes4Ever PM
PLEASE READ! When the chipmunks and chipettes are taken to a place called Planet Star to defend the planet from oncoming evil what will happen? Emotions will be played with, feelings will be tested, and love will be found. Great adventure!*Being RewrittenRated: Fiction K+ - English - Romance/Adventure - Chapters: 7 - Words: 34,821 - Reviews: 45 - Favs: 10 - Follows: 2 - Updated: 07-10-10 - Published: 02-09-10 - id: 5732197
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Okay, what do you guys want me to do to apologize for the wait! I'm sooooooo sorry. :(
But my parents kept kicking me off the computer! It was all you need your "exercise." And the computer will "rot your brain." *sigh* Parents huh? Sometimes they just don't get us.
Anyway, don't expect a lot out of this chapter. It's just not as good as it was in my head. And don't be mad, but I'm splitting this chapter in half so it will be shorter than it would have been. *Dodges chair*
I'm sorry! It's just, I have a lot going on! Please understand!
Anyway, enjoy what you can of this chapter!
Chapter 7: Boys vs Girls: Battle of the Powers! Part 1
"Told you we'd beat you!" Celene yelled back to the chipmunks and chipettes as she and the other five landed.
Seconds later the chipmunks and chipettes landed beside them panting.
"That's only because we crashed into that tree" Brittany panted. "It looked like a shadow"
"That's no excuse" Celene teased. "We didn't crash"
"Yeah, how did you do that?" Simon asked. "It's like you knew the whole forest"
"Well, we do" Felicia said simply.
"How? We've only been here a day" Eleanor said.
"We'll explain tomorrow" Kayla said as Felicia yawned. "Right now, I think we're all pretty tired"
"Yeah, let's get some sleep" Alvin agreed as everyone walked into the cave.
"Oh no, where are you going to sleep" Jeanette said. "We only have our six beenbags"
"We don't mind sleeping on the floor" Cody said. "We were going to if we hadn't met you anyway"
"Are you sure?" Theodore asked.
"Yeah, it's no problem" Brandon said.
"Alright, night everyone" Brittany said as the chipmunks and chipettes layed in their beenbags and the other six got comfortable on the floor.
Everyone was starting to relax when...
"Hello warriors of Planet Star" Jewls said from the the screen.
The chipmunks and chipettes groaned. "Hey Jewls" they said.
"Are the other six with you?" Jewls asked.
"Present" Celene said sleepily.
Jewls smiled. "So I guess your mission was-"
"Mission accomplished" all twelve interrupted her before they passed out.
"So I'm guessing your all tired" Jewls said.
"Okay..." Jewls said. "See you in the morning"
With that, the screen went black.
The next morning, the chipmunks and chipettes surrounded the other six. Celene was the first to wake up. She opened her eyes to see the chipmunks and chipettes around them.
"Ah!" she squeaked in surprise to the six just standing over them.
The other five were startled awake.
"What are you guys doing?" Tyler asked.
"What's your story" Alvin asked.
The twelve were now sitting in a circle.
"Okay" Celene started. "We weren't summoned here like you, we were already here"
"What do you mean?" Eleanor asked.
"We were born here" Celene stated.
"You were born on Planet Star?" Simon said interested.
"Yes, we have spent our whole lives here" Celene said.
"So you already had your powers?" Brittany asked. (Wow! Rapid fire questions!)
"No" Kayla stepped in. "You see, the thing is we were born on this planet as regular chipmunks. No powers, no Evil, no nothing. Just a regular childhood"
"Yeah, and when we found out it was being controlled by Evil, it broke our hearts" Felicia said.
"So are things here just like Earth?" Theodore asked.
"Actually we've never been to Earth" Cody said. "But we know for a fact that we don't get all the things that you do"
"What does that mean?" Jeanette asked.
"Well" Tyler started. "There are some things that Earth people can feel, and we can't"
"That we don't really know" Brandon added thoughtfully.
"Well" Eleanor started. "What don't you-"
"Hey Warriors!" Jewls said as she popped up on the screen.
The twelve gasped at her sudden appearance. "Hey Jewls" they said.
"You know, I think I'll just start calling you by your regular names" Jewls said. "Warriors just doesn't feel right"
The group nodded.
"Alright, so anyway, today marks the day of your first major battle against the most powerful people on this planet" Jewls continued.
"What!" Brittany yelled.
"We just got our powers yesterday" Celene added.
"Yourselves" Jewls said like she didn't hear them.
"Ourselfs?" Jeanette asked.
"That's right Jeanette" Jewls said. "Or at least, it will kind of be against yourselves" she said getting herself slightly confused. "I'll be right over so I can explain it to you"
With that, the screen went black.
"Speaking of powers" Alvin said. "Which ones do you guys have?"
"Oh yeah" Celene said. "Well, I'm wind"
"Really?" Brittany asked. "We are too" she said pointing to her and Jeanette.
"Seriously?" Celene said just as surprised. "I thought I was the only one with that power"
"What about you Kayla?" Eleanor asked.
"Oh, I'm light" Kayla said. "But I doubt anyone has that power"
"Your right" Jeanette said. "Well that must mean it's really unique."
"I guess we'll see" Kayla said sighing.
"Well I'm fire" Felicia said. "And so is Cody" she said taking Cody's hand. Cody felt something kind of flutter inside, but he didn't really know what.
"Hey cool, I am too" Alvin said grinning.
"All of you have those cool powers, but get this, I'm darkness" Brandon said. "I didn't even know that darkness is something you can control."
"Well, I'm sure you could find some way if it was given to you" Simon said.
"Yeah, I guess" Brandon muttered.
"I'm Earth" Tyler said.
"Me and Theo are too!" Eleanor said excitedly looking at Theodore.
Theodore smiled. "Wow, what are the odds" he said happily.
"What are you Simon?" Felicia asked.
"Oh, I am water" Simon said.
"Really? Oh that would be such an awesome power to have" Felicia said. "Your so lucky."
Simon smiled. He actually didn't think that water was a good power to have, but now he was kind of proud to have it.
Suddenly, a low rumbling was heard as the side of the cave began to vibrate.
"Oh no, not again" Eleanor said.
"Bring it on beary!" Brandon said as everyone stood up and braced themselves.
The side of the cave wall lifted up only to reveal Jewls.
"Hey guys!" she called as she walked in.
"...Oh" Celene said as everyone put their guard down.
"Yeah it's just me" Jewls laughed. "But it's good to know your prepared." "So today, it will be girls versus boys" she continued. "You will be fighting yourselves to prepare for real battle"
"Uh, where are we going to have the fight?" Celene questioned. From what everyone could tell, there wasn't a place large enough for that.
Jewls smiled as a bright beam came down and surrounded the twelve. The next thing they knew, they were on what looked to be a battlefield. It was HUGE! About the length and width of six football fields put together, horizontally and vertically.
It was a plain field of soft green grass. However, tall idols of stone poked out of the ground about thirty feet high. And along the whole perimeter of the field, there were caves of stone. Some were one ground level, then there were stone stairs and rope ladders to get to the ones that were much higher up. (Even though they could fly) There was a soft breeze in the air.
The girls were on one end of the field, and the boys were on the other. Jewls appeared beside one of the higher caves.
"Now the rules are simple" she yelled. Her voice echoed all across the field. Nobody had a problem hearing her. "You have to capture the ball of Evil to win" she explained pointing to the center of the field where a glowing and floating black orb appeared. "We're going to see which team can capture it first okay."
"Once you capture the ball of Evil, you must destroy it" Jewls continued. "You can use any of your powers, and you may be surprised by the kind of power you have" she said. "If you don't try, it won't work. Does everybody understand?"
"Yep!" Everyone chorused.
"Oh, and one more thing" Jewls said. "Watch out for the ball of Evil" she said.
Everyone was slightly confused by what she meant. "Uh..."
"Go!" Jewls cried.
Everyone just let it go and took off running. Felicia swung her hand straight in front of her, and a fire wall appeared right in front of the boys. It was high, so they couldn't fly over it even if they wanted to.
"Whoa!" Celene yelled as they all stopped. "How did you do that?"
"I have no idea" Felicia said as she looked at her hand.
"Come on, I see the ball of Evil" Brittany said pointing down the center of the field. The girls decided not to run and they flew towards the orb.
"This is gonna be too easy" Kayla said.
"What now?" Alvin asked as the boys stared up at the wall.
Simon looked at his hands. "Maybe I could do something" he thought. He swept his hands to the right, and a sheet of ice swept of the fire wall. The weight was too heavy as it fell towards the girls.
"...That'll work" Brandon said as they got on saucers and flew towards the orb.
Believe it or not, the girls were just now noticing the thousand ton sheet of ice about to crush them. "Look out!" Eleanor screamed as they all stopped in their tracks.
The sheet of ice literally fell two feet from them. The force rattled the ground and knocked them off their feet.
Once they got to their feet, the girls glared at the boys. "You realize that could of killed us!" Kayla yelled.
"Sorry!" Tyler yelled back as they got closer to the orb. "But Jewls said if we don't try, it won't work."
Kayla glared as she reached towards the sun. It appeared that she grabbed a ray from the sun. "Let's see how you like being blinded!" she yelled towards the boys, who looked up just in time to be temporarily blinded by the ray. They fell of their saucers.
The girls climbed up onto the thick sheet of ice and started to run the rest of the way towards the orb. They were just about to grab it when it flew up towards Jewls and into one of the upper caves.
The girls held out their arms. "What are you doing?" Jeanette yelled up to her.
Jewls held up her hands in defense. "Don't look at me" she said. "Evil can do whatever it wants"
The girls sighed.
They flew into the upper cave and began their search for the orb.
"Kayla, a little light please" Celene said once she realized it was pitch black in there.
Kayla held her hand out in front of her as a bright yellow light glowed from it. They began to walk through the cave.
"Here orbie orbie orbie" Brittany called down the cave. "Come here you little ball of Evil"
"Brittany" Eleanor said looking at her sister like she was crazy.
"It's not a dog!" Eleanor yelled. Her voice echoed off the walls of the cave.
Brittany was about to say something back when Jeanette cut her off. "Hey, what's that?" she said pointing to a jagged rock a little further down the cave.
"It looks like some thing's glowing underneath that rock" Felicia said as she started to walk towards it.
"Be careful" Celene warned her sister as she got closer. Felicia bent down and tried to push the rock out of the way. It didn't budge.
"It's...not...moving" Felicia said as she struggled.
The other five joined her in trying to move it, but failed. "Wow, it's really stuck" Celene said as she dusted off her skirt.
"You think?" Kayla said sarcastically. "Hey!" she said suddenly thinking of something.
Her sudden outburst made the other girls jump. "What is it?" Brittany asked.
"You, Jeanette, and Celene have the power of wind right?" Kayla asked.
Brittany looked at Celene and Jeanette and shrugged. "Yeah so?" she said.
"So" Kayla said stressing the word. "Maybe you guys can move the rock"
"...KK, I'm not really sure that wind can move a rock like that" Celene said pointing to the boulder that was still glowing underneath. (KK is Kayla's nickname)
"Well Jewls said you'd be surprised by what you can do, plus there's three of you" Kayla explained.
"It might be worth a shot" Celene said thinking about it.
"Uh, I don't know" Jeanette said, not very sure.
"Alright, so we'll just sit here and wait for the guys to come and beat us" Brittany said knowing this would get Jeanette to do it.
Jeanette looked back at the cave opening, knowing that the chipmunks could come any second. She sighed. "Alright" she said.
"Okay! Let's give it a try" Brittany said standing in front of the rock.
"Um, what are we supposed to do exactly?" Jeanette said joining her sister.
"I'm not sure I guess...feel it...I think" Celene said unsurely.
"Okay let's try that" Brittany said.
The girls took a deep breath and closed their eyes. Wind began to blow throughout the cave. Gently at fist, then it really started to pick up.
Kayla, Eleanor, and Felicia backed up a little bit, slightly scared. By now, it felt like a tornado was blowing through the cave.
"Are you sure they know what their doing!" Eleanor yelled over the wind.
"No!" Kayla yelled back.
"Oh..." Eleanor said. "Well that helps!"
Finally Jeanette, Brittany, and Kayla pushed their hands forward and the rock flew off the ground and crashed hard into the wall. Pieces of hard rock hit the girls.
"We did it!" Celene said opening her eyes.
"Yeah...you did it" Felicia said as she tried to recover from a huge piece of rock hitting her in the stomach.
"And there's the ball of Evil" Jeanette said pointing to the spot where the rock was.
And sure enough, there was the glowing black orb. Brittany walked over to it and bent down. Just as she was about to grab it, it flew to the other side of the cave.
"Hey!" Brittany said standing up.
Kayla bent down and tried to grab it, but it flew to the middle of the cave. When Jeanette tried to get it, it flew to the top.
"This thing is messing with us" Celene said as she flew to the top of the cave. She tried to snatch it out of the air, but it flew back down to the right of the cave.
So now, the girls were chasing the ball all around the cave, but could never seem to get it.
"Got it!" Brittany announced as she jumped out from behind a rock and landed right on top of the ball.
"Good now let's destroy it" Kayla said as the other five surrounded her.
"Wait" Eleanor said. "What's that sound?"
"It sounds like somethings buzzing" Jeanette said as she listened.
"It-it's the ball" Brittany said as she looked at it. "It's vibrating."
Without warning, the ball had sort of a mini-explosion. It blew Brittany, Jeanette, Celene, Kayla, and Felicia right of the cave. They crashed into the boys.
"It took you guys long enough" Celene said as everyone stood up and dusted themselves off.
"Where's Eleanor?" Theodore asked.
"Still in the cave" Brittany responded. "And once we get back in there and destroy the ball of Evil, we'll win."
"I don't think you guys will be going anywhere" Brandon said.
"Oh, and why not" Kayla asked. Brandon pointed down towards their feet.
Plants and vines were growing out of the ground and wrapping themselves around the girls' waists, legs, and arms.
"How did we not notice this" Brittany said as she made an attempt to move, but failed.
"You did this Tyler?" Felicia asked as she tried to move.
"Nope" Tyler shook his head and pointed to Theodore. "Theo did."
"Theodore?" the girls said in surprise.
Theodore smiled sheepishly. "Sorry" he shrugged.
"Well we've got a battle to win" Alvin said. "See ya."
With that, the guys ran into the cave. "How could you turn on us Theo!" Brittany called after them.
Eleanor stood up in the back of the cave. She had got blasted back. "Oh, my head." she groaned rubbing her head.
That's when she spotted the ball of Evil in the middle of the cave. "Hey, it's still here" she smiled as she began to walk towards it. She stopped when she heard footsteps.
"Brittany? Jeanette? Is that you?" she called. When she didn't get an answer she decided to wait and see who it was. That's when she saw the guys round the corner.
She gasped and ducked behind a rock. Even though they were her friends, they'd probably open fire on her if they saw her. The Sevilles would do almost anything to win. Especially Alvin.
"Hey I see the orb" Cody announced walking towards it. Eleanor knew she had to do something. If the others girls hadn't come back yet, then they must have been stuck somewhere.
"Please don't let trying to fight six boys at once backfire on me" Eleanor prayed.
She took a deep breath and placed the palm of her hand on the ground. The ground started to shake. It was a low rumbling at first, but then it felt like an earthquake was occuring.
Of coruse, the guys got knocked off their feet. Eleanor removed her hand from the ground. The shaking stopped. She drew in a breath before she pushed both her hands towards the boys. Huge rocks cave flying towards them.
"Take cover!" she heard one of them shout.
She smirked and rolled her eyes before she got up and stepped out into view.
Back with the other five girls.
"Britt, there is no point in struggling anymore" Jeanette said.
"Yes there is" Brittany said as she continued to wiggle. "We have got to get out of this and help Ellie. The guys will probably destroy her."
"Come on, Ellie's stronger than she looks" Felicia said. "I'm sure she'll be fine."
"But we can't just sit here and let her do all the work" Brittany tried again. "We've got to get out of this." she repeated.
Brittany started to rock her body from side to side. "Britt, I don't think you should do that" Jeanette said.
Brittany ignored her and kept moving from left to right. "Brittany seriously" Celene said as she heard one of the vines snap.
Brittany kept going. "We're on the edge Brittany, I don't think-" But it was too late, some of the vines broke and sinse they were connected, all five girls dropped over the edge.
Well, sort of. The vines didn't break all the way. So the girls were just dangling upside down over the edge.
"We've got to get out of this." Celene finally said.
"Oh now you want to" Brittany said.
Back with the guys and Eleanor.
The cave was charred, wet, and the earth was crumpled. Eleanor smiled, walked to the center of the cave, and picked up the ball of Evil.
"Thanks for the practice guys" she called before she walked to the entrance of the cave.
"She definitely is better than she looks" Simon said from his spot on the floor.
"Mmhmm" were the muffled replies from the rest of the guys.
"Ellie you got it!" Brittany said throwing her arms around her sister.
"Yeah, but were were you guys?" Eleanor asked.
"Oh, Theodore tied us up with plants, then Brittany got us dangling over the edge, so we cut ourselves free with our swords" Felicia explained.
"Okay" Eleanor said. "So now we can destroy this thing."
Everyone gathered around and got ready to fire at it or something. Then it flew out of Eleanor's hands and all the way down to the right end of the field. The girls sighed.
"Dang it!" Kayla said stomping her foot. They were about to fly after it when they felt like they were sinking.
They looked down to see they were standing in quick sand. "What the?"
They looked up to see Tyler bring his hand back down. The other five were standing beside him.
"Tyler!" Celene said as she tried to struggle. But it only made her sink faster.
"Sorry guys" he said as he got on his saucer along with everyone else. "But we have got to end this."
Without saying anything else, they began to fly towards the orb.
"Oh no" Eleanor said as they kept sinking.
"Well it looks like we lost" Felicia said as she made one last attempt to move, but failed miserably.
"Not necessarily." Brittany said trying to think of something.
"Well what else can we do?" Jeanette asked.
"I don't know" Brittany confessed. "But it's not over until the fat lady sings."
"I think I hear her" Celene said sarcastically.
Brittany glared at her. Eleanor sighed and looked over. She saw a vine that was still okay from when Theodore had tied them up.
"Hey!" she said suddenly getting an idea. "I've got an idea!"
*Dodges table* Please don't kill me! Please don't kill me!
I know, I know. I make you wait for almost a month, then give you this short little piece of CRAP!
I am extremely sorry that this is all I have. But for this particular story, I have THE WORST case of writers block!
I don't know why, but as a fellow writer, please understand me!
On the bright side, I'm halfway through the next chapter. So I'll really try to give it up!
Once again, SO SORRY!
But please review anyway.
Thanks again. :) I'll see you soon. I promise.