|I see you
Author: Peytiejade123 PM
A girl is victim of a car crash when she is 14 years old and she goes into a coma. She wakes up 3 years later to find that everybody she knows has changed. But that isn't the strangest thing that has happened...Rated: Fiction T - English - Supernatural/Hurt/Comfort - Chapters: 2 - Words: 1,155 - Reviews: 2 - Published: 02-23-10 - id: 5770165
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I can still remember what it was like... before... I can't lie and say that it was a particularly good part of my life, but I'm glad it's still there in my somewhat desecrated memory. Life was pretty simple, but it worked. I was happy... and that's all my mom and dad cared about. Everything in my life was going well, until August 14th, 2004- the day of the accident that changed my life forever.
I would write about that day if I could, but to be honest, I can't even remember... The only thing I do remember is just before the car crash. I remember seeing something in the field to the right of us, just down the road.....................then.........a deer ran into the middle of the road before we had time to stop........................"MOM! WATCH OUT!" I screamed..... In panic, Mom grabs the steering wheel of the car and swerves it out of the way of the deer. The car spins and goes front first into a tree........... Then everything went black.
As you can see, this is only the prologue of an unnamed story I started to write. I was thinking of continuing, but I figured I'd see if it was worth it- please leave a comment/review on what you think, or any suggestions for improvement.